I really enjoyed the words you spoke in this piece. My only criticism is that you tend to go very fast, slow down relax and take your time, enunciate your vowels and it will come out much better. As you got into the swing about halfway thru you started to slow down and it was much better =)
@beezybeast101 Thanks so much for the positive criticism your awesome! I'm not yet used to reading my poetry out loud it's just for my writing purposes only but I decide to share with youtube but I will try harder to go slower thanks for listening anyway and giving advice :o)
love it............
opemot 1 month ago
@opemot Thanks :)
MSo0Suductive 1 month ago
<3
SincereKouture 6 months ago
showing love...
DavionIsAKoolAssNerd 6 months ago
Lovee
JayJuBo 7 months ago
I really enjoyed the words you spoke in this piece. My only criticism is that you tend to go very fast, slow down relax and take your time, enunciate your vowels and it will come out much better. As you got into the swing about halfway thru you started to slow down and it was much better =)
beezybeast101 8 months ago
@beezybeast101 Thanks so much for the positive criticism your awesome! I'm not yet used to reading my poetry out loud it's just for my writing purposes only but I decide to share with youtube but I will try harder to go slower thanks for listening anyway and giving advice :o)
MSo0Suductive 8 months ago
loved it sis keep on telling hoe u feel through ur poetry love u tons
juliagulia069 8 months ago
That crack very nice M
Classicboys081 8 months ago
I love this. There is a raw honesty here that you were very brave to admit. Deep Deep. (finger snaps)
bigoutrage1 8 months ago