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  • I dont know about you guys but i like reading the raps people write

  • wow who the fuck disliked this? :OOO apparently thoe 2 have no taste in music what so ever -_-

  • On Some Real Shit...From Tha Heart ---

    ill never forget that DAY, when your mom "Snatched-You-Away"

    the PAIN, an tha RAGE, i feel "Trapped-In-A-Cage"

    the closest? i get to you, is to "Speak-On-Tha-Phone"

    i feel "Weak-And-Alone" cant "Even-See-You-Grow"

    i dont hate your mommy, baby, she told "People-Evil-Lies"

    ive gotta act brave, pumpkin, know one can "See-Me-Cry"

    cause it hurts deep down, when she "Stabbed-Me-In-Tha-Heart"

    but i promise you baby, that "Daddy-Wont-Be-Far" ©

  • Im sorry i had too im against this shit too but here it is

    i was Abused and molested until the age of 8 by a mom that was ill/adopted at 9 by ill people/people look at me and see a child thats is happy/but it aint like that i aint got no destiny/im only 15 had to get a job to help to pay the bills of the family/hah what family?/ha i dont dont see a family or really nobody/ive never shared this with anybody so its been there to take it out/even when sharing my life story i never told anybody

  • yea lifes hard some.

  • Boom, Boom, Gunshots zoom threw the room Tombs built for my platoon soon im seen staring at the moon Doom lead me to munch on some shroom Now im asking god what for, I just tell myself everything has 1 reason or more Aint it just my stricken luck I aint saying im giving up Im just saying i dont give a fuck Cant you get the picture, Cmon man pick it up. Take a lick of dust im sick of destiny messin with me testin me Throwin fists wit wicked concuss
  • @zubat1999 okay wtf i never posted this... gawd dammit i think it was someone that was at mai house fuck them

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  • @worstzznight Yo I was just like you, always takin up for myself New I had nobody, had 2 do life with no fuckin help Used 2 live with my dad, just call him a BLOOD Became just like him, and soon was a thug Then I got took away, put in foster homes No1 didn't want me', cuz I was bad to tha bone I finally gave up being a thug, and started up new Now I have a family, and im the rapper of my school You see, life gets worse then better Get a friend and be there 4 each other Love your bro and sis
  • all ya'll tryna' rap new lyrics to the beat...just no.

    YOU ALL PHAIL.

  • you ever had a girl stuck on yo' mind all fuckin day

    no matter what you doin at the time she always finds

    her way back into yo' head its not like its explainable

    but it jus fuckin happens

    then you look back and realize

    she dont like you like you do

    man , this bitch is crazy she aint gunna think like how i do

    what the fuck i thinkin

  • @Camlax4 im sorry bro i know how u feel man

  • if i told you i'm alive and not to worry i never died

    when you told me last night "good-bye", i'd be lying

    while i'm cryin' in this grave cuz you gave me the next day

    a reason to be leavin earth beatin' and bleedin' to death

    it hurt' so bad that i decided to commit suicide with a knife

    becuz life is not worth fightin' for i'm writin for a few more

    line's then i'm sayin my goodbye's to all the lie's,all the time's i tried to

    find the right kind's of rhyme's to write while rightin' wrongs

  • i was never a rich kid, born into a family that didn't care for what i did, i raised myself, i stood tall, even though i knew, no1 would pick me up 4 when i'd fall, i called for help, seemed like nobody could hear me, i sat in my corner cryin, no matter what happend, i promised myself that i'd keep tryin, i'd keep tryin, no matta the times i repeat myself, the truth is i'm alone, i'll never forgive u for what u said, this is my story and i hate u to the bone.

  • Im walkn , walkn down a road , No end and im feelin cold

    Need a coat might catch a cold

    Oh wait no body cares

    Pain so deep penetrates my soul , No father and they wonder why im cold

    I been told , Keep yo head high.

    Like Tupac said Real eyes realize real lies

    Im gonna climb to the top , even though im feelin dead inside.

    Even though i shed tears im alright

    Its me against the world

    Gettin hard to breath , Like the world is on my Should-ers

  • @YunG22DiZZY The " No father " part is supposed to be " No Love "

  • Memories cant let go , Storing them like a folder I gotta File and get my act straight Aint no body to look up to so i look up to fate How can i find peace when all i seen is hate Never seen my pops and the thought makes me shake You can judge and hate, BUt i do me and aint no shame in my game I stay game and i stay true , What to do when aint no body true Skippin school actin a foo Smoke weed not to be coo , But to ease my mind I aint done , but fo now imma cease my rhyme...
  • this is an eminem instrumental, and people are "freestyling" to it over youtube, thinking they are going to get noticed, or something, when in reality they've been working on these mediocre rhymes for months, and putting them out because they think they are "Real". Bullshit.

  • @celticswin101 you know u fucking 2 face tool. nun of us here " freestylin" to this beat don't mean we wanna get noticed. has nuthing to do with that. we just do it cuz that's just what we wanna do. you com here tellin us we got mediocre rhymes? u can suck a dick. it aint about rhyming it's about sending a message. and to you my friend. i got a message from all of us to you. READ BETWEEN THE LINES

  • @worstzznight im on ur side bro. im white and my lyrics may not be the best but u have a point so thumbs up!!!

  • @MrPaintballpro52 aight finaly sum1 that gets it... em was the first. i'm sure bunch of other people now know the same shit but its thanks to him. he passed down the first message and now that message passing down to all of us generation to generation like a chain letter. only pricks like that other guy say shit like what he said. he just a hypacrit.

  • @MrPaintballpro52 im white too bro haha...and not to brag but i aint half bad :P

  • im fuckin drunk, and if my life is a boat im feelin like it was sunk,

    can you keep up with this rhyme you fuckin punk,

    this is some tupac shit some real poetic,

    which is a bold statement comin from unearned credit,

    forget it, im real, whether or not you agree, rela-tiva-lee,

    you can feel, simila to me, for real,

    i aint fuckin around, im just tryin to get found, my feet on the ground,

    got a real sick sound, got a real sick sound

  • I feel so sad when i listen to this beat!!!!

  • Now let me tell you a little story, the tales of the road to glory. I had my bad times so i'm going to express it out in these rhymes, the lyrics that will send chills down to your enzymes. At the age of 9 I lost my brother, couldn't handle it, couldn't control my mother, and to me he was like no other, Now I sit back trying to recover, still confused, unknown like some distant lovers.

  • plz download link

  • wipe the tears from your eyes you angle in disguise

    we should pry everyday that the storm fades away

    then the sun comes out an shines its sunrays

    on my rhymes i just wish i can go back an just

    turn back the handes of time. im 18 now damn i cant believe it buts

    thats good now i realize what she ment when she said "enjoy your child hood" it goes

  • @TheByakugansharingan angle?? seriously! what kind of angle? acute? obtuse? reflex? right? i think the correct spelling is angel learn to spell before you rap. No offence

  • This was to graphic, my eyes didn’t deserve it

    But I couldn’t blink my eyes, my brain was fucking hurting

    My eye lids were burning, and closed my eyes

    And that’s when the future flashed before my eyes

    I despised it, but somehow my eyes started rising

    I couldn’t resist it so there was no point in fighting

  • picture comes to my mind, painted by van gogh

    it’s a flower, staying in one spot, it never grows

    that is what this was like, we could never move from this position

    I shouldn’t of envisioned this

    But I did, I always search for more than what I was told

    I felt more than 15 years old

    There was a gash in the flower, tiny but I saw it

    I didn’t wanna see it id rather be barried in a coffin

  • Everthing here is not even close to alright

    This is the only way I can Express the Pain I feel Inside

    "Here we go again another kid trying to claim he's sorry for his sins"

    Nah, Just writing with my mind with my pen trying to deal with my demons within

    Feel like Im making Art, becasue all Artists always use there Heart

    You see I Done weed, I robbed a bank, I drank underaged, I was in a Gang

    But not one of those things I feel ashamed, But Im christian, and Ive casued Pain

  • @TheJBird95 lets collabarate the J bird95 gamerboxoflove u too bro

  • all these fuckin problems ive seen all em ive wanted 2 scream and say go away and leave but no the pain stays and it hurts almost like a deasise no cure daddy dies at 5 momma got cancer twice almost though she was gonna die nigga i aint lyin bout dis lyin in bed cryin for no apparent reason kids teasin me bout my past i thought i wasnt gonna last long im showin up on the song

  • this beat can get to you..

  • eminem n me we were meant to be! the whole story of em the as mine

  • man i wrote a tune to this to my mom cause she died and i actually almost cried during writing it... i dont care if i sound like a pussy this beat is good to express yourself.

  • @Jake8864 yea some people don't understand that music is to express not to just sound great.

  • @Jake8864 Sorry about your mom.

  • @MultiModernWarfare2 hey thanks bro shes fine that shit i spitted bout my dad is true THIS IS FO ALL YOU MOTHA FUCKEN G,S WHO GOT NO DADDY LIKE ME IN FACT ALL WHO RAPPED I WANNA COLLABARATE WITH SO SEND ME A RELPLY IF U WANNA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!­!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1

  • @Jake8864 i can relate to that to bro, my freinds mom just died i rote her a song to this beat

  • @andreinke thanks bro do u rap 

  • Marcos yeah i am your dad/ i left you and your momma their with something hard to pack/ i dont even know why i continued in sin/ i tried to start all over again/ begun when i went to the pin/ when i found out who God was/ switched my ways up like a draft/ finally noticed that this life goes to fast/ all i wanted was to be a happy family with laughs/ but my mind kept focusing on the past/ but now thats the past/ im trusting God and i know im gonna last/ come back and ill show you new path path

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  • Dad why da fuck did u lve, was it me? was mom cheating? i wish u was here more than anything, Dese mofuckas at school trying to cheet me defeat me, kick me on the ground n beat me. I pulled a sharpened carved pointy end, Let him comprehend ,The damege they were enflicting on my head, rather scared em to death then let em make me part of the walking dead insane filled pain in my brain they say it pours when it rains, Im just waiting on the sun to come again.

    ma Shine Time

  • Mockingbird makes me sad, but this fluted my house w/ tears. WHY ARE YOU SO DRAMATIC!? PLEASE, JUST POKE B. SPEARS AGAIN! AAAHHAHAHYAHA... I"M CRYING...

  • i havent led a easy life

    you know about my cort strife?

    theres alot more that needs to come to light

    waking up every day, thinking todays the day i do it, the day i get enticed

    to do it, put a gun to my head and fucking shoot it

    wow, am i dead? oh no its ok, im deaf

    wait, what the fuck? these drugs are having a really weird affect

    quick have some more, maybe that will make it disappear

    fall on the floor, still deaf with a single tear

    i knew what i just meant to do but fuck it im still here

  • @partty93 i can relate 2 tht dude

  • Haily i know you miss your mom and I know you miss your dad but when im gone im trying to give you the life that i never had. :I sadly..thats all i know at this moment..

  • Wooow haha so many dumb asses trying to rap on here.. EPIC FAIL!!! Just stop lmao it's sad.. XD

  • @Zelda77742 says the person with the name Zelda

  • @Zelda77742 dude its personal 4 all of us u may call us wat u wanna hell go ahead but try 2 urself in my sheos or any of ours w,ell tell u how hard it is but we keep goin hopfully 2 make it into 2 heaven someday so no man we gonna stop just lettin u know that

  • @Zelda77742 lol then why the fuck would anybody come here for.........

    to listen for the beat

    lol

  • @Zelda77742 SHUT THE FUCKK UPP

  • @Zelda77742 shut the fuck up

  • @Zelda77742 <<<< Yeah ? Wanna know whats worse then bad lyrics ? Punk ass Haters.

  • @just because you cant rap you inbreed fool

  • @Zelda77742 least their trying

  • @Zelda77742 i agree

  • @Zelda77742 my dawg how is that an epic fail? and how is it sad? we gettin our feelings out on here

  • I fucked up my life ,so i ran away into the night , i finallly found out my dam rights

    I always be puttin my head down , im in a fuckign drown , i deffintly aint gettin the fresstylin crown , all u fuckign haters better fucking frown ,

    Pat is my best friend he be fuckign wacked but he knows when to grow the fuck up , but damm he always be gettin trucked , but its ight because his life is fucked,

    i got his back , hes gona be alright preety soon he be giving thse girls a little tap

  • livin up to expections is very hard to do dont wanna disappoint but u dont have a clue. ask for help but no ones there wish u were rich without a single care. but whats life without struggle? feels like u lost in the Amazon jungle. here the birds above u mocking ur actions all u want is to get some satisfaction. love hope and faith is all we need fuck money houses cars yea who needs greed. so next time u hold up ur gat ur life could end next think about that.

  • listen your bars are breezy shut your mout thinkin ur sick you bell end!!!!!!!!!

  • omg this is horrible u youtube kids need to stop

  • @BAMF128 nice man :)

  • very nice beat

  • this beat makes me feel sad and i dont know why

  • @Ohwellthatscool listen to Eminem Stan Instrumental it will make u even more sad :S i don't know why but it makes me sad :S

  • nice!

  • Imádom ezt a számot...

  • gurrd beat...x

  • fuck u

  • cool

  • javé jamais capter ke c t le bruit dune machine a ecrir dans le fond =s

  • lol moi too

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