eventhough i personally never heard this song before in my life. i think it goes well with the clips of KH and AC. good job dude and you should enter this vid in and be competitive if you choose to. i think you got a shot.
...AC voice clips in there. I saw that some kind of adult, higher being or form of authority trying to move the story forward. Also, since the last sound clip you used was in Japanese, do you think people in the audience would be able to understand that? These are just critiques and suggestions that I'm giving based on my first impression of the vid. I'm glad you're starting the video now because you'll have a lot of time later on to fix whatever you need to. In the end, everything should...
in the end though, mickey becomes the hero of the day, with sephiroth refusing to become a memory of what he once was in soldier, it all basically adds up to sephiroth losing his title and refusing to bow down quietly
...Geostigma, so maybe you could work that in there. During the big action sequence in the middle, I think you should make more jumpcuts from KH to AC and vice versa to give the AMV a "parallel worlds" kind of feel. The jump cuts you did have in there were pretty neat, though. My last critique is on the ending. With that, you mainly have KH clips in there, but if you want to make that the big finish, you should add more AC clips to that mix. On a positive note, I like how you incorporated...
That was o.k. so far...just a few things I'd like to elaborate on. I think that you should submit the video in the competitive category so you can get some critique from other AMV makers in the competition. Secondly, I don't know what the story is in this video, and I'm having a hard time trying to figure out what it is. I think you should try to make the KH and AC clips connect, story-wise, in some way. During the first "babies crying" line, I could imagine the children from AC that have...
the story kind of makes itself, sora knows what he has to do and he doesn't question it, but cloud is still unsure of what he must do because of aeris. I actually noticed at BOTH of the "babies crying" lines, a sword/keyblade weapon was the main focus of that part, and got me thinking how a sword is personified by the human mind
eventhough i personally never heard this song before in my life. i think it goes well with the clips of KH and AC. good job dude and you should enter this vid in and be competitive if you choose to. i think you got a shot.
dxfan247 2 years ago
...fall into place :).
PockyBebop 2 years ago
you really need to pay attention to EVERYTHING in this, it's simple, yet complex, once you pick up everything, it'll all make perfect sense
JetFire62 2 years ago
...AC voice clips in there. I saw that some kind of adult, higher being or form of authority trying to move the story forward. Also, since the last sound clip you used was in Japanese, do you think people in the audience would be able to understand that? These are just critiques and suggestions that I'm giving based on my first impression of the vid. I'm glad you're starting the video now because you'll have a lot of time later on to fix whatever you need to. In the end, everything should...
PockyBebop 2 years ago
in the end though, mickey becomes the hero of the day, with sephiroth refusing to become a memory of what he once was in soldier, it all basically adds up to sephiroth losing his title and refusing to bow down quietly
JetFire62 2 years ago
...Geostigma, so maybe you could work that in there. During the big action sequence in the middle, I think you should make more jumpcuts from KH to AC and vice versa to give the AMV a "parallel worlds" kind of feel. The jump cuts you did have in there were pretty neat, though. My last critique is on the ending. With that, you mainly have KH clips in there, but if you want to make that the big finish, you should add more AC clips to that mix. On a positive note, I like how you incorporated...
PockyBebop 2 years ago
well cloud is in KH right, so this can still be a Kh vid, but it shows Cloud's struggle to cope with aeris' death and hang on to his inner light
JetFire62 2 years ago
The thing is I don't want it to be too literal, that's the thing that most people do in amvs, they pick specific things to match the lyrics exactly
JetFire62 2 years ago
That was o.k. so far...just a few things I'd like to elaborate on. I think that you should submit the video in the competitive category so you can get some critique from other AMV makers in the competition. Secondly, I don't know what the story is in this video, and I'm having a hard time trying to figure out what it is. I think you should try to make the KH and AC clips connect, story-wise, in some way. During the first "babies crying" line, I could imagine the children from AC that have...
PockyBebop 2 years ago
the story kind of makes itself, sora knows what he has to do and he doesn't question it, but cloud is still unsure of what he must do because of aeris. I actually noticed at BOTH of the "babies crying" lines, a sword/keyblade weapon was the main focus of that part, and got me thinking how a sword is personified by the human mind
JetFire62 2 years ago