what a shitty piece of work. the writing is weak, dop is good, directing isnt much but the story's not original. must have been written by some (child) who watches crime and mob movies. i bet you the writer is fat too. faggot.
what a shitty piece of work. the writing is weak, dop is good, directing isnt much but the story's not original. must have been written by some (child) who watches crime and mob movies. i bet you the writer is fat too. faggot.
what a shitty piece of work. the writing is weak, dop is good, directing isnt much but the story's not original. must have been written by some (child) who watches crime and mob movies. i bet you the writer is fat too. faggot.
@vfss33 You're either the writer or you know him, because you described him with the utmost acute accuracy (though I can't speak for the homosexual quote personally)
Eye lines are a little jarring 4:35-4:38. Seems like he should be looking camera right or Visa verse for her, to match his eye line. But besides that, I love the contrastness:)
As a viewer, I want to know more about the scenario and the world you have built, which is the the most important thing for a writer. Definitely one of the better Portfolio Shorts that I've seen.
Currently the students are writing them in term 5 and they are being produced in term 6. However, new students joining us from January will get the opportunity to start working on their port shorts in term 4.
this was so creative and on poiint, it was amazing. this had such a great plot, and the sudden change in beats were in perfect timing. the last beat was a real turning point. Amazing.
One out of 100 VFS clips that I would endorse. This is qualtiy work, from the direction, acting, photograhy, plot, you name it. the choice of a black & white tone gave it an axtra edge.
Great work for the time you had. Nice twist at the end, though the last line is a little hard to hear.. But nicely done. One question though... I don't think the hands who held sloan were creditet, what about that? Very nice done..
Just hoping he isn't going to kill the little child, don't think he will though.
i.. dont get it xD
HeatherSannachan 3 months ago
VFS is such a SHIT Academy, as are most Film schools. 'Teach' people to be 'creative'. Give me a fucking break.
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what a shitty piece of work. the writing is weak, dop is good, directing isnt much but the story's not original. must have been written by some (child) who watches crime and mob movies. i bet you the writer is fat too. faggot.
vfss33 1 year ago
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what a shitty piece of work. the writing is weak, dop is good, directing isnt much but the story's not original. must have been written by some (child) who watches crime and mob movies. i bet you the writer is fat too. faggot.
vfss33 1 year ago
what a shitty piece of work. the writing is weak, dop is good, directing isnt much but the story's not original. must have been written by some (child) who watches crime and mob movies. i bet you the writer is fat too. faggot.
vfss33 1 year ago
@vfss33 You're either the writer or you know him, because you described him with the utmost acute accuracy (though I can't speak for the homosexual quote personally)
1234526610 4 months ago
nice..some of the better stuff ive seen come out of VFS..
this actually had a plot, good writing, solid acting, and it 'worked' as a 5 minute short.
good job man
DRESTA12345678910 2 years ago
really nice script, Well acted!! silverfox was excellent actor! Well they both were!
momentlondon2 2 years ago
LEADBELLY!
cutaxelem 2 years ago
I loved it, great work! I gotta say the plot was magnificent!
comedyfreak124 2 years ago
Brilliant. Some funny angles in this one but it turned out well. I'm not sure, do they just film for 3 and a half hours or write and film it?
gusthelesswise 2 years ago
Woooow this one is great, the acting, the writing, camera work! LOVE IT!!!!
redrumtd 2 years ago
nice ....job ˆ-ˆ
rhaustein 2 years ago
that's great!
NicolaLovesMusic 2 years ago
I like the lighting.
I wonder, was this bleach bypassed when processed?
iamthedeus 2 years ago
good stuff sammy boy! likin d writin ... it bess
Olivermilne17 2 years ago
Eye lines are a little jarring 4:35-4:38. Seems like he should be looking camera right or Visa verse for her, to match his eye line. But besides that, I love the contrastness:)
TheEarBuds 2 years ago
As a viewer, I want to know more about the scenario and the world you have built, which is the the most important thing for a writer. Definitely one of the better Portfolio Shorts that I've seen.
How far into the course was this film made?
AlexanderKing2008 2 years ago
Thanks, glad you enjoyed the video.
Currently the students are writing them in term 5 and they are being produced in term 6. However, new students joining us from January will get the opportunity to start working on their port shorts in term 4.
VancouverFilmSchool 2 years ago
One of the best pieces I have ever seen from VFS, amazing job! 5/5
jaseth1337 2 years ago
very well done, but i didn't like the music on this.
LadiesmanYovany 2 years ago
this is very good!
IduolateP 2 years ago
I could argue that some camera shots could be pulled back for some better angles, but overall, I liked it.
leotigerman86 2 years ago
I've seen some VFS work that was horrendous. This, however, is one of the best VFS projects I have ever seen, period.
werdupproductions 2 years ago 5
Loved it too.
ridingisasport 2 years ago
the sound was choice here, like being in a big movie theatre .... and being a little stoned... can part 2 have the guy being castrated thanks
williammorley 2 years ago
That was some nice acting. I gotta go check out VFS, it's like 5 minutes away from my place.
Kryptsanies 2 years ago
You definitely should! Find out more about our Acting program at vfs(dot)com/acting Hope to see you soon!
VancouverFilmSchool 2 years ago
Rebecca is amazing! and I've told her that millions of times.
JayInWonderland 2 years ago
"My price just went up...when I opened the envelope." - Great exchange
good concept. nice ending.
Also kudos to the actors and production team
JayneMariefromDet 2 years ago 3
great clip makes me even more excited to go to vfs
rookie16 2 years ago
nice very very nice
dreadfear1 2 years ago
this was so creative and on poiint, it was amazing. this had such a great plot, and the sudden change in beats were in perfect timing. the last beat was a real turning point. Amazing.
10/5.
spartaremix299 2 years ago
One out of 100 VFS clips that I would endorse. This is qualtiy work, from the direction, acting, photograhy, plot, you name it. the choice of a black & white tone gave it an axtra edge.
53531640 2 years ago
Amazing! I loved it! The first time I acctually watched a whole talking scene on youtube, this acctually got me stuck into the story!
5*
Rigital 2 years ago
NICE!!!
freshflex 2 years ago
Nice storyline! Intense filming! Touching subject! 5/5
CasualMaggot 2 years ago
Refreshing piece of work! Keep it up!
jocularity13 2 years ago
very nice!
work of art
colloredbrothers 2 years ago
really nice;)
AnDy3000Xi 2 years ago
Well done. I wish I had more time to shoot short movies like that.
KBDProductionsTV 2 years ago
Great work for the time you had. Nice twist at the end, though the last line is a little hard to hear.. But nicely done. One question though... I don't think the hands who held sloan were creditet, what about that? Very nice done..
Just hoping he isn't going to kill the little child, don't think he will though.
sloterfilmgroep 2 years ago
Very nice!
MieseKritik 2 years ago