Holdin' On: A Nick Jonas Story Chapter 3

[watchedallofitfade]

no!!!! nick!

dont make fun of me but about four years ago, my friend was like "what if nick jonas died?"

and i was like "nick can't die. hes an angel."

hahahaha i was ten years old

whew i've been a fan for a long time

[RQOCJD]

WOW!! i soo knew trouble was gonna come as soonas those thugs entered tht store!! BUT I DID NOT EXPECT A KIDNAP..lol...i thought it was gonna be somethng lyk tht but idk mybe later lol.amazing ch :)

[dallas1kid]

Ahh nooo what's going to happen??

Ahh soo GOOODDDD!!!

[ohmyjonas5000]

LOVE IT!

And I love YOU :)

[tam709]

OH MY GOSH! ahhh!! ahhhh!! ahhh!! ok... I'm good now. ahhhhh!! last one. I swear haha i suuuurely didnt expect that! thats freaky haha but i LOVE IT! but that's not breaking news haha

[fanastywriter]

this is really really awesome!!! i love this story and the come what may too!!!

[JoeBroluver430]

omg this is intense plz post more!!!

[LittleMizzGawjuz]

what an epic story :]

and its only chapter 3!

wooo

your a genius babe :]

[theCatisindaHat]

I love it! Post again soon!! :D

[bratierocker71]

loved it! more?plz?

[nicksgirl2012]

Don't kill Nick. He's to beautiful to die...

Love It!!

[ewizzle06]

woot woot!

[oneloveejbs]

this is intense!

:(

i'll beat those big bad bullies up anyday for you Nicholas! :) No reward nessecary..but much appreciated ;) lol

[AwiqhtMate]

:O thats well awesome.

[musicismylife500]

What do you mean one of us guessed it? I know I guessed that they were going to become hostages. haha! Man I'm so smart like that. Now the real story begins.

[klutz795]

wow intense :P ... cant wait for the next chapter!! ...

the song in the vid is dancing in the moonlight by king harvest :)

[jordilynnoffical]

you know im very sad at you ily bu im sad at you and i love this

[JonasFanFic16]

why?

[jordilynnoffical]

cause she just relized that she didnt make any of you r storys i mean was in any of your storys :P shes not even ome that was me writing for her :P

[laughlivejonas1916]

omg!!! love it!!!

[kellylynn11xo]

oh goodness....

[wweandjbcollide]

they r kidnapping nick??

i will kick them in the balls lol

jk jk jk......kinda

[xoxoJBluverxoxox]

O.o

They kidnapped NICK JONAS??

OMG

Post tomorrow?

:D

[JonasFanFic16]

You're awesomerrr(:

[coeyjbfan93]

Grease is my favorite movie!!!

"Um, guys. I'm going to have to ask you to, um, leave, 'cause you're, like, disrupting the peace, or something." The girl from behind the counter said.

haha, i couldn't help but laugh at that part!

[iforgotmyusernamex]

i wasn't expecting that! WOW

[Fuzzy2230]

Nooooo!U TOUCH NICK N I WILL PERSONALLY VIRTUALLY DECAPATATE U!MICK N CHRIS I MEAN U!who guessed it?

[dontmakefunofartards]

dont know the song

but i love the story

post # 4 soon

-nay nay-

[iheartjonas23]

uh oh

[GeorgiiaMae]

This rocks!! I love the story, you're an amazing writer!

[JBAndTwilightLover55]

LOVE IT!!!!

[kookoobb]

This plot is beyond awesome. Totally original. I can't wait to see what happens!

[JonasBroluver156]

oh wow, i knew those two guys were trouble.

did you know that when you search jonas fanfiction on youtube your stories/story playlists are listed third?

i LOVE the Grease soundtrack!!

[JonasFanFic16]

they ARE?!?!??!?!?!?!!?

[JonasBroluver156]

yeah!

[stephanijp94]

2nd comment YYYYYYYYYYYAY!,

okey... not the same thing but i liked it!! no way better i loved it!

[xoDayDreamerxox3]

1st comment!!!! YAY! and OMG!!!! whats gonna happen?!