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  • @cartmanrago1 Nice line bro

  • hi :) is it free? can i take this beat for my song? very tnx

  • dARK SANCTUARY- LA REVEUSE

    LOOK AT THIS !!!!!! ON YOUTUBE!!!

    haha xD

    LOL

  • Life is hard man :( i whish it whas easy'r

    ~Why are people so mean! Its not funny any more its hurt people!

    ~Iknow the feeling of hurt

  • My favorite I heard on YouTube so far for it's genre

  • ' Mind If I Can Use This Instrumental For My Album ?

  • fuk wat u say.. wanna try n play.. blast u any day.. turn your day gray.. make your ass pray.. to the lord u will say.... forgive me for my ways... lieing never pays..

  • check out my video resonse to this called lost my mind

  • MR 33 degree freemason im here and i want to play son my name is jayson the 33 freemason killa its all because it got the WILL yh , i show you bitches how to thrill n kill with da bass line that sends you a evil chill, il take you down with the old bill that has intentions to kill its own kind but you nevermind so ima let this shit shine

  • i guess the 33 dislikes are always sad

  • Sounds interesting.....not bad, not bad... ;)

  • There are some deep lyrics here.

  • Patience....is wasted, debating my fate it's/ Painstaking, the placement of hatred's adjacent/ To the cage that i'm chained in, shaking the braces/ Faceless: I've awakened the greatest of statements/ My name is, unnoticed, labeled an omen/ Hopeless, I'm choking, as emotions eroded/ Unknown is devotion, no matter of practice/ Fact is the matter is bad and I don't matter: trapped in/ Collapse is the fragments remaining of sanity/ Imagine me as beautiful, not this misplaced tragedy....
  • We're chocking on our own blood/ And yea I said we/ Cuz we allowed this to happen/ A generation destined to bleed/ Death at birth cause in some years the young die/ Who let this genocide be! Now watch it multiply!/ Wait we're so busy being so drunk & too high Too flashy & too fly/ To wake up to real life Can you hear them babies beyond the grave/ You know, the 1s you didn't save/ You mad at slavery/ Well welcome to it's new face in this world we live in But note this, its our own imprisonment
  • @westphiladelphy can i use your lyrics for this if you dont mind?>

  • @cunthead666 Yeah, no doubt, I'd like to hear it when your done, keep me posted

  • the pain is killin me.

    6 years probation for only one felony

    and i know you aint feelin me

    mommy in gone in rehabiltation facility

    gettin high to bring myself to tranquility

    now docters be givin pills to me

    to cure me of some bullshit dissability

    ADHD that shit aint even real to me

  • Everytime I closes, i keep seeing your face,

    you know saying goes' here today tommorow gone without a trace,

    without you' it aint gonna be the same, i get dis feeling everytime I hear your name, i'm the type with alot of pride but right now my hearts in alot of pain,

    i cant believe that you were taken, im sitting hear still kinda shaken,

  • yesterday i was in a house where a lady died, four days sitting ther dead with her dog by her side,

    a sad story, thats real, i wish that lady survived,

    i feel bad, out of all my friends im the only one who cared,

    i wondered about the lady and why all her shit wasnt ther,

    all her gold her money nothing was ther,

    people need to stop leaving ther fam cuz the end is near,

    dying by urself?, talk about fear, scary moments like those are twhy god made it so we can tear,smh at the ppl who .........

  • ma marianna puttana....

  • checkout my version of this song in the videoresponses. its called lost my mind

  • like it like it... can i have this for a song man? maybe in HQ and wav format?

  • nC job...:D

  • could i take this, and put this on Mixtape? msg asap

  • im using this making a song when im done making my not sad song

  • the treble line kicks ass.

  • ima killa so dont try me

    pussy nigga i have u hooked up to a i.v

    im poison like ivy wit the choppa right beside me

    tell ya family bye bye stop the crying

    tonight u dying and i aint lying

    it goes silent then big suprises

    ya body in the ground

    no wer to be found

    and i still walk around and never fuckin frown

  • @nbent

    you honestly have no idea what good lyrics are

  • @nbent  you honestly have no idea what good lyrics are

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  • Check my beats out if you like nice R&B beats!!! @TrueBeatzProductionz

  • amzing love it !!!

    

  • Yo Can i use this? i'll Give all Credit and tell some Peeps to subscribe to you. My Click really needs qood stuff like this!

  • świetna robota! to jest zajebiste!

  • check out my video response called lost my mind. i promise its the best video response

  • In a world so hypnotized by the lies behind lines in our minds, we despise whats beyond are eyes we realize the unbreakable ties that bind each other to another we get mad and we stutter we get sad and we hover like a mother who smothered your baby brother,i walked out never said that i loved her, she asked me why and i said its above her its a pretty simple game its all about money and fame not hard work and shame a long road your name it takes time to arrive a pussy goin insanejustbeinalive.

  • I'm definately a fan. Would you be cool with me using this track in short video? Let me know. Thx.

    (p.s. Very interested in knowing what the gal/sample in BG is saying. Anyone?)

  • what the fuck should i do i live in a place with outta fuckin cru ...the only thing i know is a gun and thats my new friend the only one ...so now i say good bye becouse im livin a life of fuckin lies ...wy wy dont i just fuckin die and end up in hell the one place thats better then livin in a fuckin cell ....now you know im a fuckin hater with a reason to live now kill me or just fuckin let me live

  • @kill4ubabe i'd recommend a dictionary for you first. Learn some more vocabulary, after that try to be more realistic. Usually that is more pleasant for people to read instead of that gangsta image shit, or at least make your metaphors sound intellectual. Just an advice. Good luck

  • @TheUkrnsmr umm ya i try my best if i could write the rest oif it i would

  • polish made 

  • nevermind i got it

  • HOW DO I UPLOAD A VIDEO RESPONSE???

  • i did a song to this beat. imma make a video response to it. check it out..

  • i like your piano beats nice job :D

  • here we go again so/here we go again so/ coming back to the stash/its all gone/ what went wrong/ they came took/ everything/ once more on top of this shack again/ this went all wrong the wrong time and place/ i took it all for grace/ save the lives of a million people/ i dont know/ too bad i did it in the first place/ this should all be mine but i died on the the time i did fly/ once so high in the sky/ i might forbid everything in this hell city/ ha im the king i own everything now

  • Where Did You Find That Pic

  • Im back again/ Back in that dead end/ so Lost wishing my one and only could at least put out the cost/ but she with her man having a feast its my lost/ so now my 2nd mind is gone and it was my heart/ my third mind still hear just hasnt been showned/ and my 1st mind is done and blowned/ sometimes i think of what to do in life but nothing comes to mind/ cause all my minds dont want to combine/ Its crazy like me picturing a coke line/ is it god giving me a sign/ or the devil trying to get my alind

  • red alert/ content aint enough/ i go berserk/ even chaos takes time and planning/ shit is work/in the proximity/ where comfortable is symmetry/ subliminally ideas creep, its elementary/ nap time go to sleep/ and when u dream/ take a leap/ cross the line/ then tell me what u see/ because askew is the view creating the differences between me and u/ in this case no one knows whats true/ let is stew/take the time to think/blue get a clue/one day i will rule/when things crumble/time moves i will lose
  • what the fuck is going on in my HEAD sometimes i wished i woke up DEAD cause all i see is the color RED dont know why but im warm BLOODED but it over FLOODED my bodys open now im cold BLOODED im feeling to evil for this EARTH sense BIRTH i feel so depressed cause i even treat my self like DIRT i forgot how to FLIRT, i cant even take of her SKIRT i wish i could REST but itll just make me more DEPRESSED the only time id feal safe is when you shoot me up past the earths CREST so i end my air,YES

  • can someone tell me what the french girl is saying in the background music? translations anyone?

  • Simply WOW

  • Stary Twoje produkcje odbierają mi mowę.

    Jeśli możesz to wrzuć link DL

    Pozdrowionka

  • slowly fall back, n let the attack of the lack of success eat at you, while my brainwaves feed at you. I got a notion, my flow is somewhat ocean, demon says he controls brainwave n Im at peace with his motion. twilight is my calm scene , allow control to wrong being, through his heart im walking, through his eyes im stalking. internaly compusting, both good and bad are lusting, war to be new touch thing, I think my halo's rusting.

  • never been the one to snitch on a nigga......always keep a mug with my finger on a trigger.....fuckin wih theses fools we'll be ya grave diggers.......yall boyz cakin bitch...thats what i figured

  • Amazing so amazing who is the artist?

  • Every day of my life I stop to take a breath. Meditate N' smoke some sess. It takes the edge off the stress, that's been creepin upon me. I think about it when I sleep, my dreams come to haunt me. When I wake can barely see, whishin that it could be, just another day, that it'll all be o.k. Will it ever be the same, man nada damn thing's changed. 40oz in my hand, while I'm locked in this cage.

  • i may not all be here/ but i tell you one thing, i fill my victims..full of fear/ i pump that double shotty to ya body/ i pull the trigger and stop the fuckin block party/ ya wanna start beef? let me know/ i make it rain blood...like its fuckin snow/ im so sick minded, take a look in my mind and ya might get blinded/ first crime i did i was about 13 i pulled up to a house and with an ak i started a scene/ bu that what happpens when a nigga doesnt get his creame.

  • yo this is some sick shit bro. i got some thoughts flowin to this one..it would be sick if i could record something over it...

  • Day 1 my life seems to pass me very slowly, so as my day goes on I keep thinking if life is worth it or should I just pull the triger on the gun, im tierd of having no fun ,come home from work gettin yelled at. till I lay in my own ashes and dirt I rest in my grave maybe to stop the pain from being hurt im just wondering if life gets better or does it stay the same with no money no fame im tierd of this place its so very lame lighting starts and it begins to rain

  • That picture is creepy.

  • Really good work man props!

    also trying to find the pic but no luck?

  • @Nehpz print screen ( open paint ) ctrl + v then crop ur image and save :D

  • can i use this in my mixtape?

  • SUBSRIBE ME AND RECEIVE TOTALLY FREE BEAT

  • zis

  • really good

  • death is supposed to happen, people here are actin, fuck this world whats happnin?,

    i think im high, im rappin, dirty like a trash can,

    the ego god gave me, will make you blow like an afgan,

    R.I.P GOOD MUSIC

  • This beat sounds like it would be used for revenge instead of sadness. but don't get me wrong this beat is sick to the max!

  • yeah im dying i be crying but ma life done som things that left a nigga dying caus what he di wrong was the lying/ this aint a love story its just a hate thing that got ma brain frying/ so everytime i rap/i go insane till the track collapse/ingenious nd infamous is in ma genes/thats why i stay broke wearing the same old dirty jeans/ murder scenes i just seen so many jugemental dudes wanna make me sing/ its wack how i find them nd the same old thing is make em bleed/ still wondering wahts free??/

  • that's me!!

  • He's slowly dyin on the pavement..I don't think his heart'll make it..flatline..tonight another young life was taken..was only seventeen but he was destined for greatness..stabbed in the back by the one's he called faithful..betrayed in his prime by these niggas ungrateful..attitude they showin..just goin through the motions..even went to his funeral not showin no emotions..I'm lookin at the sky thinkin how is this even possible..my mother lost her son tonight..and I'm the one who took his life.

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  • @Mannolo22 Aw fuck, those are some really strong lyrics. 

  • @Mannolo22 Damn, it would be great as lyric :)

  • @Jacekdupa It's understandable, this is a fucking beast beat

  • Smiling but

    With this hurtful expression that makes me want to hide

    Cause who ever cause it should be replaced with the happy faced

    Clown to be let free as soon as you notice it. To run after you with a knife.

    A scream unheard just like a bad dream. Something to wake from..

  • An agenda full of things to do But unseen letters to be read. A list to destroy before it catches your name. A life full off unexpected melodys Were would it lead? A sane life to Be seen. A long term relationship with The demon’s that haunt and cause your Light turn to darkness from one day to the next. A picture printed in my mind.. A classroom full of clowns Something so innocently given a face to smile, but these
  • layin on the table/doctor tryin ta oporate

    cuz when u pulled out ya pistol/u tried to contemplate

    u shouldve known/wit real niggas u cant hazitate!

    cuz shitz real/G-locc been dun blew off half ya face!

    its all good/u know im hungry but u scrape ya plate?

    take n take/until i come find u/i hope u aint in state

    cuz i aint in da right state of mind/my fingers ache,

    pull da nine/my twisted mind/made my home sentral state!

    u wont servive/u want to die?/bitch pick a lake! illbe fine/fuckdacase

  • @chips101ahoy it seems i'm speaking a language unknown to strangers. i'm it a dangerous land worried i'll be burried a heathen, they say i'm gonna sleep with the demons for no reason other than not attending service at churches. god says he serves the worthless but only those followin his purpose and searchin for correction. but even with the life of sin i've been livin in i make no amendments cuz it's depressin. i'm stressin for a direction but can't stop my progression to county corrections.

  • made me who i am today and i'm thankful for the life they lived and the experiences they shared with me.

    with that. fuck you. goodnight.

  • @22092yorkstudent get your head out of your ignorant jehova's witness asshole and realize some people go through life without being able to feel any happiness. they'd give anything for that and to feel hope but they can't. who the hell are you to determine the quality of a person because of internal unstability. i can tell you my friends were some of the nicest people i've ever met and had the chance to know and i am so grateful i knew them. they taught me more than you could imagine and they

  • i don't give a flying fuck as to what religion you are. i don't care who you are. you have absolutely no right to say who goes where. two of my friends lost their lives to suicide and you know, yeah, they discarded the life given to them. but it was their life and they had every right to do with it what they pleased and i respect the decision they made. by no means am i happy they did it. i would give anything for them to be back. i don't know who the fuck you think you are to patronize them.

  • that picture tells me that child is listening to music to stop the sounds of gunshots and wearing a bag over his head so he doesn't see it. hard shit

  • This is The yip man theme for me and i will make the yip man's tribute !!!!!!

  • im gonna do the song built for this beat watch!!! look out for it this weekend, make yall thundercats think

  • got the best version and song built for it this weekend watch out!!!!, itll make yalls look like teeny boppers outside 7-11 freestylin with skinny jeans saggin like fags,i like the pinoy version it was sick saaaloooo dat one!!! lol

  • @22092yorkstudent all i can say to you is go fuck yourself.

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  • hella sick ass fuck!!

  • Damnz what a beat....how u made it ? what program ?

  • mad dope

  • ive seen friends pass. seen kids gas themselves. lose their lives when they refused to put bad habits up on the shelf. lose their mind when they wanted more to life. no contentment just resentment and depression. now theyre up in heaven makin amendments with god. so many problems but no one to solve emm bones are hollow, no role models, so who do we follow? i dont got a father i can count on unless its to criticize how i live my life. where do we go when we cant see through the darkest night?

  • @s0cr8es passing through mirrors this isnt an easy transition i came with nothing and ill leave the same way darkest nights or brightest days i carry on raving attacking backpacking this land by any means i dont give up not for me or my father but the principle behind living i give my everything life to take this worlds a playground and im here to make a stand set up post and squander for all the eye can see destroy every piece of fuckin land.

  • dude can i buy this beat from for a song i wrote hit me up

  • APRIL BRINGS MAY / AND MAY BRINGS JUNE / AND JUNE BRING THE ROOMS / THATS IN MY ROOM / SO I EAT EM / AND MY MIND GOES DARK / AND THEN THE WORLD GET CRAZY / CAUSE I SEE MY SOUL SPARK / CATCH A GLIMPSE OF A CHILD / WHO'S THOUGHTS GONE WILD / CAUSE SOCIETY BROUGHT PAIN / AND HIS FACE DONT SMILE / ALL HE GOT IS RUBBERBANDS NOBODY EVER GAVE HIM SHIT / SO HE GREW UP TO FAST AND HE STARTED CATCHING LICKS / GUNS IN FACES / CRAZY CHASES AND CAR RACES / POLICE IS FUCKING RACIST / GOT NIGGAS CATCHING CASES

  • RUNNING TRYING TO CATCH MY MIND / FROZEN IN THIS SPACE OF TIME / YEAH A NIGGA DIRTY / YOU SHOULD SEE THIS PLACE OF MINE / DONT MEAN ...... IM NOT CLEAN ....... I JUST PAINT SCENES / CANDY PAINT DRIPPING WET / WHILE I SMOKE GREEN / GREEN GOT A NIGGA BUGGING CAUSE IM ON LEAN / TOOK A BEAN NOW IM CRUNK ON SOME CAFFINE / TO MANY DRUGS , THUGS AND SLUGS , / SO WHEN NIGGAS MEAN MUG / I JUST HIT EM WIT THE SHRUG / MTV SHIT, YEAH MY HEART IS UNPLUGGED / DEAD TO THE WORLD / BRING LIFE TO MY GIRL

  • Możesz podesłać image które jest zamieszczone jako video? :)

    Jak coś, to podam maila.

    Pozdro z Polski :)

  • Oh I love this song. Could you give me mp3 link :x

  • yea i get it uh if you wanna know the truth every moves just a gamble so either way i say fuck it walking the streets with a handfull of seeds saved up just tryina make some money

    probably get locked up and it aint to funny i say sorry in advance but i gotta get by so im gonna turn an ounce into a meal no word of a lie every season keep on growing, only getting better fp whiter then a key drink applesyder with me cinamonapple blunts and coffee not tea wtf is this sht idek but bitch i can flow

  • Great Song! Nice Beat!

  • Wrote a song about someone dying and going to heaven, it's great ;) lol

  • WOKE-UP IN THA MORRNING . . WHAT TO EXSPECT. THA UNEXSPECTED. DIDNT KNW WHT HAD HAPPEN.WAS A BLURR. COULDNT SEE NOT EVEN MY HANDS. HEAR THESE DEMON VOICES WITHIN. SCREAMING ND YELLIN AT ME. WANNA SEE MY HONEY,LOCKED UP IM ROTTEN ND CRINCHING.BEHIND THESE BARS.THINK I KILLED A MOTHA FUKKA LAST NIGHT, ON AN ACCOUNT OF MAN SLAUGHTA. HAD NO RECOLLECTION OF WHAT HAD HAPPEN THA NIGHT BEFOORE, FALSELY ACCUSED OF KILLIN A NIGGA, I MUST CONFESS I AINT THA BEST, IM A CRAZY MATHA FUKKA NIGGAS WONT STEP

  • very very goog beat..

  • HOW MUCH FOR THE RIGHTS TO THIS BEAT

  • I AM THE BEST I MUST CONFESS U OTHER LIL GIRLS JUST DONT PAST THE TEST ILL LEAVE UR HEAD SPINING LIKE U WERE POSSESED

    MY SOUL JUST LINGERS N LAUGHS AT UR TORMENT

    MEDEVIL TIMES AND THE CANVAS TENTS

    I WAS HERE WAY BEFORE UR FAMILY DESENT

  • @MsOtto68 Haha I'm a lyricist, what you expect! ;)

  • @Lilmiss2shoes beth. dunno why you keep saying you're a lyricist when the most you write is actual poems on microsoft word and your english coursework at school. who exactly pays you to write lyrics for them, fml

  • Well Nice Mate!

  • Learn English Ghetto scum

  • @Zodiac7649 I grew up ghetto,poverty. No heat didnt bother me, Didnt eat.. New i aught to be freed from these chains,releaved of the pain,I bleed my hands stained.. Beleaved in something,ended up with nouthing??Took a fuckin, Im back .12 guage pumpin. I get revenge you aint scene nouthing...ChainSaw ,,Heard of texas bitch...Lol... Beats jammin..

  • Type "MYPRIZE" instead of YOU in "youtube" and hit enter.

  • GO,.::MAKE~:,.BEATS`;:ONLINE~:­,.

    WWW.BEATMAKER2.TK

    

  • realy beauty track...

  • "La tête dans les nuages"

  • The Cursed Child' Is Barely Versatile' Trying To Find The Light Of Day' His Spirit Is Gone And Has Parted Its Own Way' Blinded From All The Pain' All He See's Is The Darkness And The Pain' He See's Ghost's And Evil Spirits' Their Whispering "Death Is Near, Can You Hear It, Can You Feel It, Can You Kill It"' De Pressence Of His Aura Dissapearing And He's Abysmal Fearing' He's Sad And Lonely' Isolated In An Unforgiven Land' Their He Lays In The Beach's Sand' Thinking Its Heaven"

  • uh listen i barley rap to this shit but i love to put out a freestyle quick this is my first rap post ever niggas will live forever its that everlasting life niggas gotta hold o together like they was getting spliced i know i aint all that ]but a freestyle never hurt noobody at least give me that and if any nigga got any complaints i will eat your brain i will steal your name and your family will be crucified for the game\ nigga so now u know da name Jaykilla will knock yo ass out
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  • is it on itunessss>>?

  • Und jetzt bin ich hier, ganz allein, nein, du bist nicht mehr neben mir

    Du warst meine sonne, jetzt bist du weg und ich erfrier

    Wochenlanges kopfzerbrechen, jeden tag was unternehmen

    Ablenkung hat nichts genützt ich kann dich einfach nicht umgehen

    Deine augen, dein lächeln dein mund, deine haar

    Die stimme der engel sanft wie ne acustic gitarre

    Und ich will nicht aktzeptieren so wie du dich entschieden hast

    Hab gedacht dass meine hand an deine hand ziemlich gut passt

  • so dope

  • as i listen this faint illusion glistens, its mind back fires like a dirty old piston, its hissing something aint right, its missing, kissing fiath, a faint figured wraith, its dark tonight, he lives a silhouette life. his moans are sharper then a knife, his voice colder then ice, the wind is his price, aint no low life scum, bigger then a ghetto slum, his eyes one look will turn you numb, as he sits their on his rocking chair, you better prepare, this silhouette wraith wont care.
  • ey, u mind if i use this beat? i'll give u credits for it and props.

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  • (chorus) The paint in me, is the pain I breath, a picture seen, on how I like to grieve. Im so alone but lovin every minute, secret inside my war I hope to always win it.

  • @BennySmacks yo benny wow i really like that bro. :), keep it up.

  • Never conscious when Im wake, never sleeping when im down, always havin time to bake, not search for work aroun the town, im hopin rappin can get money, that sweetness spendin that honey, bein took by all the men who greedy man that aint funny. U takin everything the big ones earn for all the shit they jott, so what would happen to the industry if all the rappers stopped.

  • Itd crumble down a nightmare wakened sayin who will make us rich, I'll be there standin with greatest sayin your a bitch. Unil that time does come im makin this one lonely statement, I will try to rise to greatness even if on the embankment. I'll plaster mind and sound for everyone, Ofcourse I mean my own not yours just sit down have some gun

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  • put some wubs on it

  • thats a nice beat

    check out mines if u wanna = )

  • Adrinalin pumpin,Legs Cramping,Heart thumpin...............again and again,,Getting Into Something........Im Diggin Holes,,My Enemys on Hold.......Pupils Solid Black My Flesh Clam and Cold..........................­.

  • i've been dreaming for bigger shit, since i was just 13, but my over priced ambitions wont progress from just a dream, and i cant get a normal life, because fame is all i seek, and with no spark to ignite my work, my futures looking bleak, i'm not the type of guy, to sit around and complain, but my cloud is always dark, yet it never seems to rain, its nothing to do with money, which makes us all enslaved, everyones trapped in the status quo, spread like a mexican wave.

  • everyone can i have your attention (please) unless you wanna keep applying for government(cheese) begging murderous tyrants to lower yer (lease) (piece) by (piece) they gotta (lease) on yer( neice)(reese) a ransom of money or its blood on her(fleece) so bring her to the yard like the dudes of(caleese) and (please) drive safe so theres no tail of(police) the revenge in your blood veins, boils a(release) a toxic venom of redemption to(seize) all the things in this life that are make(believe)

  • Good ass beats

  • eyyy u know where i can get this beat in wav. format homie i like dis beat is some good shit and i would like to use it msg me or something bout more info ;)

  • BAR 1

    take the gat out da drower homie u ready fo war cut that nigga so deep tha blood juz poors

    Juz like tha thunder storms comin out to west tex full of all these meskins

    ready to put sum wrk in we been ready fo this shit but it myt tak u a lil bit

    BAR 2

    These niggas aint knw how it is ova here they trip when we smir they blood on tha wallz

    now i got all these niggas up on my ballz they knew they was guna fall and crumble

    They hatin cause we never stumble now aint that humble

  • Youtube's mcs lol

  • @Gravatinha000 so that makes you a youtube mc critic...thats even worst..!

  • @Gravatinha000 who cares..?? i hate to use this as an example but look how famous justin bieber..from what...YOUTUBE

  • I wrote a song on this beat...

  • this is filthy I wrote a great verse to this I was wondering you youd mind me using this beat.

  • @ajkoury dude i wrote a song to this beat last friday it is amazing how God works

  • lately ive been so pissed/ fuck life i want to knife my wrist/ flow deep you cant see past the mist/ light a fire like an arsonist/ so speak / my life is a mountain with no peak/ cant escape the box/ even with the strength of ten men you cant break an ox/ fuck time, i made the clocks/ no rock im doin major but cops/ keep bringing me down/ so i keep singing my sound/ look up im just clinging to clouds/ and when i turn around/ i see a hurtful clown/ and its lights out.

  • siittin bak gettin ready to react,attack, somthin to get this off my back, addictive to flowin, like most ppl on crack, toll my momma ,ill neva be a gonna, smokin marijuana, some day ima huant ya, sippin on purple shasta gettin rrady to outlast ya,,,,,, i cant see why haters want me gone, but i dont care i keep my mind so strong, wondrein why my own people do me wrong, seems like everyday i live like this, southside lettas tatted on my wrist, i keep it tight like my fist, 
  • check out my piano beat. and what vocals did you use?

  • i have the same headphones :)

  • My raps are like traps you just die/you burn into the air/your ashes in my hair/ I'll never forget you because I know you'll be there for me always next me here I'm sincere/people will not make a fool of you because I will kick there rear and stick a bottle of root beer into there ear. They can't hear They have seen the consequences and now there on my list of the death sentence.

  • Thanks for all the love!!

  • @michaeltarwater92 Dude honestly this is a reaal beat good job, i wish i had the time to buy the equipment to make this into an actually song

  • I swear I’ll stay loyal.

    When worst comes the worst.

    Amma hold you down for you.

    Cause I don’t gotta lie.

    Even though I got pride to me.

    We can confide together.

  • You know it hurts deep down cuz I know you not around. I’m sitting here bumping my r&b sounds. Cause your not right here. Its still not clear. And every single word that I say is sincere. Cause I miss you ma. Yeah I really mean that. It hurts for a fact I just hope you come back. keep our bond intact. And remember the beginning you don’t gotta leave just to give you my opinion. Cause I’ll be there for you.
  • a rebel to the world;a demon for my cause/glowin eyes in the dark and marks on the walls/blood on my fangs and drippin down my claws/rage in my viens and hate is in my heart/anger is my best friend and pride is my wife/i was birth out of lust and sin is my life/i feel the burn of the darkness even as i type/like the bottom of an abyss i have never seen light

    -tezzy aka tezboi

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