That was such a great poem!! You had really great diction and imagery. The "..my heart sings [...] fall on to one." line was beautiful. The prays/praise usage was genius and wonderful to listen to. I hope you continue to foster this wonderful talent. You are wonderful at writing poetry. Thank You.
MY GOODNESS. VERY GOOD WRITTEN AND POEM -- BUT, MY FRIEND, THIS IS ALL BY THE LIAR, STEALER AND FRIEND WITH LUCIFER -- OBAMA
Tonsgard 9 months ago
flow. girl flow
poeticlove88 1 year ago
ummmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm
xXpinksunflowersXx 2 years ago
i love the poem ...that was nice ...keep it up beautiful!!!
dremitchell 3 years ago
Haley, that was awesome! Keep up the good work.
(Aunt Ruth)
smart032000 3 years ago
That was such a great poem!! You had really great diction and imagery. The "..my heart sings [...] fall on to one." line was beautiful. The prays/praise usage was genius and wonderful to listen to. I hope you continue to foster this wonderful talent. You are wonderful at writing poetry. Thank You.
msjessima 3 years ago
I think your beautiful Haley (: (: (:
All these hoes can inhale a queef.
xXpinksunflowersXx 3 years ago
you are so ugly
JuicyJuice617 3 years ago
That was very good!
ml25 3 years ago
that was ill..
YuckFOUunltd 3 years ago
Thanks :)
hhaalleeyyx3 3 years ago
Well done!
FiLTHyRiCHards 3 years ago
thanks very much!
hhaalleeyyx3 3 years ago