Im sorry i had too im against this shit too but here it is
i was Abused and molested until the age of 8 by a mom that was ill/adopted at 9 by ill people/people look at me and see a child thats is happy/but it aint like that i aint got no destiny/im only 15 had to get a job to help to pay the bills of the family/hah what family?/ha i dont dont see a family or really nobody/ive never shared this with anybody so its been there to take it out/even when sharing my life story i never told anybody
i'd appreciate if you guys took a look at my version of this song, it's about a relationship that i had that went sour. check it out, u won't regret it. watch?v=qOkEvO7oJrQ
Boom, Boom, Gunshots zoom threw the room Tombs built for my platoon soon im seen staring at the moon Doom lead me to munch on some shroom Now im asking god what for, I just tell myself everything has 1 reason or more Aint it just my stricken luck I aint saying im giving up Im just saying i dont give a fuck Cant you get the picture, Cmon man pick it up. Take a lick of dust im sick of destiny messin with me testin me Throwin fists wit wicked concuss
@worstzznight Yo I was just like you, always takin up for myself New I had nobody, had 2 do life with no fuckin help Used 2 live with my dad, just call him a BLOOD Became just like him, and soon was a thug Then I got took away, put in foster homes No1 didn't want me', cuz I was bad to tha bone I finally gave up being a thug, and started up new Now I have a family, and im the rapper of my school You see, life gets worse then better Get a friend and be there 4 each other Love your bro and sis
i was never a rich kid, born into a family that didn't care for what i did, i raised myself, i stood tall, even though i knew, no1 would pick me up 4 when i'd fall, i called for help, seemed like nobody could hear me, i sat in my corner cryin, no matter what happend, i promised myself that i'd keep tryin, i'd keep tryin, no matta the times i repeat myself, the truth is i'm alone, i'll never forgive u for what u said, this is my story and i hate u to the bone.
Memories cant let go , Storing them like a folder I gotta File and get my act straight Aint no body to look up to so i look up to fate How can i find peace when all i seen is hate Never seen my pops and the thought makes me shake You can judge and hate, BUt i do me and aint no shame in my game I stay game and i stay true , What to do when aint no body true Skippin school actin a foo Smoke weed not to be coo , But to ease my mind I aint done , but fo now imma cease my rhyme...
this is an eminem instrumental, and people are "freestyling" to it over youtube, thinking they are going to get noticed, or something, when in reality they've been working on these mediocre rhymes for months, and putting them out because they think they are "Real". Bullshit.
@celticswin101 you know u fucking 2 face tool. nun of us here " freestylin" to this beat don't mean we wanna get noticed. has nuthing to do with that. we just do it cuz that's just what we wanna do. you com here tellin us we got mediocre rhymes? u can suck a dick. it aint about rhyming it's about sending a message. and to you my friend. i got a message from all of us to you. READ BETWEEN THE LINES
@MrPaintballpro52 aight finaly sum1 that gets it... em was the first. i'm sure bunch of other people now know the same shit but its thanks to him. he passed down the first message and now that message passing down to all of us generation to generation like a chain letter. only pricks like that other guy say shit like what he said. he just a hypacrit.
Now let me tell you a little story, the tales of the road to glory. I had my bad times so i'm going to express it out in these rhymes, the lyrics that will send chills down to your enzymes. At the age of 9 I lost my brother, couldn't handle it, couldn't control my mother, and to me he was like no other, Now I sit back trying to recover, still confused, unknown like some distant lovers.
@TheByakugansharingan angle?? seriously! what kind of angle? acute? obtuse? reflex? right? i think the correct spelling is angel learn to spell before you rap. No offence
all these fuckin problems ive seen all em ive wanted 2 scream and say go away and leave but no the pain stays and it hurts almost like a deasise no cure daddy dies at 5 momma got cancer twice almost though she was gonna die nigga i aint lyin bout dis lyin in bed cryin for no apparent reason kids teasin me bout my past i thought i wasnt gonna last long im showin up on the song
man i wrote a tune to this to my mom cause she died and i actually almost cried during writing it... i dont care if i sound like a pussy this beat is good to express yourself.
@MultiModernWarfare2 hey thanks bro shes fine that shit i spitted bout my dad is true THIS IS FO ALL YOU MOTHA FUCKEN G,S WHO GOT NO DADDY LIKE ME IN FACT ALL WHO RAPPED I WANNA COLLABARATE WITH SO SEND ME A RELPLY IF U WANNA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1
Marcos yeah i am your dad/ i left you and your momma their with something hard to pack/ i dont even know why i continued in sin/ i tried to start all over again/ begun when i went to the pin/ when i found out who God was/ switched my ways up like a draft/ finally noticed that this life goes to fast/ all i wanted was to be a happy family with laughs/ but my mind kept focusing on the past/ but now thats the past/ im trusting God and i know im gonna last/ come back and ill show you new path path
Dad why da fuck did u lve, was it me? was mom cheating? i wish u was here more than anything, Dese mofuckas at school trying to cheet me defeat me, kick me on the ground n beat me. I pulled a sharpened carved pointy end, Let him comprehend ,The damege they were enflicting on my head, rather scared em to death then let em make me part of the walking dead insane filled pain in my brain they say it pours when it rains, Im just waiting on the sun to come again.
Mockingbird makes me sad, but this fluted my house w/ tears. WHY ARE YOU SO DRAMATIC!? PLEASE, JUST POKE B. SPEARS AGAIN! AAAHHAHAHYAHA... I"M CRYING...
Haily i know you miss your mom and I know you miss your dad but when im gone im trying to give you the life that i never had. :I sadly..thats all i know at this moment..
@Zelda77742 dude its personal 4 all of us u may call us wat u wanna hell go ahead but try 2 urself in my sheos or any of ours w,ell tell u how hard it is but we keep goin hopfully 2 make it into 2 heaven someday so no man we gonna stop just lettin u know that
I fucked up my life ,so i ran away into the night , i finallly found out my dam rights
I always be puttin my head down , im in a fuckign drown , i deffintly aint gettin the fresstylin crown , all u fuckign haters better fucking frown ,
Pat is my best friend he be fuckign wacked but he knows when to grow the fuck up , but damm he always be gettin trucked , but its ight because his life is fucked,
i got his back , hes gona be alright preety soon he be giving thse girls a little tap
livin up to expections is very hard to do dont wanna disappoint but u dont have a clue. ask for help but no ones there wish u were rich without a single care. but whats life without struggle? feels like u lost in the Amazon jungle. here the birds above u mocking ur actions all u want is to get some satisfaction. love hope and faith is all we need fuck money houses cars yea who needs greed. so next time u hold up ur gat ur life could end next think about that.
I dont know about you guys but i like reading the raps people write
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hier lied von mir und einem kollegen auf dem beat :)
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BilbilCinema 2 months ago
wow who the fuck disliked this? :OOO apparently thoe 2 have no taste in music what so ever -_-
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ElmoTaclay 2 months ago
On Some Real Shit...From Tha Heart ---
ill never forget that DAY, when your mom "Snatched-You-Away"
the PAIN, an tha RAGE, i feel "Trapped-In-A-Cage"
the closest? i get to you, is to "Speak-On-Tha-Phone"
i feel "Weak-And-Alone" cant "Even-See-You-Grow"
i dont hate your mommy, baby, she told "People-Evil-Lies"
ive gotta act brave, pumpkin, know one can "See-Me-Cry"
cause it hurts deep down, when she "Stabbed-Me-In-Tha-Heart"
but i promise you baby, that "Daddy-Wont-Be-Far" ©
northsoulja 3 months ago
Im sorry i had too im against this shit too but here it is
i was Abused and molested until the age of 8 by a mom that was ill/adopted at 9 by ill people/people look at me and see a child thats is happy/but it aint like that i aint got no destiny/im only 15 had to get a job to help to pay the bills of the family/hah what family?/ha i dont dont see a family or really nobody/ive never shared this with anybody so its been there to take it out/even when sharing my life story i never told anybody
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i'd appreciate if you guys took a look at my version of this song, it's about a relationship that i had that went sour. check it out, u won't regret it. watch?v=qOkEvO7oJrQ
broken6142011 5 months ago
yea lifes hard some.
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"Harjot Singh - Mockingbird" << Check it out, really good cover :D ... I LOVE YOU EMINEM
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HighMallice 6 months ago
@zubat1999 okay wtf i never posted this... gawd dammit i think it was someone that was at mai house fuck them
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YKCist 7 months ago
all ya'll tryna' rap new lyrics to the beat...just no.
YOU ALL PHAIL.
XxXsitarheroXxX 10 months ago
you ever had a girl stuck on yo' mind all fuckin day
no matter what you doin at the time she always finds
her way back into yo' head its not like its explainable
but it jus fuckin happens
then you look back and realize
she dont like you like you do
man , this bitch is crazy she aint gunna think like how i do
what the fuck i thinkin
Camlax4 10 months ago
@Camlax4 im sorry bro i know how u feel man
ballpythontv 8 months ago
if i told you i'm alive and not to worry i never died
when you told me last night "good-bye", i'd be lying
while i'm cryin' in this grave cuz you gave me the next day
a reason to be leavin earth beatin' and bleedin' to death
it hurt' so bad that i decided to commit suicide with a knife
becuz life is not worth fightin' for i'm writin for a few more
line's then i'm sayin my goodbye's to all the lie's,all the time's i tried to
find the right kind's of rhyme's to write while rightin' wrongs
xxxEMINENTxxx 10 months ago
i was never a rich kid, born into a family that didn't care for what i did, i raised myself, i stood tall, even though i knew, no1 would pick me up 4 when i'd fall, i called for help, seemed like nobody could hear me, i sat in my corner cryin, no matter what happend, i promised myself that i'd keep tryin, i'd keep tryin, no matta the times i repeat myself, the truth is i'm alone, i'll never forgive u for what u said, this is my story and i hate u to the bone.
worstzznight 11 months ago 3
Im walkn , walkn down a road , No end and im feelin cold
Need a coat might catch a cold
Oh wait no body cares
Pain so deep penetrates my soul , No father and they wonder why im cold
I been told , Keep yo head high.
Like Tupac said Real eyes realize real lies
Im gonna climb to the top , even though im feelin dead inside.
Even though i shed tears im alright
Its me against the world
Gettin hard to breath , Like the world is on my Should-ers
YunG22DiZZY 1 year ago 8
@YunG22DiZZY The " No father " part is supposed to be " No Love "
YunG22DiZZY 1 year ago
YunG22DiZZY 1 year ago 8
this is an eminem instrumental, and people are "freestyling" to it over youtube, thinking they are going to get noticed, or something, when in reality they've been working on these mediocre rhymes for months, and putting them out because they think they are "Real". Bullshit.
celticswin101 1 year ago
@celticswin101 you know u fucking 2 face tool. nun of us here " freestylin" to this beat don't mean we wanna get noticed. has nuthing to do with that. we just do it cuz that's just what we wanna do. you com here tellin us we got mediocre rhymes? u can suck a dick. it aint about rhyming it's about sending a message. and to you my friend. i got a message from all of us to you. READ BETWEEN THE LINES
worstzznight 11 months ago
@worstzznight im on ur side bro. im white and my lyrics may not be the best but u have a point so thumbs up!!!
MrPaintballpro52 10 months ago
@MrPaintballpro52 aight finaly sum1 that gets it... em was the first. i'm sure bunch of other people now know the same shit but its thanks to him. he passed down the first message and now that message passing down to all of us generation to generation like a chain letter. only pricks like that other guy say shit like what he said. he just a hypacrit.
worstzznight 10 months ago
@MrPaintballpro52 im white too bro haha...and not to brag but i aint half bad :P
worstzznight 10 months ago
im fuckin drunk, and if my life is a boat im feelin like it was sunk,
can you keep up with this rhyme you fuckin punk,
this is some tupac shit some real poetic,
which is a bold statement comin from unearned credit,
forget it, im real, whether or not you agree, rela-tiva-lee,
you can feel, simila to me, for real,
i aint fuckin around, im just tryin to get found, my feet on the ground,
got a real sick sound, got a real sick sound
SuZyStaTux 1 year ago
I feel so sad when i listen to this beat!!!!
YaMa139501 1 year ago
Now let me tell you a little story, the tales of the road to glory. I had my bad times so i'm going to express it out in these rhymes, the lyrics that will send chills down to your enzymes. At the age of 9 I lost my brother, couldn't handle it, couldn't control my mother, and to me he was like no other, Now I sit back trying to recover, still confused, unknown like some distant lovers.
NoIScope 1 year ago
plz download link
Messi10Dinho 1 year ago
wipe the tears from your eyes you angle in disguise
we should pry everyday that the storm fades away
then the sun comes out an shines its sunrays
on my rhymes i just wish i can go back an just
turn back the handes of time. im 18 now damn i cant believe it buts
thats good now i realize what she ment when she said "enjoy your child hood" it goes
TheByakugansharingan 1 year ago
@TheByakugansharingan angle?? seriously! what kind of angle? acute? obtuse? reflex? right? i think the correct spelling is angel learn to spell before you rap. No offence
NejixByukugan 1 year ago
This was to graphic, my eyes didn’t deserve it
But I couldn’t blink my eyes, my brain was fucking hurting
My eye lids were burning, and closed my eyes
And that’s when the future flashed before my eyes
I despised it, but somehow my eyes started rising
I couldn’t resist it so there was no point in fighting
gamerboxoflove 1 year ago
picture comes to my mind, painted by van gogh
it’s a flower, staying in one spot, it never grows
that is what this was like, we could never move from this position
I shouldn’t of envisioned this
But I did, I always search for more than what I was told
I felt more than 15 years old
There was a gash in the flower, tiny but I saw it
I didn’t wanna see it id rather be barried in a coffin
gamerboxoflove 1 year ago
Everthing here is not even close to alright
This is the only way I can Express the Pain I feel Inside
"Here we go again another kid trying to claim he's sorry for his sins"
Nah, Just writing with my mind with my pen trying to deal with my demons within
Feel like Im making Art, becasue all Artists always use there Heart
You see I Done weed, I robbed a bank, I drank underaged, I was in a Gang
But not one of those things I feel ashamed, But Im christian, and Ive casued Pain
TheJBird95 1 year ago 2
@TheJBird95 lets collabarate the J bird95 gamerboxoflove u too bro
54chaingangsoilder 1 year ago
all these fuckin problems ive seen all em ive wanted 2 scream and say go away and leave but no the pain stays and it hurts almost like a deasise no cure daddy dies at 5 momma got cancer twice almost though she was gonna die nigga i aint lyin bout dis lyin in bed cryin for no apparent reason kids teasin me bout my past i thought i wasnt gonna last long im showin up on the song
54chaingangsoilder 1 year ago
this beat can get to you..
FuckkingMatt 1 year ago
eminem n me we were meant to be! the whole story of em the as mine
kingalvin82 1 year ago
man i wrote a tune to this to my mom cause she died and i actually almost cried during writing it... i dont care if i sound like a pussy this beat is good to express yourself.
Jake8864 1 year ago
@Jake8864 yea some people don't understand that music is to express not to just sound great.
MultiModernWarfare2 1 year ago
@Jake8864 Sorry about your mom.
MultiModernWarfare2 1 year ago
@MultiModernWarfare2 hey thanks bro shes fine that shit i spitted bout my dad is true THIS IS FO ALL YOU MOTHA FUCKEN G,S WHO GOT NO DADDY LIKE ME IN FACT ALL WHO RAPPED I WANNA COLLABARATE WITH SO SEND ME A RELPLY IF U WANNA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1
54chaingangsoilder 1 year ago
@Jake8864 i can relate to that to bro, my freinds mom just died i rote her a song to this beat
andreinke 1 year ago
@andreinke thanks bro do u rap
54chaingangsoilder 1 year ago
Marcos yeah i am your dad/ i left you and your momma their with something hard to pack/ i dont even know why i continued in sin/ i tried to start all over again/ begun when i went to the pin/ when i found out who God was/ switched my ways up like a draft/ finally noticed that this life goes to fast/ all i wanted was to be a happy family with laughs/ but my mind kept focusing on the past/ but now thats the past/ im trusting God and i know im gonna last/ come back and ill show you new path path
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121topnotch 1 year ago
Dad why da fuck did u lve, was it me? was mom cheating? i wish u was here more than anything, Dese mofuckas at school trying to cheet me defeat me, kick me on the ground n beat me. I pulled a sharpened carved pointy end, Let him comprehend ,The damege they were enflicting on my head, rather scared em to death then let em make me part of the walking dead insane filled pain in my brain they say it pours when it rains, Im just waiting on the sun to come again.
ma Shine Time
horechka61 1 year ago
Mockingbird makes me sad, but this fluted my house w/ tears. WHY ARE YOU SO DRAMATIC!? PLEASE, JUST POKE B. SPEARS AGAIN! AAAHHAHAHYAHA... I"M CRYING...
BeeroHeero 1 year ago
i havent led a easy life
you know about my cort strife?
theres alot more that needs to come to light
waking up every day, thinking todays the day i do it, the day i get enticed
to do it, put a gun to my head and fucking shoot it
wow, am i dead? oh no its ok, im deaf
wait, what the fuck? these drugs are having a really weird affect
quick have some more, maybe that will make it disappear
fall on the floor, still deaf with a single tear
i knew what i just meant to do but fuck it im still here
partty93 1 year ago
@partty93 i can relate 2 tht dude
yungburt187 1 year ago
Haily i know you miss your mom and I know you miss your dad but when im gone im trying to give you the life that i never had. :I sadly..thats all i know at this moment..
C3unknown 1 year ago
Wooow haha so many dumb asses trying to rap on here.. EPIC FAIL!!! Just stop lmao it's sad.. XD
Zelda77742 1 year ago 28
@Zelda77742 says the person with the name Zelda
xxXXSlashXXxx123 1 year ago 2
@Zelda77742 dude its personal 4 all of us u may call us wat u wanna hell go ahead but try 2 urself in my sheos or any of ours w,ell tell u how hard it is but we keep goin hopfully 2 make it into 2 heaven someday so no man we gonna stop just lettin u know that
54chaingangsoilder 1 year ago
@Zelda77742 lol then why the fuck would anybody come here for.........
to listen for the beat
lol
khalidzcool 1 year ago
@Zelda77742 SHUT THE FUCKK UPP
54chaingangsoilder 1 year ago
@Zelda77742 shut the fuck up
54chaingangsoilder 1 year ago
@Zelda77742 <<<< Yeah ? Wanna know whats worse then bad lyrics ? Punk ass Haters.
YoungDEE925 1 year ago
@just because you cant rap you inbreed fool
ManHunter420 1 year ago
@Zelda77742 least their trying
dofo970 1 year ago
@Zelda77742 i agree
myniakal333 1 year ago
@Zelda77742 my dawg how is that an epic fail? and how is it sad? we gettin our feelings out on here
54chaingangsoilder 1 year ago
I fucked up my life ,so i ran away into the night , i finallly found out my dam rights
I always be puttin my head down , im in a fuckign drown , i deffintly aint gettin the fresstylin crown , all u fuckign haters better fucking frown ,
Pat is my best friend he be fuckign wacked but he knows when to grow the fuck up , but damm he always be gettin trucked , but its ight because his life is fucked,
i got his back , hes gona be alright preety soon he be giving thse girls a little tap
1994Kevinmac 1 year ago
livin up to expections is very hard to do dont wanna disappoint but u dont have a clue. ask for help but no ones there wish u were rich without a single care. but whats life without struggle? feels like u lost in the Amazon jungle. here the birds above u mocking ur actions all u want is to get some satisfaction. love hope and faith is all we need fuck money houses cars yea who needs greed. so next time u hold up ur gat ur life could end next think about that.
BAMF128 2 years ago 2
listen your bars are breezy shut your mout thinkin ur sick you bell end!!!!!!!!!
michaelriddellable 2 years ago
omg this is horrible u youtube kids need to stop
KGProductions18 2 years ago
@BAMF128 nice man :)
XeDeonas 1 year ago
very nice beat
FALASTINI93 2 years ago
this beat makes me feel sad and i dont know why
Ohwellthatscool 2 years ago 30
@Ohwellthatscool listen to Eminem Stan Instrumental it will make u even more sad :S i don't know why but it makes me sad :S
YTMovieperson 1 year ago
nice!
ioulitsaaa 2 years ago
Imádom ezt a számot...
Spanyolina 2 years ago
gurrd beat...x
ChemicalMayjor 2 years ago
fuck u
josephkhoury123 2 years ago
cool
ToaAznat 2 years ago 2
javé jamais capter ke c t le bruit dune machine a ecrir dans le fond =s
melodieman3 3 years ago
lol moi too
sympatiik 2 years ago
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good job !!! I liked it!!! Mariusz
teachemariusz 3 years ago