@RoyaICIown Thank you, I was kind of hoping it would, I was really excited about the second round and what it would be, but hey :/ At least I did get an honourable mention you know, not many did!
Just a week ago, that's pretty cool colouring,I have a bit of a problem with the boob shiny part though, but whatevs. As for the panelling, particularly from the 3rd panel to the 4th; the flow is feels awkward and unclear, the last panel might be a bit too big for it's own good....I would have the panels in different order, but that would enlarge the emphasis of the boobs more...which was big enough already...^^;
Also- what's the name/composer of the song played??
@slashslice Thanks, yeah the shiny thing, I was basically just guessing my way forward trying to make it look like a shine, and when I tried fixing it later on I just made it look dark and terrible haha :(
Yeah, I've seriously underestimated the power of panelling. Manga artists are so good at it, I just thought it'd be easy but it clearly wasn't and I'm quite aware of that. I also think I added too much 'action'/closeups for just one page because I tried to make it look good you know?
mary me pleas? lol jk this is amazing!!
TeamDream1000 7 months ago
I cant believe you didn't make it through, Your work is really good
RoyaICIown 7 months ago
@RoyaICIown Thank you, I was kind of hoping it would, I was really excited about the second round and what it would be, but hey :/ At least I did get an honourable mention you know, not many did!
Zooetii 7 months ago
THANKS TO EVERYONE FOR THE KIND COMMENTS! I feel so much better about my entry now x)
GOOD LUCK TO EVERYONE ENTERING :)
Zooetii 7 months ago
this is really awesome.
RebPierre 7 months ago
@RebPierre Thank you! :D
Zooetii 7 months ago
Nina, this is freaking epic ^^
Carlarowe123 7 months ago
really creative nice
NavyBlueManga 7 months ago
@NavyBlueManga Aw thanks, I was hoping it would be!
Zooetii 7 months ago
Love the song!
Mrspiderwalk 7 months ago
@Mrspiderwalk Ha, it's only iMovie soundtrack!
Zooetii 7 months ago
Just a week ago, that's pretty cool colouring,I have a bit of a problem with the boob shiny part though, but whatevs. As for the panelling, particularly from the 3rd panel to the 4th; the flow is feels awkward and unclear, the last panel might be a bit too big for it's own good....I would have the panels in different order, but that would enlarge the emphasis of the boobs more...which was big enough already...^^;
Also- what's the name/composer of the song played??
slashslice 7 months ago
@slashslice Thanks, yeah the shiny thing, I was basically just guessing my way forward trying to make it look like a shine, and when I tried fixing it later on I just made it look dark and terrible haha :(
Yeah, I've seriously underestimated the power of panelling. Manga artists are so good at it, I just thought it'd be easy but it clearly wasn't and I'm quite aware of that. I also think I added too much 'action'/closeups for just one page because I tried to make it look good you know?
Zooetii 7 months ago
The artist is unknown, but it's from iLife in iMovie (a mac video editing program) and the song is called Shetland.
Zooetii 7 months ago
Lol funny pic Good luck I will be posting mine tomorrow.
flashking10 8 months ago
@flashking10 Thanks! And good luck to you too!
Zooetii 7 months ago
lmao i love this!
Arenkurisu 8 months ago
HEY i have those pens too xD but i'm not very good at using them. they're quite wet and smell strong lol. nice entry good luck!
Rivalhopeso 8 months ago
loooooooooool!
WhytManga 8 months ago
Beautiful!
raikiri98 8 months ago