good and bad FB... felt really disjointed for me. timing was off (focus pulling, jump cuts) and i'm not sure i understood your editing decisions at all. didn't connect with main character in that i didn't understand his purpose. ad for fedex? music vid? point a to point b w/filler? sound was also kinda weird; what software did you use?
gorgeous locale! nice trucking, moments of great cinematography. curious about your storyboarding.
Well thanks for taking the time to comment, its nice to get other peoples views. When uploading i think its has lost sync, explaining why it is a bit disjointed.
I realised after making it that, many people didn't understand the purpose.
It was meant to tell the story off this broken down guy, who has nothing left to live for, finds this parcel and sets himself the goal to deliver the parcel. I honestly don't think that it came it in the "music video" which is a shame.
Ha Whinlatter.
BlackIsaac 1 year ago
good film work. neat
purelivingmusic 2 years ago
"ahh c'mon, whaaat's in the boxxxx..." ;)
good and bad FB... felt really disjointed for me. timing was off (focus pulling, jump cuts) and i'm not sure i understood your editing decisions at all. didn't connect with main character in that i didn't understand his purpose. ad for fedex? music vid? point a to point b w/filler? sound was also kinda weird; what software did you use?
gorgeous locale! nice trucking, moments of great cinematography. curious about your storyboarding.
leon1wheelhouse 2 years ago
Well thanks for taking the time to comment, its nice to get other peoples views. When uploading i think its has lost sync, explaining why it is a bit disjointed.
I realised after making it that, many people didn't understand the purpose.
It was meant to tell the story off this broken down guy, who has nothing left to live for, finds this parcel and sets himself the goal to deliver the parcel. I honestly don't think that it came it in the "music video" which is a shame.
We edited on Avid :)
Griffin2914 2 years ago
that tone at the beginning was brutal, turn that down and repost.
nickd444 2 years ago 7
@nickd444 Indeed. I think I'm deaf.
fbsfbs1 1 year ago
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matthew2774 2 years ago