@ONERTAGIN Agree completely. Actually, come to think of it, I hate my lyrics as well. (This is Krmulliger). Please feel free to listen to my newer music at my soundcloud...
@ONERTAGIN ( h t t p : / / w w w. soundcloud . c o m / MRKsRaps - without the spaces). Please feel free to leave constructive criticism there. Much appreciated, Kyle Mulliger.
the lyrics are really good, they flow really well at some parts, i loved the story, if this was really written from the heart and isnt just to get chicks attention, than its really good. but you need to work on your flow a bit more, it was good at some parts and sloppy at others, but that'll come to you in time. you should also consider putting a tad more emotion in your voice, allows listeners to connect better with what your saying. overall, good job :)
@Butterflymouth1 Thanks for the compliments and constructive criticism, man. :)
I have to say, this is literally my least favorite of my 'full-length' 'freestyle' (one long verse, no hooks) songs. It's probably the second worst song, lyrically, that I still have up. I need to update my videos. My real rap channel is MRKsRaps, and my up-to-date song list is located at soundcloud (.com) /mrksraps/
Check those out and tell me what your opinion is of my current skill/songs. Thank you again! :)
@zjplay95 Thanks man. It's just supposed to be a story, but I tried to make it as real and dramatic as possible. Wrote it in about an hour, though...lol.
lyrics aint bad but your voice sounds like shit fuckin horrible soundin
ONERTAGIN 3 weeks ago
@ONERTAGIN Agree completely. Actually, come to think of it, I hate my lyrics as well. (This is Krmulliger). Please feel free to listen to my newer music at my soundcloud...
krmulliger 3 weeks ago
@ONERTAGIN ( h t t p : / / w w w. soundcloud . c o m / MRKsRaps - without the spaces). Please feel free to leave constructive criticism there. Much appreciated, Kyle Mulliger.
krmulliger 3 weeks ago
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ONERTAGIN 3 weeks ago
the lyrics are really good, they flow really well at some parts, i loved the story, if this was really written from the heart and isnt just to get chicks attention, than its really good. but you need to work on your flow a bit more, it was good at some parts and sloppy at others, but that'll come to you in time. you should also consider putting a tad more emotion in your voice, allows listeners to connect better with what your saying. overall, good job :)
Butterflymouth1 2 months ago
@Butterflymouth1 Thanks for the compliments and constructive criticism, man. :)
I have to say, this is literally my least favorite of my 'full-length' 'freestyle' (one long verse, no hooks) songs. It's probably the second worst song, lyrically, that I still have up. I need to update my videos. My real rap channel is MRKsRaps, and my up-to-date song list is located at soundcloud (.com) /mrksraps/
Check those out and tell me what your opinion is of my current skill/songs. Thank you again! :)
krmulliger 2 months ago
Relates EXACTLY to me and someone :) xxxxx
Chloeoebabe 5 months ago
I must say, you slipped up a few times but I loved it. Put up some more, bro.
MikeM987654321 6 months ago
this is great:) these lyrics go so great with the beat and you speaking in a low voice just adds to it. i love it!!
truth23dare 6 months ago
awsome lyrics man
21creed 7 months ago
the final is tooo good. great lyrics dude
ATTILArulez16 7 months ago
wow man this is beautiful man, you did a great job
foxguitarman 1 year ago
@foxguitarman Thanks man, it means a lot. If you like the song, go check the full quality version out at soundcloud . com/mrksraps/fade-away-final
I even have soundcloud's downloads on so you can get a copy of it free.
krmulliger 1 year ago
deep bro deep
zjplay95 1 year ago
@zjplay95 Thanks man. It's just supposed to be a story, but I tried to make it as real and dramatic as possible. Wrote it in about an hour, though...lol.
krmulliger 1 year ago
@zjplay95 i can understand myself dude, im working on one myself its aculy personaly ha
zjplay95 1 year ago
I like the background
MrAzonra 1 year ago
Pretty decent
exKatastrophic 1 year ago
hi
Faitherooski 1 year ago
@Faitherooski Hey, Fai. Thanks for watching and listening. :)
krmulliger 1 year ago