Breathe - Vancouver Film School (VFS)

[1234526610]

Shit, I posted it twice

[1234526610]

Shit, I posted it twice

[1234526610]

First off, I would like to say that I am amazed at the length of the green line below this piece of dogshit that is supposed to be a short film. The music is in my opinion beyond cliche, the dialogue is below substandard and poorly executed and the director is trying too bloody hard. I should know. I wrote it. My original script was fairly acceptable dogshit, but the director tuned it into unbearable insufferable dogshit. I am not trying to avoid critisism, just to clarify my position. TB.

[1234526610]

First off, I would like to say that I am amazed at the length of the green line below this piece of dogshit that is supposed to be a short film. The music is in my opinion beyond cliche, the dialogue is below substandard and poorly executed and the director is trying too bloody hard. I should know. I wrote it. My original script was fairly acceptable dogshit, but the director tuned it into unbearable insufferable dogshit. I am not trying to avoid critisism, just to clarify my position.

[fibee1380]

sorry but the characters just didnt fit, he was so freaking ugly, she so pretty, and it was like they were in love and their relationship was coming to an end or something and they had their last few hrs together, or something, its hard to grasp, i had to say i cringed through the lot as it gave off a kind of peadophillic vibe to it.... i know they were both obviously consential adults, but he was old enough to be her father, eew! either that or she was a prostitute or something! weird!

[michelewilla]

it is a really interesting concept. i like how the film leaves you wanting

[rookie16]

yeah idk i thought the acting was great keep it up

[cwazyplatypuses]

i do not enjoy the cinematography of this. the dialogue is also really terrible. the concept itself isn't terrible. but the execution was poor.

[jaseth1337]

The dialogue was a pile of pretentious crap and I spent most of the video cringing and waiting for it to end. I usually enjoy VFS productions or at least try to be nice when I mention things I didn't like.. but this was nothing except terrible. 0/5

[RyanHeartProd]

Absolutely phenomenal. I loved it. Truth be told. I was paying attention to the acting and not the dialog specifically. but I've taken a look at vfs acting before and it wasn't really getting me there. If these are vfs acting student please tell me. I am looking into a career in the acting field. so it be beneficial to me to know the school is producing actors of this caliber .

[RhysGreene]

lost me at "not yet at least"

[s0che]

generic and credits weel done...

[devo711]

Couldn't get passed the dialogue.

[philip711videomaster]

im in grade 8 live in vancouver and there are kids who come high useing pot to clase

[Viczko]

GRADE 8 and you still don't know how to spell.....

[philip711videomaster]

i didnt bother to thats not the point

[mooey13]

So if you were write an essay and the point isn't to use correct grammar and punctuation, you wouldn't because that's not the point?

[CleverNameStudios]

the dialogue seemed unnatural. but still a vary good film.

[fuckthissignup]

Good lord, what a load of worthless pretentious crap.

[dckdckmoose]

The dialogue just feels so unnatural.

[RDJim]

I'll give you 5 stars just for the boob shots.

[voyeurdug]

(*yawn*)... lost interest @ 3:00.

[QuitePossiblyANinja]

i dont get it

[popaddict]

Nice premise and I liked the ending with her opening the shades and showing him light. But a lot of the dialogue felt too philosophical and forced, like it didn't fit the characters/situation - made it hard to be sympathetic towards the guy's character.

[ZachariahLogan]

hm,,mmm Whats That smell?

Oh wait, emmy Much?

[jdroker]

good acting...best i've seen in a vancuver film

[xaver54]

this would have been much better without dialogue

[DROOOGYDUGG]

agreed

[Medievalfilms]

Eh fourth ... not very impressive ... let's jazz it up

YEAH!! FOURTH!! MEDIEVALFILMS!!!!! yeah okay epic fail on my part I'll shut up

nice video by the way

[weirdoinchains]

3.5 hours WOW!!

[Panosole]

Me second.....lol

[sebbexs]

First!