The truck scene at 00.59 is quite interesting... smoke coming out slowly :)
though a few things bother me are
- What do you want to show with the dead signal at 01:07
- Though editing and effects at 01:25 are very good but seem irrelevant to the theme...
- Wish could you have added something on noise... like crowded roads and vehicles or any other thing to show intensity of this worst kind of pollution
- Guess the last scene with kids could have been more lively
bohat khoob =)
AliMohani 2 years ago
Nice
The truck scene at 00.59 is quite interesting... smoke coming out slowly :)
though a few things bother me are
- What do you want to show with the dead signal at 01:07
- Though editing and effects at 01:25 are very good but seem irrelevant to the theme...
- Wish could you have added something on noise... like crowded roads and vehicles or any other thing to show intensity of this worst kind of pollution
- Guess the last scene with kids could have been more lively
all in all a good effort...
adeelscorp 2 years ago