LYRICIST CYPHER - MR MEREDITH CALLIN OUT TIMOTHY DE LA GHETTO AKA TRAPHIK

[TheyCallMeCrayola]

Made me cry really bad, cuz my girl was pregnant and were only 15, and abortion was the easy way out, I cry myself to sleep every night... I feel you on this rap bro :'(

[bridgebreaker1]

made me cry cuz my girls pregnant  and idk what to do...im really young

[MicheeMee7]

An incredibly touching rap....You have talent young man....

[bdx96]

I am prochoice but more along prolife. Every child deserves to live. It's the parents fault for not using protection. If you weren't ready to have you shouldn't have had sex. If you knew you could't support yourself or another person, it's your fault. But I also say if a woman was raped she could have the choice of aborting.

[Xhaterlover]

I can't say I agree with the message but I do respect it & appreciate the delivery. Personally, I believe that it is completely the woman's choice. A man never truly has to deal with the consequences of having an unplanned for/unprepared for child. If my sister had had her child, her entire life would've crumbled & people are quick to judge a woman for making that decision, but a man can't understand that position & the pain behind that decision. My sister suffered over that choice for days upo

[LinnyRin]

I feel where you are coming from with this, but it's more important that women should be able to keep their right to choose. Having it, giving it for adoption, or aborting it. If my mother hadn't gotten an abortion when she was to young to support it, I wouldn't exist right now. I was wanted, and so was my little sister. How many children have rough lives because nobody can support them? I think it's more wrong to let them suffer from things like neglect, abuse, or starvation.

[91gsx4g63]

Thank u, u said wut I couldn't my girl was thinking of doin tht wit my kid tht suppose to be born nov 23 2011

[ghostin415]

TRAPHIK WINS... LIKE IF YOU AGREE

[prod1gy671]

@ghostin415 this isnt competition............its about all of these dope rappers raping about real shit......nvm about them calling out ppl............just thinkk of the messege they are sending out

[FendiAndThenDonna]

nice topic, and good intentions, but the lyrics could use some work and i think you should articulate more

[182Jman]

i almost cried dude

[LocoBonecrusha]

Hey man I really appreciate the lyrics and the topic you chose to write about but your lyrics could use work. you used something 3X and thats just not real good rhyming. im nott trying to put you down or anything but im just trying to give you some constructive critism

[nchollywood]

pure fricken poetry man. props :)

[thamrsx2010]

dang this is crazy cuz i thought i was pregnant and my mom tld me that if i was i wudd have to geht an abortion buht if she didnt abort me y wuddi abort my owon yu feel me..!

[MelDaArtist]

@thamrsx2010 i feel u 100%

[thamrsx2010]

@MelDaArtist thnx..! this song ritee hur almost madee mee cry..! wen my mom tld mee that i wanteed to run away buht i didnt bcuz i <3 my mama waay too much..!

[XxultrahollowxX]

@thamrsx2010 I feel you awesome grammar

[GamerGrl90]

@thamrsx2010 huh ?

[fableofsky]

real deep shit my nigga

[TJayy108]

nice

[AIchemistKid]

I wish people would come out with more stuff that Common folk can relate to.. Thumbs up Brodie

[nascaraddict329]

I'll be honest bro-

shit was deep

strong lyrics

weak flow

overall i would say it was ALRIGHT. just a little constructive criticism man.

[gutarhero32]

Damn Homie......This Is Real......

[superPINAYwonton]

i take it you are pro-life.

it was beautiful though regardless of your view on the topic.

[Rhythmsynonym]

While I disagree with what you're saying in your song, I'm still glad to see someone rapping about what they beleive in...it means alot more than most rap lyrics these days, and hip hop needs people that are willing to rap about real issues

[DivineWriteTheoryTV]

Check out the video response I posted, "Rough Draft - Role Model Verse". I want everyone to see that because I put a lot of hard work into those lyrics and I hope y'all lyricists can respect that. Leave a comment with some feedback too, once again I'd really appreciate it. Thanks

[cakefete2]

listening to this i took your same topic and killed it too call me out and ill do the verse

[eXclusiveMara]

thiss sh-t wasss off , DEEP brah .

[royalkingace]

NAW SORRY BUT TRAPHIK KILLS THIS BY FAR HE FLOWS NICE AND LYRICS ARE RAW and he went deeper in it then you

BUT U ALRIGHT

[Wolfina63]

:o This is Awesome! :D <3

[xXKiTheifXx]

Wow that's some deep some!

Great job!

[Vroom65]

Traphik KILLS This. but yours still good.

[Sims2Lameria]

they do got finger nails lol !!!

i sall it on this movie Juno !!

[S8xyGurl]

i like, i like

[laurentoye]

this was good but i think 'timothy dela ghetto's' is better.

this is still real good.x

[Sims2Lameria]

yeah your right ! but he did good to !!

[laneharper21]

whats the song hes rappin over?

[pitchblack8781]

deep this is so deep amazing

[swagz845]

dat shit was deep fam,

i was def feelin dis

[Jesiikuh]

amazingf

[donchaaaa]

when they are aborted they are merely cells o.o...

[amine9876]

@donchaaaa

actually it depends "When" u decide to abort the children...Some are almost ready to be born and they get aborted...i know...

[donchaaaa]

most doctors dont abort after they have matured that far

[amine9876]

@donchaaaa

nothing is impossible haven't u realized that yet? Were living on earth here...theres some sick fucks that do it, not all of them but some do it even that far...

[donchaaaa]

i never said nothing was impossible and thats why i said most.

[zcombs15]

@amine9876 nothing is impossible? slam a regular and untampored revolving door

[amine9876]

@zcombs15

????????

[zcombs15]

@amine9876 one of your comments said "nothing is impossible" so i replied with that

[n3phlim]

wtf is up with ur flow/execution

[meloD281]

damn, thats pretty deep. i like it when ppl actually rap about something meaningful and that happens on a daily basis.

good job man =]

[o0cwalk0o]

Why is the fucking intro so long.

This sucked. Sound like you gotza dick up yo throat.

[Ramiillszx]

This Dope. Props.,

[Peachesfolife]

i like this. it's real and deep. people who aren't ready to have children simply shouldn't have sex... but then again if someone is bold enough to kill their unborn child imagine what they would they would put the child through if they actually decided to keep it.

[BellaLove92]

he may sound like lots of others but atleast he talks about real shit unlike that other rap about 'gettin booty' and 'fuckin hos'

[Wolfina63]

@BellaLove92 agreed, :) this makes me slowly like rap, I really dont seem to care much for today's rappers, well most of them.

[ixPeaCexi]

I love this.

Im against abortion, you're really good.

But i would've aborted you, lollol! jkjk.

Im just kidding about the last part, hahaha.

Anyway, you are really good and i am against abortion xD

[bummedoutforlife]

i understand what youre saying

and i don't think personally that moms should abort their children

but they should have a choice

cause if you take the option out

what happens to the women who are raped and become pregnant?

do they have to give birth to a child that represents such a horrible trauma?

do they have to abort their children illegally and dangerously? cause abortions been going on before it was legalized

[bummedoutforlife]

do the children of the moms who were forced to keep their kids have to suffer a lifetime of resentment because their moms were ready? or worse suffer physically cause the mom can't handle it nor support them financially?

[MustBeFiend]

very dope the way you flow

chill beat

good words

why aren't you on the radio ?

[zzz33333]

because he sounds exactly like everybody else?

[Girlfren15]

so good!

[lovemaker912]

man you got talent. this is real deep

[MelDaArtist]

thanx lovemaker

[LiamBTV]

Wow mate that was great! just the way u put it in the childs point of view haha Man GREAT! made me laugh even though its not a laughin matter still 5 stars !

[MelDaArtist]

thanx liambtv

[babygirlxoxification]

THIS MADE ME CRY

SO BEAUTIFUL

thank you for this.

[MelDaArtist]

i didnt mean to make u cry, but thanx for taking time out to listen to this.

[qavigal]

@MelDaArtist this was really beautiful, thank you for bringing that perspective

[kala989]

Well, not to hate, but even though this was probably not on the beat on purpose, it still just really bugs me. It just sounds too much like you're trying to use a metronome but failing or something.

The idea is great though, nice job :)

[zzz33333]

which part of this rhymes? i can't figure it out.

[MelDaArtist]

what part doesnt?

[WowWowWes]

Does it have to ryhme?

[zzz33333]

... is it rap?

[WowWowWes]

rap doesn't have to rhyme.. you listen to the lyrics?

[zzz33333]

"rap doesn't have to rhyme?"

then what makes it rap...?

[MustBeFiend]

rap is the way you flow with words and how to say it. basically a poem and not all poems need to rhyme to sound good.

[Atrain009]

Rhythmic pronunciation.

[2xN]

There's this thing called imperfect rhymes.

[omie805]

deep, truth. much love keep it up -DJ O

[MehTewb]

this is amazing

heart touching.

great job.

[mariopyro]

wow aboration...this was sickk all the asme though man nice linees

[uniquelyDEExD]

Omg that made me really sad!

It could be improved a little bit but it's already really gooood. I liike it.

[BigBlack81]

Agreed.

[killerdx456]

this is so nice

[m1ztuhmichael]

i agree

[killerdx456]

are 4 real this is mad nice mad truth

[breakerankle]

ur flow doesnt even go with the beat

[Dragooo000n]

DAMN

[IIShOrTaE69II]

REAL TALK

[oOBreakOutRecordsOo]

wow, best cypher so far,

[tajiamgohda]

really really good concept lyrics cooduh been a bit better thoo

[307am]

I don't agree, but you're a good rapper.

[KtotheSallday]

this is so ye

[TheyCallMeTaco]

fuck this is so under rated

best lyricist cypher

[T3HTRuTH]

i think traphiks was better

[PauloAtienzajr]

i agree

[xKrEaToRxBkBx]

madd deep ill verse ur flow isz so unique

[jusfruckinaround]

serious track this cypher was best one yet best rappers called out

[FameisFuture]

this is rap?

fuck no.

this is poetry.

nothing less of an artform.

this is what the industry needs.

BiG props homie

[TheNintendude64]

Well said, today's popular "rap" is all garbage... Why can't today's rap be like this? This type of poetry is what rap started as and I can only hope it returns this way... Great cypher MeldaArtist! 5 stars...

[OldschoolDresta]

coz kids all over the world like the useless flow of the new school shit.......even if they dont understand english.....rap is like a fashion now so the oldschool style is dead...rappers dont even put effort in their songs, look the new rappers lyrics, its like 10 sentence only

[bucktownsolja]

I don't understand why people listen to that kind of rap music. I seriously think people get dumber by listening to it.

[AMkoreann]

what? so yo rpefer listening to shit taht says crank taht cameltoe or cndy shop all the fucking time than real everyday problems?

grow up, this kind of rap is poetry with rhythm

[bucktownsolja]

Let me put this as kindly as I can. My comment was a reply to what OldschoolDresta said. Read carefully before posting a reply. I'm gonna give you the benefit of the doubt since replied comments don't always show up correctly.

[AMkoreann]

oo dude srry, didnt read the comment below.

[bucktownsolja]

No proble. Like I said I know they don't show up as replies until like a day after you post it.

[killerdx456]

u crazy

[bucktownsolja]

I'm crazy for what?

[OutFlowProductions]

The Truth

[DjXzo]

what happened to the picture u had before?

[MelDaArtist]

youtube deleted it said it was too graphic

[xXDrybanannaXx]

Im for abortion, but good rap.

[FrostByte808]

great job myself. how u like me now world

[TheRenaissanceKid]

i like this

[abodunrin541]

awsome

[munkeybree]

great job mel

[nellaizflip]

damnn the track is mad deep and NICE !

[smerf234]

deeeeeepppp

[songsonlee]

Thats from the heart man. Thats some real deep stuff.

[ATJCVIDS]

you know what im think ?

Why doesnt this guy have more views

message was deep

best cypher right here

[MelDaArtist]

i appreciate it, it did have more views but youtube deleted the previous video due to the pic. so i had to repost another one

[tray109]

is there a way u can post up a Download site? this is some MAD lyrics

[MelDaArtist]

no prob, i got u

[tray109]

Koo, just send me the link when u got it bro :]

[ahmed111911]

youtube is getting so gay :@

they're deleting everything...

[kiddkaos1]

shame they deleted it..

other pic has really strong message :/

[MelDaArtist]

i agree, nobody saw it as grossed out, but its goes against they guidelines

[AnissaMusique]

This reminds me of Nick Cannon's old song 'Can I Live?' but you're deep! It's great!

[lobosguard32]

did youtube delete your video cuz of the dead fetus??

[MelDaArtist]

yea

[krump2ball]

damnn kidd thiss is deep yunqq

[duncan3d3]

deep message goes strait to your head

[xKrEaToRxBkBx]

deep lyrics 5*

[TUNIT510]

u is hella raw

[Soru475]

so u had to put awhole new video becuz of a picture that's retarded yo.lol

[slimshady104]

nice

that other pic wasnt that graphic

[JRT159]

this was deep as hell..i think imma like this subject out of all of em..nice lyrics..

Missstah Me-Re-dith!

[allstarqtpie]

that was incredible.

your message is deep.

[aarong18]

Another nIce AsS Track By Mel

[OfficialTwigg]

dope as hell but didnt Traphik get called out already?

[MelDaArtist]

thanx, yea he got called out by me, cause i had to delete the other video

[BloodNguyen88]

wat happen to the first one???

[MelDaArtist]

youtube deleted it cause the pic was too graphic

[BloodNguyen88]

now that is stupid

[MelDaArtist]

i agree

[BABYDx101]

Pretty nice.

Love the lyrics.

[rc0503]

i like

[TheLastConnect]

once again nice work fam..real original u got reall potential at making it big...check my channel tell me what ya think if ya got time....U might find this kid got some skillz..no lie....be ezz nd come out WIT SOME NEW SHIT..lol....5 stars....

TheLastConnect

[paypa5tack]

Wow! I had already commented on this one! Why did you upload it again? Great job again tho! And tranxxaction should click more info before talking ish! Lol. Stupid people!

[DSwag93]

Dude calm your nerves..

[MelDaArtist]

it just finished uploading , its on there now though, good looks

[haphmanhaphamazing]

sick son!!!