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From: redpaul79
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  • it reminds me of some kind of modern William Burroughs a lot more twisted.. I don't know why I liked it but I did.. Rather intriguing

  • im rating this positive,  its a crazy creation just as I am.

  • what kind of fucked up mind came up with this bullshit?must have been on some good drugs,if they weren't then i would hate to run into these wierd fuckers!!!!

  • this story would be perfect with acid and washed down with some shroom tea! yummy!

  • Why does the reader keep saying "loco tavos" when its "loco vatos"?? And slow down, dude, you're running all your sentences together. Put the pipe down for awhile, ok?? I doubt I will be able to get through the whole story at this pace...

  • it's a goddamn robot alright? blame Windows--they bulit that fucker--as to why it says "Tavos" instead of "Vatos" I have no fucking clue--it just likes saying that way i guess--makes me want to smash the fucking computer--i guess if something's in parentheses it reads like its ass is on fire--anyway, the fucker doesn't do the text justce--just copy allthe parts, paste them in Worpad and read it all in your own voice--this shit is better than Shakespeare.......

  • @redpaul79

    chill tavo

    hahaahahaa

  • ha...

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