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  • i don't get it and why in FORGE!!!!

  • I...will...shoot you

  • That sucked Ballsack. He said I'll brb I gotta go pee. And then like ten minutes later he went... FAIL

  • Ever notice how Rated M is starting to stand for MBIFM-Mommy Bought it for me? Rated M games are 17+ Retard, go back to arcade games, if not get off Psn/Xbl cause its not a place for kids, go back to E10+ Games

  • @ControllerFestGames hey dude thats not exactly fair ive play them since i was thirteen and i was never stupid about it

  • @WaffleWarriorzND1 Bullshit, it also took you a month to reply -_-

  • @ControllerFestGames dude i just saw this video

  • @WaffleWarriorzND1 Hmm you say "dude" alot, you have no uploads, also only kids say dude. and dude you have no vids at least i have some Dude

  • @ControllerFestGames why does it matter? im sixteen i dont care about how much i use a word. and i dont really record videos so thats why i dont upload sooner or later ill probably upload one though

  • @WaffleWarriorzND1 Problem Replying? Blocked

  • @ControllerFestGames wat the fuck? wat is with you?

  • @ControllerFestGames haha ok looked at your profile. you dont have a kid your twenty two you just a lame ass troll looking for attention

  • Grow some balls then come back kid thump up if you agree

  • The only thing that bugged me was the little kid voices on full grown super-soldiers :\ Other than that, not bad :)

  • Good for a first try i've seen way worse

  • 22.once ur out of gas, srry dude time to leave the porsche behind, or th lambo, or watever u stole cuz ther will be more. dont look for gas, and dont stay in th car!!!

    23.if u have a horse, take it! its better thn th car. oh and u have a metal welder or somthin, and a car, make it bullet proof cuz u never wat crazy ur gonna meet. plus u get to hit shit, and not total it.

    24.have multible zombie plans

    25.find a military base or police station, grab th guns and go these r statements and rules

  • 18.ur friend goes to takes a piss, wat do u do? wait to hear a scream, and run, or just run. either one works.

    19.again, dont disobey these rules, u will dye.

    20. if ur in a car, and a hord of th undead are on ur car, FLOOR IT! FLOOR IT LIKE YOU'VE NEVER FLORED IT BEFORE!!!!! THN HIT TH BRAKES, once u have done tht, just floor it again......panit th streets a nice color :)

    21. if u take time to read these at th last second, congrats ur dead. not a rule just a statement.

    last set continued...

  • 14. DONT, AND I MEAN DONT, DO WAT THESE KIDS DID!

    15. IF SOMEONE IS MISSING, and ther are no zombies around tht u see, but u heard somthin tht didnt sound nice.........mourn for ur friends death later, get out now!

    16. if u watch ur friend die throught a glass door, or some metal bars, die....just remember its not ur falt, and if it is, u did wat had to be done. im srry its th truth.

    17.if someone is lookin sick, or thy got scratched by anything including paper.....always keep an eye on thm.

  • 10. NEVER, AND I MEAN NEVER DITCH UR FRIENDS!!!! thy make great make distractions while u get th hell out of ther.

    11. if u dont a shotgun, get a rifle, alot of bullets, and make thm count

    12. if ur not goin to alaska or somthing, find a great place to hide, like walmart (i dont know, i have my plan) if thers a zombie ther, take it out with th 2nd necessity of zombie plans......a shovel!! nice and silent as possible.

    13.follow these to th capital Z or u will die! rules are continued...

  • 6.if ur in a large group of people, make sure u race everyone of thm so u know who to run in front of if found by zombies.

    7.keep running in front of thm, even if ther being eaten, scratch tht, especialy if ther being eaten!

    8.if thy havnt been bit yet nd thy dont have a gun, DONT GO BACK!!! thy should have listened to everyone wen thy asked if thy had a plan, th shotgun is reserved for u.

    9.i cant stress enough wen i say sleep with ur gun, i mean literaly put it under ur pillow (saftey on)..

  • ther is a reason y its called a zombie plan...........cuz ther r zombies! here r some rules to help u form a plan. 1. always have a shotgun in an accessible area. 2. make sure u stick with th fat people, more surface area stops more zombies. 3. if u go anywhere out-of -ight, let me tell u now, ur out-of-mind. we will not look for u. 4. have a good lady, to uhhhh, repopulate the planet with. 5. if lady friend gets bit....thers a reason y i said to bring a shot gun. rules r cont.

  • this sux.

  • slider and what was it viagra ? hahahah cool vid

  • a good zombie plan is to get a boat and sail into the middle of the ocean then you can just live of fish and water because zombies cant swim now thats a good zombie plan

  • This video could've been ALOT better if you just did 3 simple things differently

    1) You REALY need to record sound in a closed room where you can be close to the mic

    2)change the camera angle. in video editing there is a rule of 8, which mans that no shot SHOULD EVER be more than 8 seconds long

    3)switch the voices up and don't try to force information into the script

    i would like to say that this is good for a first try but it isn't the important thing is that you are trying you have potential

  • @AllMightyMeowMix + 1 to the 8 second rule it is quite rare to see it go over that it does happen with some good movies but not often

    if you make another video please follow the 8 second rule and change up camera angles would make it soo much better

  • good camera work

  • 10 seconds in.... annnndddd I'm now gay

  • u r rip off of power rangers. honestly, take some acting classes

  • this is why parents shouldnt buy their 8 year old kid a M rated game

  • Real soldiers jump in 5 feet in the air all the time... Realistic?

  • gay.

  • WTF! Guys why are you all being assholes?

    He said it was his first try...

  • @pivotmaster123654 I agree the first try ussually isnt bad or good but a "rought Draft" and I find it entertaining

  • THIS IS THE SINGLE MOST PAFETIC VIDEO I HHAVE EVER SEEN. IT WAS MADE BY 7 YEAR OLDS WHO HAVENT HIT PUBIRTY AT THE FIRST

  • Delete this video, and why is it you talk so soft. For 1 its because your parents are probably in the other room. And if your listen you can actually hear people in the background. This vid blows. GO KILL YOURSELVES YOU FAILED ABORTIONS

  • @Hyperguy876 hey you might wanna shut the fuck up u deucsh go kill your ugly ass self, your so ugly your dads not gonna even wanna fuck u ,u big nerd who sits around all day shitting in a pan so shut the hell up. there fine thell become better so shut the hell up mofucker

  • Delete this video

  • lmao, I'm sure if there was a zombie infection, I wouldn't just go walking out in the middle of no where whistling and not check my surroundings xD good first try attempt, quality wasn't the best and the forge camera moved around alot more then it should have

  • I turned off after 18 seconds

  • Hi. I'm Jeremy and I'm a zombie. I'm on YouTube to tell everyone that I'm gonna eat your BRAINZ! BBBRRRRRRAAAAAAAIIIIIIINNNNNNN­ZZZZZZZ!!!!!!! "wizzzz" Oh crap my penis was bitten off by my zombie friend. Crap. Oh well, if you sleep I'll eat your BRAINZ! Bye.

  • FAILURE!!!

  • I'm a kid too, so I won't rag on you about that. But first of all don't even try to record in video games unless you have a good T.V. for it or you have some special thing for it. Also, record voices after you make the video, I suggest saying them and in video cut out the video sounds and add new sounds

  • I was questioning the hell out of myself why I watched the whole thing and it sucks

  • sucks horribly

  • sucks horribly

  • Crap

  • fail

  • Zombies killed our friend, let's go take a nap.

  • now see, this is why you dont buy a 3 year old a capture card....

  • Liberace gay

  • you know i just remembered something from my child hood why is it someone always said hey lets ditch this guy?

  • gay x2

  • gay

  • Whats a kind playing Halo games? He's probably a noob in these games. Lets all bash him up.

  • u suck u suck u suck u suck my B%$&@

  • am i the only one who thinks if a video has more dislikes than likes it should be taken down....

  • its ok justin bieber...you tried

  • noobs think they can make video on the first try

  • @SlayingEliteTOM thats why its called a first try.

  • be better if you new the concept of good filming

  • lolz.... idk why im smiling...

  • sorry...but fail

  • i will kill myself now thx ass holes

  • OH MY GOD IT"S THE ATTACK OF THE *gasp* FIVE YEAR OLDS!

  • squikers bad video

    

  • DAMN SQUIKERS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

  • no lifes

  • wort episod ever

  • dumb fuck heads

  • Shit head get back on yo mama's tit

  • wow this kid is like a 3 year old im 11 and i can create a biography about sh1t and it would be better than this

  • ok WTF LIKE it look like u guys was not even trying

  • WTF!!!

  • U suck and this was garbage

  • would have helped if you were older the quality for a camera is actually pretty good but still would have helped if it was recorded using a capture card

  • 216 people decided to copy THIS EXACT VIDEO for their zombie plan... too late for them...

  • great!

    first let me give u a little hint.

    Get more people to talk, cause when u do it alone,

    u sound like u were just in a marathon lol.

    Keep up thy good work kid!

  • its okay for a first time video

  • i give it a score of fourty Griffs out of seventy Sarge's

  • Ah... I see u just pointed to the tv with a camera with no camera angles in mind as you just followed the characters around, with your 11 year old friends saying crap as you record. Very professional guys...

  • i like how theyr yelling and wispering at the same time....syke

  • sorry but........gay

  • you guys are ok but i reccomend trying to use a script... and maybe a local game so you can lower your weapon but that's fine. if you ever want to make another machinima just give me something to base on and i can come up with a script for ya in no time. plus not to mention a good story line. :)

  • @nemesis0778 Thats not a machinima thats a shitty video.

  • @gamelordjack same thing.

  • @nemesis0778 your calling machinima shitty? wow, what a retard.

  • @gamelordjack and here comes the name calling. here's how i see it. machinima is a home-made video that varies from game to game. it doesn't matter the quality it's just another video. while a shitty video has extremely bad acting. bad story plot, and horrible camera angles. to put it simply machinima is a video recorded in-game while a shitty video can be anything. is THIS video in-game? yes. has THIS video got a basic story plot? yes. so there. try arguing that logic.

  • @nemesis0778 Well, these kids arent one of the top hundredth subscribed channels. End of story.

  • @gamelordjack yeah they may not be top grade but they sure did try.

  • i dont mean to be an asshole, but try to do as i did at ur age and keep this with your legos

  • A tip from me i think you need to get a Capture Card off ebay because you wont

    need to use a camera and it will show everything your doing on your xbox 360.

    And secondly get a better video editor i know a good one its called sony vegas 10

    but type in google [how to get sony vegas 10 free] then click on the first one and

    it will let you have the never ending trial and it comes with everything in the real version and its FREE but this is my tip

  • Gah whats with all the jerks in the world? Making fun of kids just because they were not perfect...

  • u fucking suck the cock of a good film maker .. u shall be good

  • not to bad...for the first video there are some things that could be better but still that's with all first vids right?

  • not bad for your first video but there was still some pretty piss poor camera work but its a good start

  • it's okay... but it could be better. but still, not bad for a first try, i'll give ya that

  • 0:21 weeeeeee

    lol i liked it

  • Not bad for a first try kid.

  • it's good, but try not to jump up too much.

    it's a movie, not a tramp XD

    good vid though :D

  • he is trying to make this way to serious like its not a movie

  • lol scream whispers

  • honestly u didnt even put any extra time in this

  • @DarkClawProduction its his 1st vid they got bored they had fun

  • to be honest, good for a first try, but no offense its kinda a rip off of red vs. blue

  • "Come on guys, lets go to the bedrooms" ...lulz

  • XD

    "Let's go under the sheets!. it's 'safe'"

  • ok but bad camera

  • not bad kid :)

  • heres a thing .....2 year olds make bad acters

  • Wayda go, Hotshot. You just embarrassed yourself.

    Make fun of other people when you make your first video.

  • @niceonegunit alright i stil will

  • Meh was Good For Your first vid But camra angleing is kinda bad at times and Voice actings Kinda bad but still For how u sound about 13-14 Ur okay at vids ;) keep em up

  • Suckies the chunkies

    

  • ummm camera guy is awful

    and voice acting

  • its not that good but its your first video so i guess you will be better soon

  • lol i like

  • I have a zombi plan xD

    Am gona faind you and use your delisius meat for beit whayl i askepe the legions of the an dead xD

  • what camera did you use

  • it was....... awesome! i got a tip use a lot more dramatic music i really sets the mood!

  • for some pointers go to the dead pixels video about makeing a machinama

  • @1000Spartans i mean digitalph33er and i may have spelled his name wrong

  • wow this is just pure gay

  • meh.

  • i will make your video much better so send me a freind reaqest at buster012802

  • this looks like most of my halo 3 matches a bunch of 10 year olds getting there asses kicked

  • Probably get someone else to talk or wait till ur voice gets deeper 4/5 stars good job

  • real good fro first go

  • Hey it's his first vid. Keep practicing. And you'll get better with time. No one said machinimas were easy. :p

    Good luck mate!

  • this vid sucks 3 balls

  • @thesaint248 u suck balls bitch dont mess with the vid

  • @thesaint248 ur mom sucked 3 balls last night

  • @AkaNyKing what a lazy bitch.

  • not to be mean but first the guy infected and there running away and then they just decide to go to sleep?

  • I think i got him..yeah i got him hes dead OOHHH!!!LOL best part but nice vid

  • this is pretty good for a first vid! and to all the people who are meen to him if you have to say something mean dont say it.

  • I do like the concept, although one thing that I would recommend is that when you make a video, is that you remove spawn points that is a VERY important thing to do. If you are respawning people hide the spawn points. One more thing is that to distinguish between characters is to choose different teams If you want it to be legit zombies make your guests on your own screen all different solid colors and make the zombie settings as to how you want; other than that, I see some potential.Good sound.

  • this vid sucks some serious ass.

    i could do better by playing every part.

    and i do mean better.

  • @01scott10 u love asses guy one u gaywod dont mess with him bitch

  • capture card, usb microphone, camera angles, i had no idea what was going on

  • First of all, just a little tip. 90% of the Internet hates a Kids' voice. You migth want to like change it around a bit. Half of people here are giving good comments because they think its a good thing to do and they think they have morals. You don't. You just think you do.

    Good video kid

  • its ok its funny how you expect them to cuss but then they say the generic version of the word haha O CRAP!! O CRUD!! haha but it was ok for their virst vid

  • i think you did very well.sum funny parts were good,a few fuzy parts, but the rest was

    great

  • this is good rate my video channel

  • Work on emotion, angles, and practice and if you want help my Gamertag is : hulksmash500

    WTF 524 DISLIKES IT IS A GREAT START TO MAKING COOL VIDEOS

  • Nice for your very first one,and this is to you negative people HEY YOU STUPID BASTARDS, LETS SEE YOU DO BETTER FOR YOUR VERY FIRST VID!!!Now i know your trying to make a good vid but you should first try keeping the camera still,like on shows you see,and to help you with that you could have to camera guys, one guy looks at them one way, and another looks another way,then you just flash to the other guy and you get a good camera scheme, cant put much more, only 26 more characters left, good vid!

  • since ur kids im gona let you down gently.......... YOU FAIL, YOU FAIL AT LIFE, YOU FAIL AT HALO AND YOU FAIL AT SUICIDE!!!!!!!!

  • fail on so many levels....

  • The sound was crappy.

  • here r som things i believe u need to fix in further vids like this: 1 i couldnt make out who was talking 2 try to get more poeples voices and thats pretty much it but overall nice vid

  • hey, this is great for your first rvb vid! just ignore the negative comments :)

  • this sucks ass kill yourself

  • crap camera is shit and so is talking look at red vs blue and get ideas

  • GGGGAAAAYYYYYYY!!!!!!!!!

  • um the lalala and hehehe's are kinda misplaced. Other than that keep trying and practicing your camera skills

  • really gay...

  • WOW how long did it take till your balls dropped. More like never This is stupid.

  • that. was. horrible...good idea...learn to use the camera better. it wouldnt be so wompy if you werent zoomed in so try that.

  • It's ok. I'm a kid too.Anyway that was good

  • Hey if you need some help with videos my gamertag is alexlegend703

  • Hey I just wanted to say that this video is good and all for your first one, but hey look up DigitalPh33r's guide to making a machinima. He put out I think 5 or 6 videos about how to make machinima's and make them look great! Good work on your first try though!!!

  • good job for your 1st try but try to learn to lower your weapons heres how rb,lb,left anolouge in, down on the dpad and a

  • what r u doing plaing halo 3

  • that is guy

  • pretty good job for a first attemp. Talk a little clearer. Zoom in more. And don't twirl your camera around like a retarded monkey. And also when you are recording your voice don't be afraid to yell into it instead of quietly wispering into it trying to get it to sound like yelling. Also when you are using your capture card don't let the video menu show. And last try not to make it look like game play. Try to make it look more like a movie

  • Gay. Sorry to say but this was stupid. If the graphics were better and if the sound was better this would be decent. Keep trying you'll get it

  • get a real life instead of talking about zombies

  • this is the gayest thing i ever saw

  • @SuperSpanish3 i now they ur stupid and have no life

  • wow..how did this get 60k views. and why the fuck do people always whisper when making videos?

  • hay you did ok.

  • good jpb

  • You are the biggest fag ive ever seen.

  • not bad 4 the first try

  • Nice for a first, better than some peoples 50th ones. Also those who wrote bad comments, it's their first, and they sound young so back off.

  • P.S. @all Don't feed the troll.

  • Honestly, this is not bad for a first. I agree with Sushidude91 in that you should definitely practice tightening your camera angles. I also recommend keeping the camera from moving more than necessary during a shot. Something that I can assure you will help a lot is to do multiple takes of the same shot, and then pick the best takes. Another thing that will help is to use some sound effects to support the visuals. Gunfire and footsteps would have been very useful here. You can only go up now.