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  • HEHHE!

    

  • 86 people think machinima made this.

  • i want episode 2 thats whats annoying about machinima they put good videos then they stop

  • 86 people are comedy addicts

  • @killmaster5596 It's just a poorly thought out detail. After so much war-based media, people are used to characters having utmost freedom. It makes it more entertaining, but it's completely unrealistic. It just makes no sense, and is kind of just plain stupid. It ruined an otherwise great story for me.

  • this was awesome whens a second one coming out

  • 1:44 - lookk at his long neck

  • Woah, I thought that planet at first was Coruscant from star wars not Earth XD.

  • Can someone send me a link to the second episode? Please?

  • yo every first episode is for telling the story line not for action sure teh creators can sometimes fit in sum action but mostly its bout how wut happened how it happened and why

  • make an episode 2, this was really good.

  • Well they may have lives, but it doesn't take 13 months to create a machinima. If anything it takes a few days or a couple of weeks at most.

  • @misswolfy12 They have lives and not just that it takes a long time to make a episode especially one thats over 5 minutes.

  • Pretty mad for a start, can't wait to see ep 2

  • Its pretty good for a start. Out of all the Machinimas Ive seen, this one is alright. The dialogue could use some work. I hope there is more action in the future. But since its the first episode you have to develop character and such. Hope to see more!

  • i know thi is a long shoot but if u need any help with the machinama i could help i will have xbox live for a year so ya im always on GT Jerey104

  • I agree with Applecheery bomb, horrible dialouge. I can write better if you need a scriptor lol.

  • Umm . . . How'd you get out into space?

  • something about this reminds me of the alien films

  • awsome

  • Some of the people that were in this episode arn't on Xbox Live any more so that's why they haven't made an episode 2 yet. It may take a while.Sorry Guys.

  • @misswolfy12 ur the loser who keeps complaining who has no life that keeps asking "whens the damn episode 2 comeing out" get a damn life

  • i agree,

  • You don't say your sorry to the one in charge.

  • it was ok next time more action

  • Yea wtf were is episode 2? Its already been 5 months since episode 1 was released!

  • Wow that's cool Where's episode 2?

  • 6:33 well no shit sherlock

  • nice

  • good effects though

  • dude horrible lines "what do you think it is..."

    "I don't know? it looks like some kind of pit..."

    really no shit

  • well what else would they call it ? the anus of africa?

  • Hey if you like this then whatever I have my own opinions.

  • the hole comes with sandbox. in the middle there will be a block coverin it go on forge and delete it and doooooowwn you go! good machinima

  • where is episode 2?

  • Oh... Mah... God.

  • Love it great job

  • where's number 2?

  • Pretty good. Suspenseful, interesting, decent plot, camera work, and voice acting, all goes well until the end, when the soldier jumps in.

    No military soldier in the right mind would disobey an order from a superior officer. And a unit where a soldier would even consider this would be the most undisciplined unit, one that would definitely not be sent in for such a potentially dangerous mission. That part just makes no sense, and is a big scar in an otherwise great start.

  • i agree i think it could be better. i also applaud them for using effects. risky to do for a first episode

  • @L337COD4 Well, some times the officer aint right and rash actions saves many lives at the coast of that soildiers own.

  • @Penguin89788 I take it you've watched a lot of movies, eh?

  • @L337COD4 I read about a soilder got the Medal of Honor but what he did was aginst his officers order. Real story. (Medal of Honor museam!)

  • @Penguin89788 Could you recite the context? Tell me what happened. I'm very interested.

  • @L337COD4 Forgot the dets. but I rember the Lt. told them to hold position as the tanks came closer. But the soilder instead ran out and planted a mine in front of a tank and blew himself up but actualy ended up saving the rest of the squad.

  • @Penguin89788 While that was very noble and heroic, I doubt they'd punish someone who blew himself up to save his squad. There's a big difference between killing yourself to destroy an enemy vehicle and running into a combat situation out of boredom with no intel whatsoever, forcing your squad to follow you, endangering them as well.

  • @L337COD4 I ment in real life. I had nothing inteaded on refering to the vid lol.

  • @L337COD4 A soldier could disobey a order if it threatens their own life or the life of others. But a report would have to be written up on that situation.

  • @DangerousCheezy I don't think there's a section on the report for "Making a spontaneous decision out of boredom to advance the plot."

  • @L337COD4 -_-

  • @L337COD4 your either military or ex-military huh?

  • @berserk777666 No, just a kid who has a dad who served, and hears all about stuff like this.

  • This sounds very similar to that movie with Dustin Hoffman...

    But I'm still interested. It looks like a machinima with a lot of potential.

  • Sorry for the Delay Guys, My Harddrive Crashed while i was in the middle of finishing the next episode...hopefully i can get my files recovered...and release the next one

  • howd they make that hole

  • the hole's already there on the map, if you have the Sandbox map and delete a block in the middle of the map it uncovers a hole that you can drop down into a catacomb type thing

  • wow this is a cool machinima and its a good story.

  • omfg f u mechima you just leave people hanged anymore

  • This is why I don't like Machinima. They get you hooked on a could be series and then abandon it. Im starting to simply hate them all together.

  • u left me hanging for more

  • OMG i felt so much suspense...i must see wat happens next

  • who knows......

  • is there coming a episode 2?

  • well it depends if the 1st ep is in a battle

  • to everyone who keeps saying theres no action if you watch any other machinima the first episode is about story building and characterisation NOT action

  • yea that is actaully right

  • @DigMatt100 yeah but this one does not have another episode, does it?

  • @frank12364 guess so but when i posted the Episode 1 part was kinda pointing towards a series :p, kind of dissapointed to see that no new episodes have been made tbh

  • well you should do better one then.

    you should appreciate the effort hes effort to try entertain you

  • Dude do a better one if you think you're so good.

    Asshole

  • It's called a introduction, just like any good machinima out there.

  • great

  • "What do you think it is."

    "I don't know. It looks like some sort of pit."

    Unintentionally hilarious!

  • Isn't there a movie called "sphere"

  • Yup, and a (much better) book that said movie was based on.

  • the movie was kinda good i get confused once in a while

  • that was gay!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!­!!!!!!!!

  • where is episode 2

  • 1.you just watched the video.

    2.you started reading this comment.

    3.you think that its pretty obius.

    4.you didnt see I skipped 4.

    5.your checking.

    6.you see I tricked you.

    8.you didnt know I skipped 7.

    9.you dont believe me?well check it.

    copy and paste to 2 more vids. created by ASAP221

  • You dindnt skip 4 :P

  • Send me your readings? come on your right next to the guy just look over his shoulder!

  • sorry guyz!!will find a bloody body in you closet hauting you and will kill you and ur family if you dont send this to 6 videos in 30 mins good luck!

  • For a second there I thought the Sarge was gonna leave them behind XD

  • lol 7:00 the ball of energy is be hind you

  • That was a wonderful peice of work! One of the best I've seen. I can't wait for the next episodes! :D

    Keep it uppp!

  • 90% of the teenage population would have a breakdown if Miley Cyrus was standing on the top of the Empire State Building.

    Repost this if you are one of the 10% who would be yelling JUMP BITCH!! i would be one of the 2% that gose up and pushes her off. I would jump up there push her off, and then t-bag her ass.

  • id be 1 of the .021% that would get a video camera and laugh manaicly as she fell to her death

  • I'd be the the .00000000015% that flew up and saved her from falling, I dont like her but I don't support mindless killing

  • 90% of the teenage population would have a breakdown if Miley Cyrus was standing on the top of the Empire State Building.

    Repost this if you are one of the 10% who would be yelling JUMP BITCH

  • O shit shes STANDING on the Empire state building.

  • is there more videos?

  • probaly there just not made yet

  • how did he make the voices helmety filte thing?

  • it made by editing

  • o thnx

  • o no it the aliens run dont go in the hole jonny

  • is there more episodes?

  • It's my personal reccomendation that you pick up some Voice-Actors, man.

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  • I like the look of this series, I hope it lasts.

  • and if you dont put the full screen on it looks like a movie!!>:D

  • /i agree Hunter, Jim and Nacforsale^^ someone should have been watching them, their needs to be a part 2, and the beginning was completely fucking fake. Also someone on a ship wouldn't be called Private, they would be called Deckman, and they would NOT be working on the fucking bridgeXD

    P.S. They must have had to have specail allowances by Bungie and Microsoft, cause that doesnt look like Halo 3 maps!:O

  • havent u heard of the new mythic maps thats orbital

  • no i would play more, but im travelling right now, and havent settled down...nor do i have Xbox LiveD: im going to get it though, sooner or later!!>:D

  • Thier needs to be a part 2, I can tell this is going to be a interesting machinima, oh and If you need anymore people in it ,or need any help, my GT:Devil Devon1995

  • The script was a little awkward, but it has definite potential. Keep up the good work!

  • "looks like some kinde of pit" gee, you think?

  • Not to bad just work on the script. I also thought it would have been a nice touch if at the end it showed someone watching the three of them

  • based off the book... pretty nice. just bring a little bit more emotion into some of the parts...

  • Basically i agree with what Spartan1175Studios said - the first scene with the colonel and private was unconvincing and really cliche (dont think im taking this or myself too seriously because im sayind "cliche") and the speech throught was slow and mostly boring, more stuff needs to happen - movement and events, long drawn out scenes arent working here - other than that it was OK.

  • I wish I chould get the maps or armor but I don't have Xbox live

  • "Hey Guy's I found Sometihing."

    "What is it?"

    "It's a Pallet"

    "OMG RUN SHIT IT'S GONNA KILL US!

    "DEMON PALLET, DEMON PALLET!"

    =D

  • Not to shabby, camera angeles were great!

  • bob is a fucking queer

  • Lawl @ Oh My Gawd xD

  • its not the best machinima and not the worst, if the script was a bit better and the tension building where tension needed to be built came in full, it would be a lot better. also the pallet over the hole thing was very, very lame. it didnt look, sound, or feel right to any of the story. i do hope future episodes sort the script out a bit, but the cinematography was brilliant. it were some machinimators fail, but as i've said before you need a good script, just to back it all up.

  • great job! Make more I enjoyed it.

  • 5/5 but I got bored but its still good

  • omfg that was the worst machinima iv ever seen ill give it 1 out of 100

  • The video is a good attempt at a machinima need to work on the voice acting looks like the lines were put together in 5 minutes you should watch it yourself first then decide if it sounds right or not and as for DoomNation1 you dont get better without constructive criticism so quit trying to be a savior or make yourself feel better by trying to protect machinima makers

  • I've read some comments on this video and most of these people are ass holes listen if you really think that this video sucks and yo don't appreciate the machinima your fucking watching then get the fuck out or better yet make one your self so I can say how much of a shitty videos it was.

  • thats so true

  • Wow, you have a great idea, but they way it is portrayed, it needs improvement. i mean like when they were like "wow nothing out here, except this HOLE WE LANDED NEXT TO"

  • so is your mom

  • nicely made i want more episodes

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  • bob will end wars lol

  • Pretty good!

    DAMN U BOB

  • His voice is way too fake. How about we use normal voices?

  • 300 POST! YAY!

  • damnit i hate that bob thing