Okay, this is BAD. It makes no sense, the spelling and grammar are awful, and I'm getting the feeling this character is a Sue. I refuse to believe that this wasn't intentional. Anyway, good review!
@cavgurl07 Thank you! Yes, I totally agree! This was extremely painful to read and with so many spelling and grammar mistakes, I was almost about to lose it. All the reviews have said that she is a Sue, the plot makes NO SENSE and now you mention it, I think it is intentional. Thank you once again! :)
@cavgurl07 Yeah, it's fine! :) Also the fanfic has been updated since I have reviewed it so, it would be awesome for someone to carry on reviewing the fanfic :)
I don't think it's Anti, because her profile says she loves Justin Bieber.
CubVitaniLioness 7 months ago
@CubVitaniLioness It was justa guess at the time. I wasn't too sure. :L
JuniorFanficCritic 7 months ago
Okay, this is BAD. It makes no sense, the spelling and grammar are awful, and I'm getting the feeling this character is a Sue. I refuse to believe that this wasn't intentional. Anyway, good review!
cavgurl07 7 months ago
@cavgurl07 Thank you! Yes, I totally agree! This was extremely painful to read and with so many spelling and grammar mistakes, I was almost about to lose it. All the reviews have said that she is a Sue, the plot makes NO SENSE and now you mention it, I think it is intentional. Thank you once again! :)
JuniorFanficCritic 7 months ago
@cavgurl07 I meant to say the spelling and grammar :L
JuniorFanficCritic 7 months ago
@JuniorFanficCritic It's okay. :3
(I review fanfics as well in my blog and was wondering if I could review this one. I promise I'll try not to copy you. :))
cavgurl07 7 months ago
@cavgurl07 Yeah, it's fine! :) Also the fanfic has been updated since I have reviewed it so, it would be awesome for someone to carry on reviewing the fanfic :)
JuniorFanficCritic 7 months ago
Bad fanfics...don't you love them???
FanFicCritic 8 months ago
@FanFicCritic They are such a joy! Very painful to read. :L
JuniorFanficCritic 8 months ago
It sounds like she's deliberately trying to copy Enoby's spelling...maybe it's a troll fic.
shinobiflare 8 months ago
@shinobiflare Yeah it sounds like it. The review it got said that too.
JuniorFanficCritic 8 months ago
Good video! : )
SarcasticallyRandom3 8 months ago
@SarcasticallyRandom3 Thanks! This fanfic made me lose it!
JuniorFanficCritic 8 months ago
@JuniorFanficCritic Your welcome! : )
SarcasticallyRandom3 8 months ago