I hate to have to be that guy, and I'm not being an ass. The music is decent, but dude you really need to work on your lyrics. This nowhere near Cake quality yet. But keep it up.
thank you very much for listening, watching, and commenting. I appreciate your honest assessment. I agree this is nowhere near Cake quality nor was it intended to be. It is not one of my best songs either, but I had fun writing and recording all the parts and rapping/singing it and shooting the video too! Again, thanks for sharing your opinion.
For some reason, the spoken parts remind me of the Frank Zappa song "I am the slime".
PinkTorpedo11 1 day ago in playlist My Original Music Videos
hey ive been wondering how do you put a song on awebsite like urs for people to download?
cause i got a few originals but i cant find a site..
jennyrthedrummer 2 years ago
I hate to have to be that guy, and I'm not being an ass. The music is decent, but dude you really need to work on your lyrics. This nowhere near Cake quality yet. But keep it up.
SedBetter 3 years ago
thank you very much for listening, watching, and commenting. I appreciate your honest assessment. I agree this is nowhere near Cake quality nor was it intended to be. It is not one of my best songs either, but I had fun writing and recording all the parts and rapping/singing it and shooting the video too! Again, thanks for sharing your opinion.
jericgarner 3 years ago
This song kicks man! Do I hear some Cake influence?
JFowler89 3 years ago
Good call...I'm a HUGE Cake fan!
jericgarner 3 years ago
J! (that'll have to do instead of blaspheming) you are one creative mm... guy!
Will your CD come with bonus DVD? Please.
noDsliw 3 years ago