The smiling looks a bit forced, not natural
titodude 9 months ago
This could be so much better if the guy who recorded the video had better knowledge to how this should look, sound, and be written.
Not to mention the edits and the directing were 80% lacking to help gather this persons thoughts.
I sure hope this was not a paid project in any way or form.
Is this a test sample for someone?
islandboystv 1 year ago
i like the approach but there are two issues:
- the verbage needs to be simplified
- engineers don't wear suit & ties
jpmorgan187 1 year ago
But we need someone who can play tennis and lift weights!!
joss885 2 years ago
Awsome! Idea!
QWILDER 3 years ago
Very impressive resume however, your presentation is too slow and at times you pause like you are trying to remember what you've done.
...Good start - treat this one like a rehearsal and redo it with speed and more feeling - try to smile.
tek2master 3 years ago 2
too slow - get interesting - you've got 10 seconds to gain attention.
tip - speed it up - get to point and ask yourself "what would be interesting to me" - then reproduce it
nathanielbriggs 3 years ago
So! What the hell are you telling us for? 182 jigawatts for that ass you pretentious bastard. Your the face of America that no one wants to look at.
professortj2002 3 years ago
The smiling looks a bit forced, not natural
titodude 9 months ago
This could be so much better if the guy who recorded the video had better knowledge to how this should look, sound, and be written.
Not to mention the edits and the directing were 80% lacking to help gather this persons thoughts.
I sure hope this was not a paid project in any way or form.
Is this a test sample for someone?
islandboystv 1 year ago
i like the approach but there are two issues:
- the verbage needs to be simplified
- engineers don't wear suit & ties
jpmorgan187 1 year ago
But we need someone who can play tennis and lift weights!!
joss885 2 years ago
Awsome! Idea!
QWILDER 3 years ago
Very impressive resume however, your presentation is too slow and at times you pause like you are trying to remember what you've done.
...Good start - treat this one like a rehearsal and redo it with speed and more feeling - try to smile.
tek2master 3 years ago 2
too slow - get interesting - you've got 10 seconds to gain attention.
tip - speed it up - get to point and ask yourself "what would be interesting to me" - then reproduce it
nathanielbriggs 3 years ago
So! What the hell are you telling us for? 182 jigawatts for that ass you pretentious bastard. Your the face of America that no one wants to look at.
professortj2002 3 years ago