Something I Never Was

[MrNiceHk]

Very Nice mate ... I hope this is not your inner voice ... if it is ... Excersise more and sleep with really atractive hookers for a few months you'll feel much better

[VisionGhostPoet]

Haha, no thats not my inner voice, trust me Im a very happy man ;) Thanks for watching!

[msbunburyist]

I love this! Your delivery is really good, too. I can't imagine trying myself to deliver a poem like this, but you make it sound fantastic.

[VisionGhostPoet]

Wow! Thank you so much!! :o)

[rajasmasala]

this sort of thing is hard to do, and it could be better here. not that i'm that great myself, but terrance hayes might interest you.

[naiefmonster]

This is such a good poem. Thanks a lot for sharing it!

[VisionGhostPoet]

Thank you petal!

[keanghiero]

NICE.

5*

ALL THE BEST

KEAN

[VisionGhostPoet]

Thank you!

[fellowtuber123]

Wow that was amazing. A lot of people in this world walk around as if they themselves and everything they do is perfect, when infact thy have 1000 imperfections to their name. It's just awesome that you're so honest and down to earth.

[VisionGhostPoet]

Thank you petal I really appreciate that!!

[chrissy7b]

Well spoken!

[VisionGhostPoet]

Thank you!

[Abestube]

Man...your words are potent and intense. Your poems maybe short, but tell an intriguing story and are to the point. equal to a surgical strike that just hits you i the chest. Respect my brotha in words & knowledge.

[VisionGhostPoet]

Thank you very much my friend, you are very kind!

[204SuryaKiran]

You are a most eloquent and honest man. Dare I say it? Perfect! THANK YOU!

[VisionGhostPoet]

Indeed thank you more so!!

[NewBrazdolph]

Faved!

[VisionGhostPoet]

Thank you!

[Obsidian433]

Wow! That's an awesome poem. Thanks for posting it!

[VisionGhostPoet]

...and thank you for listening!

[13thDimension]

inDeed

[VisionGhostPoet]

Thank you!

[AndyRiotRed]

it takes great talent to write honest poetry that isn't corny

but you did it

great piece, it really moved me.

[VisionGhostPoet]

Thank you very much!

[cyspy]

Brilliant.

[VisionGhostPoet]

Thank you!

[mindrunfree]

Wow, that brought tears to my eyes. You present your poetry so authentically.

[VisionGhostPoet]

I had no idea this would touch someone so deeply **hugs** thank you!

[viudanegraaa]

Very beautiful !!! 5***** ,hugs ,Sofia.

[VisionGhostPoet]

Thank you :)

[BAZHE]

great

[VisionGhostPoet]

Thank you!

[in2dionysus]

What do you want death to be?

A fear of the eternal!

Very thoughtful!

Great vision is always underestimated.

[VisionGhostPoet]

What do I want death to be, well within my control and very well aware of it, Id hate to think I would die in my sleep.

[poetryanimations]

Very Nice Visionghost.A very memorable and poignant poem.

Kind Regards

Jim Clark

[VisionGhostPoet]

Thank you Jim, thanks for stopping by!

[iamdemom1]

what a very touching poem

[VisionGhostPoet]

Thank you very much for saying that :)

[CurzonRoad]

Hear, hear! v-e-r-y well said!  THANK YOU! ALL BEST. Doug --

[VisionGhostPoet]

Thank you Curzon!

[hoffmann9471]

That is an interesting and GREAT poem.

At least what I can understand with my poor English.

Wunderbar.

Onkel Pete

[VisionGhostPoet]

Thank you!

[JaneLearmonth]

"I want Satan to be a Judge.." What a great line! If only! :) Superb Poem and great execution!

[VisionGhostPoet]

Thank you so much!!

[tinySpectacle]

love the concept of this and the execution is very fine. And it's interesting because it is so different then your usual style. I like seeing how writers can play around with technique and style.

[VisionGhostPoet]

Yea Id never done this before and was blown away with the response, so will deffo do more! Poetry is like any art, infinite and boundless in its creative poetntial, I missed you **hugs**

[DavidRandallCurtis]

Thought I had faved this... it is now.... hope you do more videos where you are on cam... no pressure though... no pressure... :p 5*

[VisionGhostPoet]

Oh I will, really kinda find its a whole way f poetry, Im liking it! watch this space bro, great to hear from you, thank you!

[adamrudden]

This is a great poem. Structurally, it is the strongest poem I have read of yours. I Am Highway is also strong as well.

[VisionGhostPoet]

Cheers bro!

[DoorsChick1967]

The universal longing, to be something we never were. It held my attention from the start, thanx for the words as well:)

[VisionGhostPoet]

Your welcome and thank you!

[ruvidan]

Vision, very cool brother. Krishnamurti often said that love and death are the same. Your poem reflects that as well. Awesome words bro...Awesome.

[VisionGhostPoet]

Thanks brother, thanks so much!

[rozeboosje]

Gimme a "W". Gimme an "O". Gimme a "W"

[VisionGhostPoet]

haha thats cool!!! :o)

[IraqIsWhack]

I believe in death we are perfect, because even if we have a soul that goes out of body or if there even is an afterlife we are free from this world and released from any restrain keeping us from being anything..Anyhow favd bro..5 stars

[VisionGhostPoet]

I am so glad you said that! Thanks bro!!

[shapeofabox]

glad to see so much poetry on YouTube :)

[VisionGhostPoet]

It's fantastic! Thank you!

[Idlinfarm]

You evoke more poetry. Is there more than that? I love what you do.

[VisionGhostPoet]

Oh there's plenty more to come, thank you so much!

[XaveJamesGrey]

I like this too... good stuff.

[VisionGhostPoet]

Cheers my man!

[elviradark6]

perfect, is riiight!..

5 and going on my favs ;)

[VisionGhostPoet]

Thanks hon, ur a sweety! :)

[MessiahChaos]

Great piece of work! 5* and favd.

[VisionGhostPoet]

Thanks MC :)

[liz1060]

I want Fornication to be the highest order of human achievement so in death I can be something I never was in life -- Successful! Conceptually Inventive and inspiring piece -- 5*

[VisionGhostPoet]

If ever there was a time I felt two minds were thinking alike it would be now. Thank you Liz!

[onegroovycharmer]

And I shall be a humbled poetic reviewer;

Elevated within the elements of your chambers depth

Envisioning your words of summits brow;

Claimed within the receptive tokens of your voice

And it is there I find your words in echo;

Revealing the plumed veils of you.a master poet

Well Done!!

(I Loved The Concept of This Poetic Expression!)

Peace, Love & Inspiration

Vickie

[VisionGhostPoet]

Wow! What a verse, thank you so much!! :o)

[samdougken]

ggooooooodddd

[VisionGhostPoet]

Cheers! :o)

[hellavadeal]

That was real good. ***** :)

[VisionGhostPoet]

Thank you!!

[PoetLina]

I want Einstein to be a Poet

So that I may understand the Cosmic Purpose

And I can be in death something I never was in life

Immortal.

Sorry, such fun I just had to have a go ;-p

[VisionGhostPoet]

I think I've started something here :o) Thank you!!

[MrDaMan]

Well done VG, well done. It's good to "see" you once in a while even though I know you favor theater of sound. This works fine. :-)

[VisionGhostPoet]

Aye I wasnt sure how this was gonna be received, bloody brilliantly so far :) Thank you!

[nukecat]

beautifully written and spoken too!

[VisionGhostPoet]

Thanks Nukecate!

[Loreleila]

Great poem

Great delivery

But

You are

What you never thought you were

When you are your own

Then you will be in life

What you must be in infinity

[VisionGhostPoet]

Thats very true, thank you!

[normanallan]

I forgive you

Denizen of the New Age

oh, and

I congratulate you,

well done

[VisionGhostPoet]

Thank you for your pardoning! :)

[miiszwayncecarter]

amazing....

[TaxTeaParty]

This is very fine work!

FAVORITED.

[marycigarettes]

that's great!!!!!!

[VisionGhostPoet]

Cheers MC :)

[marycigarettes]

i like the conviction in the delivery

[allgoraro]

I think cupid is a liar or drunk! Nice work.

[VisionGhostPoet]

Just as long as he shares the liquer thats cool with me! Thank you :)

[AuroraKismet]

You can add a sixth stanza for me :

_________

"And I can be in death something I never was in life

Loved ! "

[VisionGhostPoet]

I know the feeling! **HUGS**

[AuroraKismet]

Oh,I've been loved in some ways by somebodies.

I meant I'd like that extra stanza just for me.I hear it but only two lines.

I'm not very articulate this year,my apologies

[Nigelcf]

fantastic poem.

[VisionGhostPoet]

Wow that was fast, haha! Thank you very much!!