The main recommendation is to pick a topic. We can see what is going on on the screen ourselves, but it would be much more interesting to watch if you would pick a topic and talk about that, not just repeat what's going on on the screen.
Also you don't play very well(no offense) so you should make your videos interesting by having good commentary not good gameplay.
PS: Pick games that have interesting gameplay and you do decently instead of games that where you just dominate the opponent.
You told me to watch after seeing me comment on other dota vids without noticing I only actually watch the spotlights. This is mainly because I have only played lol but if I had to give you feedback I have to say that you seem to get the game to me. But from what I watched you aren't extremely entertaining. Serious players will watch but not people just interested in the game like me.
great idea to speed up the boring parts of the play by speeding it up but before you record just time the first blood and any really important gank and then just look at the list so u can slow it down when ganks or fights happen. also in the beginning of a cast if theres not a whole lot going on make sure to talk about IN DEPTH analysis of the team comps. who has a better gank team, who has a harder carry late game, and who has the best cc for teamfights.
This is just my OP but I don't think you really needed wand, you probably could have gone two clarity potions and been good. Enchant wasn't doing many spells and the best weaver can do is go invis 3 times and his mana basically is gone, maybe he can do his swarm but that is 4 charges. But I get it having a wand can help in a lane but only if the opponents spam.Peeves: No one brought dust or wards and no courier. If that Weaver was any good you guys would lost just for that.
The main recommendation is to pick a topic. We can see what is going on on the screen ourselves, but it would be much more interesting to watch if you would pick a topic and talk about that, not just repeat what's going on on the screen.
Also you don't play very well(no offense) so you should make your videos interesting by having good commentary not good gameplay.
PS: Pick games that have interesting gameplay and you do decently instead of games that where you just dominate the opponent.
Logres6 3 weeks ago
I don't know why but your accent makes me want to just grab a pillow cuddle up and fall asleep watching this video :D
bliss0512 4 weeks ago
You told me to watch after seeing me comment on other dota vids without noticing I only actually watch the spotlights. This is mainly because I have only played lol but if I had to give you feedback I have to say that you seem to get the game to me. But from what I watched you aren't extremely entertaining. Serious players will watch but not people just interested in the game like me.
Cheezzyy278 1 month ago
im here and im glad i got a pm from you and btw < subscribed :)
IHateIRx 1 month ago
good video,keep it up.
wabbitgenerator4 1 month ago in playlist Dota 2 Commentaries
Good video, Decent and Simple.
KatamES09 1 month ago
@AnEvilSnowman good play bro, keep this way
won the subs (Y) =)
lucasfc123 1 month ago
That scottish accent.
spoonfyter 1 month ago
Yeah, i like dota2 but i don't like spam :) anyway, it's not hard for me to press thumbs up.
markomancikas 1 month ago
oh tnx for the message i watch dotacinema but i wanted gameplay so ill sub and tnx :D
ShuffulingMan 1 month ago
feeding good,when i plying dota2 got some delay,asia server suck,maybe i will giving out my id
walaoRIKi 1 month ago
feeding nevermore .__.
BlNavi 1 month ago
its pretty good man :D
alexer071 1 month ago
Cool vid, i'm trying to get some experience with dota2 before it comes out, it's just what i needed.
Limebottle07 1 month ago
Beta Key :P :D
elhuecoeculo 1 month ago
Weaver popped his ulti thats why his health was full again.
venom2802 1 month ago
Oh god, you're Scottish?
That's awesome :D
(I haven't watched your videos much with sound til now ^^)
TheVirtigo 1 month ago
great idea to speed up the boring parts of the play by speeding it up but before you record just time the first blood and any really important gank and then just look at the list so u can slow it down when ganks or fights happen. also in the beginning of a cast if theres not a whole lot going on make sure to talk about IN DEPTH analysis of the team comps. who has a better gank team, who has a harder carry late game, and who has the best cc for teamfights.
overall great!
petarded12 1 month ago
This is just my OP but I don't think you really needed wand, you probably could have gone two clarity potions and been good. Enchant wasn't doing many spells and the best weaver can do is go invis 3 times and his mana basically is gone, maybe he can do his swarm but that is 4 charges. But I get it having a wand can help in a lane but only if the opponents spam.Peeves: No one brought dust or wards and no courier. If that Weaver was any good you guys would lost just for that.
Akuma2unlimited 1 month ago