dude, this is sick!! great job!! i do dimilar muzzle flashes in my vids use smoke it looks alot better, bullet hits work too, you can do so much with effects!! take advantage of youre ability to shoot video!!
extremely nice camera work and concept and all. maybe the shooting coulde have been done a little bit better (fire the guns like actual weapons perhaps?) and maybe work a little on the muzzle flashs... otherwhise really great work :) liked it
do NOT EVER go for the shaky look! all it does is try to make up for the lack of real action. I couldnt tell where the actors are in relation to each other, i had to pause the video at certain points to get a good view of the area and figure out exactly where they were. the close-ups were not entirely necessary since neither actor really showed any emotion and they were in a wide open space.
@Danfango700 also they have horrible aim. i dont know if that was a part of a joke but i think after unloading clip after clip at each other from 20 feet away should have some result. the overall film was pretty funny though, with the pulling these huge assault rifles out of small boxes and dancing around in the street with them. this was just some constructive criticism, take it how you want
love it! DEFINATELY love it! Not so sure about the camera movement though. Less shaky i think would have contributed more. i got a headache really. but other than that it was great!
So I never checked out your vids when you left a comment on my channel, but decided to today, and it was worth it! That was pretty entertaining. Fave--
haha. Nice man, that was really well done. The sound design was very complimenting and kept the realism and my attention fixed on the action. The acting and choreography of the action worked very well. The only criticism I have is did you have the actors purposefully hold there guns like that for the humor(for which that worked), however, not convincing if you were going for a realistic gun recoil. So, what camera did you use for this? Also looks like a videocopilot follower??
I know this story. It is about two samurai meeting in the street. One will not make way for the other so...they have this 'mental fight'. They both come to the conclusion neither will win so...
I have seen ur work. VERY GOOD n for specially for ur age, its incredible. U should totally start making feature films - skipping school.
However, something important I have to tell u. Every good filmmaker has a voice and that voice preaches peace and humanity. "Pulp Fiction", "Kill Bill", "Snatch" these violent films are not about violence. BUT YOUR FILMS ARE. YOU ARE PROMOTING Violence through CHRISTIANITY. So I advice you to study films with the eyes of CHRIST and tell ur story. PEACE.
I would recommend you to watch less "Gun movies". Neorealisms films like "Bicycle Thief", "La Strada", "Pather Panchali".. but these are B&W. so if you wanna see more modern films. Watch Films from Iran.. "Children of Heaven", "Children of Paradise" and also European films like "Three Colors" series. Please I beg you watch less action movies now. I can assure you once you find the soul, you can Glorify God even if you choose Gory Blood Splatter Genre.. God Bless.
haha that would be amazing if this got featured For some reason though youtube is only seems to be featuring top subscriber videos that are partners also
really nice job. good choreography and cool probs, which may not seem like a big deal sometimes, but they really helped sell the whole video. what camera you using by the way?
you have no idea how that helped my day... I spent 3 hours on the phone with Apple straightening an order on a macbook pro.... Ahhhhhhhhhhhh never again am I ordering a computer from any company!!!!! LOL this so lightened my mood during my 3 hrs on hold.... LOL
Good, funny stuff. I enjoyed it. Great cinematography and editing, although I will say you should have given a better sense of distance between the two of them, I though I was going to see them being at arm´s length or something like that :p
I really liked the Hershy grenade as well, especially since I had a dream last night that someone gave me a cigar bomb (except it was more of a cigar stub) and I managed to throw it into my parents' bathroom before it exploded.
Great work dude! Great work...its a creative and pretty fun to watch video. But I do have to say..these chocolate salesmen have horrible aims...my god. LOL. Nice job!
ok bro you got me begging now .. PLEASE MAKE A TUTORIAL ON HOW TO MAKE VIDEOS LIKE THESE WITH DIFFERENT ANGLES AND EVERYTHING! i really want to make a video like this but i need tips from the pros [who actually respond to there comments] PLEASE!
Hey, looked really good! great camera work, if you don't mind me saying so, to make the muzzle flashes look more realistic (if you are using after effects) right click, blending mode, screen.
Hey thanks man for the advice I will be sure to do that next time im glad the video made you laugh looking forward to your next episode in your tv series also!
dude, this is sick!! great job!! i do dimilar muzzle flashes in my vids use smoke it looks alot better, bullet hits work too, you can do so much with effects!! take advantage of youre ability to shoot video!!
kidwonderification 1 year ago
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Now that is some scary christians!
MadAsAFish808 1 year ago
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MadAsAFish808 1 year ago
Now that is some scary christians!
MadAsAFish808 1 year ago
extremely nice camera work and concept and all. maybe the shooting coulde have been done a little bit better (fire the guns like actual weapons perhaps?) and maybe work a little on the muzzle flashs... otherwhise really great work :) liked it
metalbillyboy 1 year ago
i wonder what would happen if you decided not to buy chocolate from them? D:
this was epicly awesome....nice job :)
a192589 1 year ago
do NOT EVER go for the shaky look! all it does is try to make up for the lack of real action. I couldnt tell where the actors are in relation to each other, i had to pause the video at certain points to get a good view of the area and figure out exactly where they were. the close-ups were not entirely necessary since neither actor really showed any emotion and they were in a wide open space.
Danfango700 1 year ago
@Danfango700 also they have horrible aim. i dont know if that was a part of a joke but i think after unloading clip after clip at each other from 20 feet away should have some result. the overall film was pretty funny though, with the pulling these huge assault rifles out of small boxes and dancing around in the street with them. this was just some constructive criticism, take it how you want
Danfango700 1 year ago
Can you tell me where did you get the music please?
k1qu344 1 year ago
Pretty awesome
howl87 1 year ago
i love it...the visual effects, music, and camera movement really adds up to the action.
where do you guys get your guns from?
and what type of camera do you use?
iZekProductions 1 year ago
this is AMAZING! what camera do you guys have ?
03haywha 1 year ago
howd u do the effect after the explosion where its like hes stunned.
yOmOmO1231 1 year ago
what effects program do you use?
ratedrforbinladen 1 year ago
lol i like the hand to hand with the swords and nunchuks
i laughed so hard nice job!
ratedrforbinladen 1 year ago
Quality. I personally loved the shakey close ups. Reminded me of the Bourne series. Good job.
wedancedto9ether 1 year ago
love it! DEFINATELY love it! Not so sure about the camera movement though. Less shaky i think would have contributed more. i got a headache really. but other than that it was great!
RatDrillProductions 1 year ago
Very COOL!
findthejohn 1 year ago
Awesome man!... I really like the music and the special effects, and sounds... Good job guys... Thumbs up for that... i really enjoyed :D!
Aganinst17 2 years ago
Awesome Video!
SmashClips 2 years ago
man, that was just wonderful!
BRAVO!
mrbenmilner 2 years ago
So I never checked out your vids when you left a comment on my channel, but decided to today, and it was worth it! That was pretty entertaining. Fave--
Rapunzzel07 2 years ago
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very good video
shooterdje 2 years ago
Wow that was awesome.
Vignirv 2 years ago
haha. Nice man, that was really well done. The sound design was very complimenting and kept the realism and my attention fixed on the action. The acting and choreography of the action worked very well. The only criticism I have is did you have the actors purposefully hold there guns like that for the humor(for which that worked), however, not convincing if you were going for a realistic gun recoil. So, what camera did you use for this? Also looks like a videocopilot follower??
bakerskates7 2 years ago
aha lol that was awesome
TheKatherineTimes 2 years ago
has the 2 main elements missing from 99% of amateur shorts out there:
humour and good sound editing
mariachiinc 2 years ago
lol good stuff man. the camera work and editing was all very well done. i loved the twix to the face. 5 stars
brettsk8 2 years ago
that was incredible im glad you sent me that message
typingwords 2 years ago
haha great story line with epic end :D nice edit+camera movement :)
Barbarosa222 2 years ago
nicely done! very good camera work, what editing program are you using?
trenantproductions 2 years ago
Really nice camera work!
MaximumProductionz 2 years ago
haha nice!! i just sold my mac 11 airsoft gun :D
3Bproductionz 2 years ago
Absolutely great n' FANTASTICAL! FIVE STARS! *****
samsevern 2 years ago
hahahahahahhahahaha
82Kazzi82 2 years ago
hahaha that was amazing. flat out amazing. its people like you that become professional directors.
wrenthereaper 2 years ago
hahah nice choice of music i like it lol hahah 5/5
nuclearHMAN 2 years ago
that was awesome. totally unexpected. i didnt read the description before watching and when he pulled out the handgun at the begining...haha awesome
BasementStudios 2 years ago
DUDE AMAZING~!!!
WAYgooder 2 years ago
haha thanks your work is pretty good also i like the look you are achieving with the hv30
InTheLunchBox 2 years ago
thanks a lot !
I'm also a christian filmmaker too:)
Keep up the good work
WAYgooder 2 years ago
this is great!
where is the music from?
matthewpalance 2 years ago
hahaha
eblade9 2 years ago
I know this story. It is about two samurai meeting in the street. One will not make way for the other so...they have this 'mental fight'. They both come to the conclusion neither will win so...
...they turn around.
PuppyZwolle 2 years ago
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That was awesome and totally hilarious! Do anthoer one!! :)
UrBen21 2 years ago
That was awesome and totall Do another one!!
UrBen21 2 years ago
YEAH!!
UrBen21 2 years ago
woah.
That was really good.
Make it big.
SeherCinema 2 years ago
Really good job man.
jjzapman 2 years ago
This is awesome! 5 stars, I love it!
Feel free to check out some of my videos, they're also full of meaningless action! haha
LoooZaaa 2 years ago
Amazing my man! Looks great!
juunigastu 2 years ago
that was great! H-Grenade! Lol! Keep up the good work!
xXKevinEdgarXx 2 years ago
4 minutes i'll never get back
waste of time
lame effects
unoriginal direction
ocfan66 2 years ago
Niice
TrynFocus 2 years ago
Excellent job, Jacob. Keep it up!
ThinkPlantdotcom 2 years ago
excellent movie. it was fucking awesome!!!!!!!
imagreatbigman 2 years ago
nice Jacob
jazzyphae31 2 years ago
OMG the evil chocolate i new it was evil all the time :O
specialchannel 2 years ago
Haha
I think the unprofessional shooting poses just makes it funnier
Dzumeister 2 years ago
I have seen ur work. VERY GOOD n for specially for ur age, its incredible. U should totally start making feature films - skipping school.
However, something important I have to tell u. Every good filmmaker has a voice and that voice preaches peace and humanity. "Pulp Fiction", "Kill Bill", "Snatch" these violent films are not about violence. BUT YOUR FILMS ARE. YOU ARE PROMOTING Violence through CHRISTIANITY. So I advice you to study films with the eyes of CHRIST and tell ur story. PEACE.
bengalimike 2 years ago
I would recommend you to watch less "Gun movies". Neorealisms films like "Bicycle Thief", "La Strada", "Pather Panchali".. but these are B&W. so if you wanna see more modern films. Watch Films from Iran.. "Children of Heaven", "Children of Paradise" and also European films like "Three Colors" series. Please I beg you watch less action movies now. I can assure you once you find the soul, you can Glorify God even if you choose Gory Blood Splatter Genre.. God Bless.
bengalimike 2 years ago
great video!
noahhk 2 years ago
Very good movie. Bravo !
CorsicaMovies 2 years ago
wow this is a really good film!!! dude you are a very talented film maker!! everybody, you should check out JulianSmith87 his is an awesome guy too!
DuckiE1221 2 years ago
Oh, man! That was really good bro. Hilarious ending and awesome fight scene. Great cuts, better effects. Nice work!
ericlukepeterson 2 years ago
No problem
Razback88 2 years ago
hey that was excellent man. and it made watching the whole video worth it when it turned out they were just imagining it. hilarious touch!!
tictacaddicts 2 years ago
Nice job camera angles, LOL
Corvobell 2 years ago
thanks im glad you liked them!
InTheLunchBox 2 years ago
wow! Somebody's got a bright future in film! Extremely well done. This is getting featured soon. Thank you for posting this.
audionautix 2 years ago
haha that would be amazing if this got featured For some reason though youtube is only seems to be featuring top subscriber videos that are partners also
InTheLunchBox 2 years ago
dude this was so great good job man i loved the whole abomb explosion lol
funitoes 2 years ago
hey man thanks it was a lot of fun to make im glad you enjoyed it! So I hear your of to film school now?
InTheLunchBox 2 years ago
yeah man im head off to columbia now it gonna be fun
hoping to learn lots there =)
funitoes 2 years ago
Hehe awesome work :)
fctilldead 2 years ago
thanks im glad you enjoyed it make sure to stay tuned for more films!
InTheLunchBox 2 years ago
Absolutely fantastic !
CamTomProductions 2 years ago
thanks man Im really glad you liked it stay tuned for our future films!
InTheLunchBox 2 years ago
lol, I was going to say that either no one is going to buy your candy or they would feel forced to buy all of it....
That was very entertaining, y'all did a very good job.
wilkersonfights 2 years ago
haha yeah id buy all thoes guys candy!
InTheLunchBox 2 years ago
This is REALLY good. Well done!! Very very creative! :)
megangerfilms 2 years ago
thanks man glad you thought it was creative that was defiantly what we were going for.
InTheLunchBox 2 years ago
This is Brilliant!!!
kamruj 2 years ago
thanks man there will be more in the future!
InTheLunchBox 2 years ago
That was awesome!Best short I've seen in a long time
CRTutorials 2 years ago
wow really thanks for that comment im glad you liked it!
InTheLunchBox 2 years ago
Sorry the bad text i say one of the most greatest video i ever seen how ou editeddid y
Razback88 2 years ago
One of themoow did yst greatest movie i ever seen how did you edited
Razback88 2 years ago
wow thanks that means a lot I used final cut pro studio 2 to edit its for macs only though
InTheLunchBox 2 years ago
Very high concept. Good job.
dlzaragoza 2 years ago
thanks glad you liked it !
InTheLunchBox 2 years ago
lol!!! Out of the twix box he pulls a gun! That was classic man, Great movie, 5/5!
zachmanZM 2 years ago
thanks yeah i wish i could pull that kind of stuff out of candy boxes
InTheLunchBox 2 years ago
Brilliant :) But were do you got the sound fx from?
TRIBIproductions 2 years ago
That was brilliant and extremely funny lmao xD
WhiteHeatFilms 2 years ago
haha thanks im glad it made you laugh stay tuned for our future films!
InTheLunchBox 2 years ago
haha. that was pretty legit. :)
all of you are really talented. :)
missfelixity 2 years ago
that was awesome!
BrianMctitties 2 years ago
why thank you! hope you enjoy the rest of the films
InTheLunchBox 2 years ago
luke and fletch's personalities go so well together on camera =] oh and by the way, you're really talented, david. you're gonna go far :D
ashleydonalyn 2 years ago
I LOVED IT :D HAHA it made my day!!
Ivan1993N 2 years ago
haha glad my films made your day better always a good thing to hear!
InTheLunchBox 2 years ago
really nice job. good choreography and cool probs, which may not seem like a big deal sometimes, but they really helped sell the whole video. what camera you using by the way?
joshthrbc 2 years ago
i meant props in that other post
joshthrbc 2 years ago
Yeah the props helps a ton thanks for watching the film and stay tuned for more in the future
InTheLunchBox 2 years ago
ok sweet
joshthrbc 2 years ago
Well that was an interesting Call of Duty 4 reference.
Nice ending.
Jon0326 2 years ago
yeah im sure no one has every thought of using it that way haha im glad you liked it!
InTheLunchBox 2 years ago
Where do I get a box of chocolates like that?
revolver1138 2 years ago
o you know vons lol
InTheLunchBox 2 years ago
sweet
1bobo1 2 years ago
Yes, it's the marry Poppins box of candy!
ranger7theseries 2 years ago
if only they really had one of thoes!
InTheLunchBox 2 years ago
not bad
i thought it was funny that they never hit eachother even though they were like 30 feet away from eachother in an open street.
the fights were well choreographed, and the camera gave it a good, tounge in cheek bourne style.
p.s. since i am a fellow moguler you should check out one of my videos and tell me what you think
KilgoreWoodsCinema 2 years ago
Thanks im glad you enjoyed it your films are pretty good too I like the creative style you have in each of them very artistic
InTheLunchBox 2 years ago
haha dude! that was awesome! was that ur guys' fight scene? haha if u dont get an A bless is effin crazy!
BTaylorU 2 years ago
haha yep this was our 30 sec fight scene which somehow evolved into a full on short film lol
InTheLunchBox 2 years ago
haha nice ya our is runs over a minute but its obviously not that great of a scene lol =P u know me dania and nicole! lol
BTaylorU 2 years ago
That just made my day!!!!!! Great job!!!!
toeheadproductions 2 years ago
haha im glad I could help lol
InTheLunchBox 2 years ago
you have no idea how that helped my day... I spent 3 hours on the phone with Apple straightening an order on a macbook pro.... Ahhhhhhhhhhhh never again am I ordering a computer from any company!!!!! LOL this so lightened my mood during my 3 hrs on hold.... LOL
toeheadproductions 2 years ago
DUDE! that was sweet!
szuno1 2 years ago
haha thanks man glad you liked it!
InTheLunchBox 2 years ago
....Now that's how selling candy should be....
Awesome video btw
zero252627 2 years ago
haha that would be awesome thanks for the comment!
InTheLunchBox 2 years ago
Brillant, nice job guys, I really love it! Keep up the good work!
weip 2 years ago
will do! hope you enjoy our future films!
InTheLunchBox 2 years ago
Good, funny stuff. I enjoyed it. Great cinematography and editing, although I will say you should have given a better sense of distance between the two of them, I though I was going to see them being at arm´s length or something like that :p
movieboyandco 2 years ago
thanks for that tip I agree with you next time ill make sure I establish the characters distance a little better. Im glad you enjoyed the film
InTheLunchBox 2 years ago
I really liked the Hershy grenade as well, especially since I had a dream last night that someone gave me a cigar bomb (except it was more of a cigar stub) and I managed to throw it into my parents' bathroom before it exploded.
4YouProductions 2 years ago
Nice Indian music at the end.
4YouProductions 2 years ago
haha thanks i thought it added a little foreign feel to the film
InTheLunchBox 2 years ago
Great work dude! Great work...its a creative and pretty fun to watch video. But I do have to say..these chocolate salesmen have horrible aims...my god. LOL. Nice job!
Rafidaq2 2 years ago
yeah they probaly should take some lessons on holding a gun shooting a gun and not having all out wars in the middle of the street lol
InTheLunchBox 2 years ago
This is fantastic! Acting, effects, angles, everything. I laughed at several parts of this. Great work! 5/5!
pinnaclepointstudios 2 years ago
haha im glad you laughed and im especially glad that acting was up to par!
InTheLunchBox 2 years ago
O and camera angles look like bourne ultimatum syle
JavaManEntertainment 2 years ago
yeah thats what I was going for im glad I achieved it!
InTheLunchBox 2 years ago
nice work 1:14 WAS quite amazing and suprisingly confusing, now if I can bust that out with my snickers box
JavaManEntertainment 2 years ago
yeah if there was that kinda artillary in candy boxes id carry one every where
InTheLunchBox 2 years ago
Wow! Brilliant, watch out Spielberg!
johnboy1uk 2 years ago
Haha thanks glad you liked it I hope one day I can become that big time director!
InTheLunchBox 2 years ago
ok bro you got me begging now .. PLEASE MAKE A TUTORIAL ON HOW TO MAKE VIDEOS LIKE THESE WITH DIFFERENT ANGLES AND EVERYTHING! i really want to make a video like this but i need tips from the pros [who actually respond to there comments] PLEASE!
magichabs3921 2 years ago
Hey, looked really good! great camera work, if you don't mind me saying so, to make the muzzle flashes look more realistic (if you are using after effects) right click, blending mode, screen.
it makes them look great try it!
and great music btw :P really funny
ericidle007 2 years ago
Hey thanks man for the advice I will be sure to do that next time im glad the video made you laugh looking forward to your next episode in your tv series also!
InTheLunchBox 2 years ago
LOL i cant hate on this movie :P. I particularly like the homage to COD4 at the end ;) nice work guys
CellarDoorFilm 2 years ago
yes you noticed the little COD4 thing at the end haha im glad you enjoyed it!
InTheLunchBox 2 years ago
lolz. nice work. what do the neighbors think?
goldenpizza 2 years ago
haha they were driving by giving us the weirdest looks ever!
InTheLunchBox 2 years ago
haha im sure my anyone would do the same if they saw a bunch of kids hiding behind cards with huge guns :P
magichabs3921 2 years ago
Nice!! Where did you get those guns?
effectsgroup 2 years ago
thanks glad you liked it! We had them
InTheLunchBox 2 years ago