The Secret Lover part 2 ( A Henry and Charles fan fic )

[Chrollianne]

Just one thing that makes your story weird, the word "gay" wasn't existing at the time, it describe people attracted to members of the same sex only since late 19th. You should have used "homosexual" or "sodomite" as it is said here : law2 (dot) umkc (dot) edu / faculty / projects / ftrials / wilde / wildelawpage (dot) html . Anyway, I love your story, even if the historical accuracy isn't the best, the story IS really great! But the thing I just told you would make the scene more true and real.

[01sakyacg]

very beautifully chonographed! Thank u for your time of making us feel through your motions. Great work with talent! Thanks again.

[AM092]

Great videos!!

[morelater2001]

it was really beautiful, love it

thanks



[beretta1342000]

That is brillant. I love these stories you come up with. Keep it coming!

[HappySlovenianGirl]

I am so curious about the next part!

[FairyKingdom86]

Loving this and looking forward to the rest. I like how you're doing the thing of having just snapshots and then including moving shots whenver you need to. Just something interesting about the syle you've chosen that I like. And the photoshops of Henry and Charles together were perfect! One little thing that bugged me: when you used the term "gay". Cuz I don't think the word was used then. If you had said something about practicing sodomy that would have worked better. But loving this story!

[Fantasysfriend3]

I'm addicted to this story now! :)

It's absolutely amazing, how you combine the music, pictures and video!

Pleas please continue to make this wonderful story! :D

[AngelinaLaFleur]

By the way, the photo shop kiss you did, with Henry and Charles..ABSOLUTELY BRILLIANT. I could not tell it was photo shopped at all!

Also, his face at 5:54 is hilarious, I choked on my tea when I saw it.

Can't wait til part 3!

[AngelinaLaFleur]

This is so enticing , five million stars for you =D

[spikester93]

AHH i can't wait till episode 3 now! it's getting intense! Well done! your videos are still amazing and they just get better :)

[xHistoryGirl23x]

Wow so entertaining! Loved it!

[bratykrista]

That was amazing!

<3

5 stars + fav

[Ladyjaxs]

This keeps getting better and better...considering that Katherine is my fav wife....I can't help but feel sorry for her, and Henry is on my bad side for screaming at her like that in the end.. I cannot for part 3

[Seannaholic]

Omg your fan fics are the best.

[heartofsnow23]

thankyou hunny .....Im so glad your liking it.

 Im in the middle of making part three....expect more storms! lol xx

[Seannaholic]

I would love a fan fic with you sometime. I fancy myself a writer as well. I have videos for a couple of my RPG games.