haha when i read "my room is 1234 come visit me sometime!" in my mind i was like how the heck will she memorize that...THEENN i read it again and realized just to count from 1-4...haha
OMG! Love it! Loved the part where Selena comes and Demi and Nick fight and stuff xD Love that kind of things , it happend to me but not in a boarding school a regular xD
I really don't see the problem!!!! I like it but I hear people sayng stuff like But or its in the middle!!!! Like THEY could do better!!!!! ANYWHO I LOVED it keep up the awesome job!!!!
this is a good outline but , i know im like the only one on youtube who wants more discription. so if any advice, be more discriptive! but, so far soo good !!!
aw lol demi and nick are cute [not as bf/gf I mean as best friends] they're so funny XD I am gonna watch every single one! you have a very creative mind in thinking of stories ur very smart of what i can see only smart ppl make this good of vids
personally i like! its differnet in all the other typical nelena/jemi stories the couples are always bffs b4 they get together and i think its cool the way you mixed it a bit!
hahhahhahahahahahahah! that was so funny!!!!lol! i like it but that was the funniest thing in the world! when demi said NICCKKKKKYYYYYY! i imagined something comepletely hilarious! your writting is the best EVER! love it make another! but i still want you to go on with it never goes right!
Wow!!!! I laughed soooo hard!!!!! Demis like a kid and I love it!!!!!
vzrocker12 5 months ago
haha when i read "my room is 1234 come visit me sometime!" in my mind i was like how the heck will she memorize that...THEENN i read it again and realized just to count from 1-4...haha
Ns1998nS 6 months ago
lol demi is really hiper in this story lol 8-D
majorsexybeast123 7 months ago
GIDDY UP!WERE GONNA BE LATE! hahaha thats funny :)
teamedward1100000 9 months ago
Haha Funny x
Chelz1999 1 year ago
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Haha tthis is funny x
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Chelz1999 1 year ago
Goodd.itz like wow!!!Good start.
WeloveMickeyMouse2 1 year ago
its not good its not bad its awesome
TheSkittlesgurl16 1 year ago
DANG! IM SO OBSESSED WITH THESE STORIES! :)
tifaniamber 1 year ago
I like its good!
teris12 1 year ago
nemi are like borther and sister they are soo funny
CoralAndCarly 1 year ago
haha very funny ((:
margiee96 1 year ago
me likey!
marandasunflower 1 year ago
Hahaha! i like it:()
it was funnyy.
well the demi && nick part.l0l
kayy22ily 1 year ago
good.....hah i love demi here.....she and nick r the best bff.....HAH lol......XD
TheXoxojonasxoxo 1 year ago
THe ending was so super funny ... giddy up! were going to be late! lmao ... gud
lupita9613 2 years ago
lmao demi's so strange
xxsweetdemonxx 2 years ago
very good!!!!!!!!!!
ninahpinxexa 2 years ago 2
LOL soooo good!!
AngelzRule33 2 years ago
Demi: GIDDY UP! WERE GOING TO BE LATE!
xD I love nick and demi so cute!
CookiesRock97 2 years ago 2
PERFECT!!!!
♥
EcilaCrown 2 years ago
lol piggy back rides *sigh*
MadsandNads 2 years ago
good so far can't wait for #2
BubblegumLUVER90210 2 years ago
OMG! Love it! Loved the part where Selena comes and Demi and Nick fight and stuff xD Love that kind of things , it happend to me but not in a boarding school a regular xD
xTheVampireDiariesx 2 years ago 2
yay i'm going to a jonas brothers concert tomorrow!!!
jazzdcurlyfries 2 years ago 2
awsome good
CampRock988 2 years ago
defoo good :)
ilovemileycyrus09 2 years ago
aw love nick and demi :)
metrojonas116 2 years ago
i like nelena but nick and demi funny :)
ComdeyKitShowKids 2 years ago
I really don't see the problem!!!! I like it but I hear people sayng stuff like But or its in the middle!!!! Like THEY could do better!!!!! ANYWHO I LOVED it keep up the awesome job!!!!
101HotKya 2 years ago
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that was eh. but i think its like ya know... any other beginning story. its the first. boring. sounds like it should get good though!!!
soon2beauthor 2 years ago
this was good!! 2 me nick and demi seem very active and the bestest friends:)
royanne65 2 years ago
i like it
InTheLandofLove44 2 years ago
that was awesome and hilarious the part with Nick and Demi and the piggyback ride hahahahahahahahahahaha
Plurplelova9 2 years ago
AWESOMe
i really love it
ur amazing
hannahcska97 2 years ago
that was rele good! lol
mileyroxmysox59 2 years ago
i like it but some lines are kinda cheesy but other then that awesome!!!
bubblesrock19 2 years ago
luv it
yemenprincess 2 years ago
well its in the middle at the moment
i think you need to calm it down abit :P
its good though and ill continue reading them :D
Meggysh 2 years ago
i love it:)
diadiutza 2 years ago
good! haha i LOVE nemi in this story!
myworldpeace 2 years ago
horrible horrible horrible i going 2 read rest c if i like it or not if i do i tell u so kay?
I angry at my laptop so i try 2 keep sent. shrt
SORRY FOR RUDENESS!!! i really sorry! Sorry!
DLandJDwillneverbe 2 years ago
AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
summerrules17193 2 years ago
XD
hey is this the first ep?
TheJonasBrotherLuver 3 years ago
yup
Chapters2008 3 years ago
i love this this is soooo cool
JoeJonasLover11 3 years ago
demi is a little on the wild side.....
BUUUUUUUUUTTTTTTT IIIIIIIIII LLLLLLLLLLLLOOOOOOOOOOOOVVVVVVVVVVVVVEEEEEEEEEEEEEE IIIIIIIIIIIITTTTTTTTTTTTT
DjKForJonasBrothers 3 years ago
i luv it!!
iluvcookiies3x3 3 years ago
omg nick and demi are so funny i love them and i love ur story :)
keep going plezzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz
xxxjunoxxx987 3 years ago
this is a good outline but , i know im like the only one on youtube who wants more discription. so if any advice, be more discriptive! but, so far soo good !!!
stardot365 3 years ago
hhais demi on drugs
//
WaterLemon218 3 years ago
pretty Good!
- -katy
katy7bird 3 years ago
aw lol demi and nick are cute [not as bf/gf I mean as best friends] they're so funny XD I am gonna watch every single one! you have a very creative mind in thinking of stories ur very smart of what i can see only smart ppl make this good of vids
sensational016 3 years ago 2
Demi:THAT WAS THE LAMEST PICKUP LINE EVER!
Nick: IF JOE SAID THAT TO YOU YOU WOULD BE FLORRED!
Demi:WELL WERE NOT TALKING ABOUT ME AND JOE ARE WE? JUST FOR THAT YOU HAVE TO GIVE ME A PIGGY BACK TO SCIENCE!
Nick: FINE!Well it was nice meeting you Selena...see you around!
Demi: GIDDY UP! WERE GOING TO BE LATE!
Nick: ok going!*runs off*
Selena: I think I'm goingt to like it here *smiles and walks off to the guidance office*
LOL i LOVE IT
jbluver4ever17 3 years ago
my fav part btw i luv it!!
ronluvr 3 years ago
really good
anemiandjemilover 3 years ago
haha Nick and Demi are so funny
i like this series already(:
AllyAlison4 3 years ago
i like it
hsm2luver101 3 years ago
baddd... JK! gOOD!!! :D
iLuv2LOLx3 3 years ago
haha its ALREADY awesome!!!!
blondepride1992 3 years ago
totally awsome!
thats lyk my frendship with me and my best frend[[talkinn bout demi and nick;)]]
love it x x x x
TamaraBaybee 3 years ago
funny LOVE IT!
bestfriends002356 3 years ago
LOL love it
demiandselenafan662 3 years ago
neither funny!
MelanieandEter 3 years ago
Demi:THAT WAS THE LAMEST PICKUP LINE EVER!
Nick: IF JOE SAID THAT TO YOU YOU WOULD BE FLORRED!
Demi:WELL WERE NOT TALKING ABOUT ME AND JOE ARE WE? JUST FOR THAT YOU HAVE TO GIVE ME A PIGGY BACK TO SCIENCE!
Nick: FINE!Well it was nice meeting you Selena...see you around!
Demi: I'm Demi by the way! See you! My room is 1234 come vist me sometime!
Selena: OK thanks.....
Demi: GIDDY UP! WERE GOING TO BE LATE!
Nick: ok going!*runs off*
hahahahahahahahahahahaha that was so funny!
blackstreaksforduma7 3 years ago 2
Nice, I think its funny.
Nick and Demi best friends awsome.
aweesomecousins 3 years ago
really good =] !!!! xD!!
FiNdYourSoulx3x 3 years ago
sounds great
hippielovespeace 3 years ago
i love this!
ImaginaryRockstarr 3 years ago
are dem and nick dating?
awesome epsisode!!!!!!!
poweradefan6 3 years ago
personally i like! its differnet in all the other typical nelena/jemi stories the couples are always bffs b4 they get together and i think its cool the way you mixed it a bit!
Xdanceluver96X 3 years ago 2
thanks :)
Chapters2008 3 years ago
It was Great!!
thisisreallyjanice 3 years ago
loved it so amazing
BrittanyJ102 3 years ago
awesome!
XMELOVEYOUX 3 years ago
i loveeee it!!
kiweequeen 3 years ago
love it, it's really funny.
xxmelodiezacloverxx 3 years ago
LOVE IT!! nemi moment!! lol
JustLivinLife132 3 years ago
GREAT!!! I LUV IT ND ITS FUNNY!!!
jonasbrothersluber 3 years ago
good:)
jemiandnelenaluver 3 years ago
sorry not good
or bad
ITS AMAZING AWESOME
YOU GOTTA KEEP MAKING THESE LOVEDEMI XO
, so good you made me to capital letters
feel privalidged
DemiDuhh 3 years ago
haha this is funny!!
heyitzsaemyi 3 years ago
awesome! i didnt even no u made these!
zacnaj 3 years ago
lol!! demi is soooo cute!and funny!and it was good...more than good! it was--------supercalafagilistic!!!
puppyeyes444 3 years ago
it's awesome.!
ashniejoo 3 years ago
Amazing!!
CraziePplz 3 years ago
I LOVE IT!!!!!
inspiration1225 3 years ago
haha nice like it! demi is so funny lol
vietgirlproductionz 3 years ago
haha cute!!
VanessaRose88 3 years ago
that was awesome...love it
ana8964 3 years ago
its good. you should make it.
demilovatofan1406 3 years ago
love it its amazing i love demi personality in this one
jonasbrothers700 3 years ago
love this series so far! (:
hah demi and nick are funny
itsJemiNelenaSeries 3 years ago
make more of this and it never goes right!! I LOVE THIS ALREADYY!!
stashhjonas 3 years ago
haha wow demi
spazz4ever 3 years ago
So you like it?
Chapters2008 3 years ago
YES!!! haha it seems like it's gonna be AMAZING lol can't wait to read more!!
spazz4ever 3 years ago
lol, I'll loving Dreams arent meant to come true, by the way!! and thanks
Chapters2008 3 years ago
lol no prob this is soo good so far haha and thanks haha ppl seem to like it which is good haha
spazz4ever 3 years ago
ahhhhh i loved it
Bracefaceox 3 years ago
i love it!!
morganxoxoJB 3 years ago
i luv this one start writing eppie 1
chocolate9723 3 years ago
Great write more can't wait
azeriel90 3 years ago
awesome!
cpwlvr121314 3 years ago
omg i love demi's character! this is good!!! i love it. its HILARIOUS!
jemiandnelenalovers 3 years ago
great! and i love the boarding school part!
myselfandir1 3 years ago
hahhahhahahahahahahah! that was so funny!!!!lol! i like it but that was the funniest thing in the world! when demi said NICCKKKKKYYYYYY! i imagined something comepletely hilarious! your writting is the best EVER! love it make another! but i still want you to go on with it never goes right!
thatdarns101 3 years ago
i will but I am running out of ideas for that one, so I am going to take a break and work on this one :)
Chapters2008 3 years ago
Thats fine just don't end it! everyone is ending all of their good series but i'm glad that i like this one!
thatdarns101 3 years ago
love it!! :)
bnp920 3 years ago
lol!
its really funny
and its good really really good :)
jen17hilary 3 years ago
I love it! :D
haha, demi's character.
Smiley986Craszy 3 years ago
awesome!!
=]
rexix990 3 years ago
honestly i loved it!
it might be as good or better than it never goes right which is incredibly awesome already!
keep going
watch my series i posted new chapts!
LovingJonas10 3 years ago
really thanks :) And I know I have been commenting but I guess they havent been showing up :P I like your series :)
Chapters2008 3 years ago
good very good actually
flamekid700 3 years ago
that was funny
i should continue it
jemiandnelenastorys 3 years ago
haha loved it!!
BornxaxDisaster 3 years ago