Gray Team Transmission Two: Relegation Part 1 of 2

[503ree]

made me jump when the elite attacked

[peli22r]

Thats me Tha Dark Green xGod assassinx

Gamertag Right Now StoNa xCCBx

[GRANTCEE13]

loud and clear.... *same -_-* lol

[xausausx]

21, you and 23 take 24 lolol

[llanwopnhoj]

were is 22?

[iendedyoui]

all this seriousness is making me laugh

[trentonhebert]

i was wondering if i may be able to be in one of your next movies , ive watched them and i think they are really good but keep making movies

[NukesForSamurai]

sorry, but I find this pretty homo.

Its a video game and I have no problem with machinima its just when people take it seriously it gets kinda stupid.

Plus that girl voice acting is annoying.

[AdanRyder]

So nukesforsamurai machinima always has to be comedy? and yes the girl voice acting is really really annoying

[TrekkieAtlantis]

Awesome:)

[kaizen410]

VERY AWESOME!!!LOVED 'EM ALL!!!

[puppetxcore]

he made this believe me

[rageofarbiter]

wel not u but machinima unless u just copied it

[MindlessDistortion]

no. i made this movie so it was me,

[rageofarbiter]

so machinimas is a copy of urs or u let him do it

[slayerofaardvarks]

no, machinima just posts this on their channel so it gets more views

[medhurst1]

you have some very unique skills when making machinima no body can ever make a dramatic video like this so i have to say exelent work

[pachy74]

so when are we gonna see the next part after all its almost been 2 monthsa

[rageofarbiter]

dude u screwed up at the start its 21-23-21 u screwed up bro

[MindlessDistortion]

We noticed that after upload. Thanks though.

[sildrex]

I knew i recognized 24's voice! it's kirbopher!

[Skwiskid666]

Dude, this is one of the best machinimas I've ever seen! Bravo! 5/5! I can't wait for the next one!

[Halofan1989]

Does anyone know when the Halo book "Cole Protocol" is supposed to come out?

[0OGKILLA0]

cool if i was 24 i would mad

[predator5791]

The voice acting was good.

[k00lproductions]

the show is good but it's mark V armor not mark VII

[xLucky13c]

i'm pretty sure everyone that's ever played Halo knows that

but theyre calling it mark VII for purposes of the series

and in case you didnt notice, theyre not using the stock chest piece its something different

EOD i think

[MindlessDistortion]

When did we ever call it mark 7? It's mark 5, the original armor in Halo 1.

[xLucky13c]

in the "i'm not a boy" argument while theyre all riding around in the warthog

"i'm not a boy i'm a blah blah blah in a suit of mjolnir mark seven armor"

[MindlessDistortion]

That was the writers fault. As well as mine for not noticing it in the script. But it was supposed to be Mark V. Sorry for the confusion.

[xLucky13c]

no problem, thanks for clearing that up

besides that this is a really good machinima so far, can't wait for the next episode.

[phonexrich757]

this has some very good voice acting

[JamessFord]

Much better than its predecessor, though:

-Voice acting: the female actor is somewhat over-enthusiastic, making her sound like a chirpy schoolgirl rather than an elite soldier. This might be because of the scriptwork, I can't be sure.

-The music: is quite fitting in some moments, completely inappropriate in others. Please give some thought to the placement of your music pieces.

-Sidenote: the target practice scene was largely useless and time-wasting.

Otherwise, again, good job.

[DandDCrush]

at first the trailer threw me off, thought is was bad, watched this, CIMPLETELY CHANGED! 100/100! AND SUBSCRIBE!

Cant wait till' part 2!!!!!

[yoyomebk]

This is starting to get interesting

[TheGringoUno]

... 24 reminds me of Anakian Skywalker at the start of his trip to his dark side ("if I had been better, he would have been alive")

[nikedmondson]

Pretty obvious where his story is going to lead.

Doesn't mean I don't like it, though. For a Machinima, this is damn good acting.

[ghost5001]

this is good.=P just minus1zero is to stupid to understand

[mimringxx]

awsome dude keep up the great work.

the fight scenes are way to big lower the action it is hard to keep up.

[minus1zero]

bOaRiNg! the first mad no sense and niether did this one

[mussianrafia]

WARNING: BRAIN NECESSARY FOR ENJOYMENT OF MACHINIMA SERIES

(common sense is also useful)

[Zuratel]

if the first one was boring whyd u watch the second one minus1zero u idiot....

[RowmanSailor]

You have probably already heard this, but the map transition is unprecidented and truly is a testiment to your skill. Great work!

[check123jo]

This is good! ^_^ me likey

[kimchisup]

the transitions of different maps is amazing

[LaketreeRKR]

who's 22?

[animalloover]

how do you get this map?

[MasterChief117UNSC]

This is an awesome series.

[IAmChrisKaman]

what happened to that other trailer

i cant find it

[toddy2cool]

weird my replies are appearing in another spot lol

[grim0060]

hahahaha srry but cmon dude the firs tpart was a total rip from mas effect "the first time we found forruner technology we advance our technology by 500 years!"

[cornypunk]

holy s*** this is better than digital ph33r!

[ShadowNugz]

Maybe not

[toddy2cool]

is that Sarcasm?

[BaronVonKenny]

wow, he got owned

[SmallTimeHalo]

Wow great video. You guys are luck to have found people who can work together. :D

Can't wait to see more.

[pyroeflames]

I love the ending lol doom music!

[masterofreruns]

The girl is an annoying bitch...too fucking perky and chipper

[Guyver89]

she is programmed that way

[TheCr1mson]

Good thing its not your vision, so it doesnt matter.

[Encentrik]

i'm sorry, but i cant take the unoriginal story line. when i watch a movie or film, i look for story, not cool graphical editing. thats all this series has, cool video effects. when the doctor says that it jumped up their technology by 500 years, almost word for word from Mass Effect. Milonyr 7 armor, and the whole story is basicly Halo if Master chiefs two friends were with him. So dude, im sorry, firs tepisode was pretty cool, but dude im sorry, no, all you guys say win, i say fail.

[ZelahnZero]

For your comfort. No one of the production or writing staff has played mass effect. And for your information, Halo is just Starship Troopers or Aliens (if not both) if John Rico or Ellen Ripley wore armor.

[Encentrik]

ok i kinda agree with that. and at least other ppl agree with me. btw if you check out the dialog in COD4, in the Tanker mission, they take lot of the dialog from Aliens, when their in the nest.

[TheCr1mson]

And to concur, In all 3 of the Halo games, lines and scenes can be found EXACTLY replicated from both aliens and starship troopers films.

So they infact, win.

[crimsonsunsetmovies]

I have to agree with everything but the effects, which are actually quite unimpressive.

[LAST0fTHEM]

it is true that the "500 year" bit is from mass effect. but the story is not bad, like all machinima of halo looks like the story with different charactors, I quite like the idea.

Were you using the "gray team" from the books?

or is that just accidental?

[MindlessDistortion]

That was intentional. The series is my [well our] vision of the backstory.

[LAST0fTHEM]

ok thats makes more sence.

Even though gray team were spartans, but still a realy good idea.

[AdanRyder]

hey whats up with when i try and connect to the blog it connects then it tries to open robots.txt and then it just goes to dell search page

[DP715]

The first episode was well-done, but this one seemed too much like something you'd find off of Cartoon Network. Everything is so cheerful, that it seems like it was ripped off of a Saturday morning cartoon. However, that doesn't mean the series should become COMPLETELY dark and dramatic. It has to have excellent character development and well-paced episodes, while at the same time keeping somewhat faithful to the Halo mythology. Another kind tip (not to be rude): borrow without stealing.

[toddy2cool]

spot on Man!

[AdanRyder]

Encentrik this actually is based partly on the Grey Team from the halo books

[Tomdoodle16]

The white guy sounds a little like Seth Green.

[QuangTang]

That was actually pretty good. Great improvement since the first transmisssion.

[Oreeyo]

I'd say this was better than the first one. But, technically, shouldn't his targeting software already be tuned from the battle in the first one?

[MindlessDistortion]

No. He didn't partake in much of the battle. It did do some very minor calibration but not near enough. That is why a proper course run was necessary.

[Oreeyo]

Oh, so that's why it said only 25% in the corner of his HUD.

[MindlessDistortion]

No. That was his "health" meter. He started functioning wrong once the elite guy started hitting him.

[DarthCadeous501]

awsome

[DaWaats]

Very well written Tentitive, and good job A10M1C

[Stage8Films]

good job

[TentativeChaos]

I'm proud to have writen this! Good job A10M1C!

[Tronyx86]

Yea buddy! That's my good friend Marc Swint! Keep 'em comin' guys!

[Eeptog]

woo, cant wait for the next one

[D3ad1te]

yay

[L0VETH3HAT3]

1st comment haha!!! I still need to watch it :P