I'm DEAD serious ( Haha, "dead serious". I didn't even mean to do that! :p). I almost went into shock when I read the... stabbity-stab-stab part. o.o .... I'd like to keep a safe distance from Reneé... Or Renée... However it's spelled.... *crawls under a rock* This is like Underworld!!!! :D AND I LOVE UNDERWORLD! TEEHEE! Seriously, you're an amazing writer. And I'm really stupid because I just noticed this story isn't written with POVs! ROFL XD I'm gonna keep reading now, woman. :P
wOW!! I jst couldn't resist it!! My frnd told me tht the 2nd chp was out n i had to log on through my cel!! Thnk god for wireless connections!! Honestly dis was Way way more interesting than economics!!post soon pls n ppl comment!!anyhoo am signin off back to studies :[
I'm DEAD serious ( Haha, "dead serious". I didn't even mean to do that! :p). I almost went into shock when I read the... stabbity-stab-stab part. o.o .... I'd like to keep a safe distance from Reneé... Or Renée... However it's spelled.... *crawls under a rock* This is like Underworld!!!! :D AND I LOVE UNDERWORLD! TEEHEE! Seriously, you're an amazing writer. And I'm really stupid because I just noticed this story isn't written with POVs! ROFL XD I'm gonna keep reading now, woman. :P
MsJonaslol 2 years ago
YOU HAVE 30 COMMENTSz!
POST!!!!
chuchiewoochie 2 years ago
Aaaahhhhhh i'm comment 29 one more to go......i will be eating as much as possible while watching tv on easter
jbfan15777 2 years ago
FIRST YOUR GONNA KILL NICK
NOW YOU'RE GONNA KILL JOE!!
have you lost your mind woman???
got i'm so addicted!
TrixAre4Rabbits 2 years ago
im not even reading this story cause im 2 bust readin the others.
but ill jst comment so you people will get more chapters!!love the song!!!!!!!!
wantinjoeyajseyes 2 years ago
OH.EM.GEE.
LOVE IT!!! post soon PLEASE <33 :D
peaceintheworldxo 2 years ago
omg. next one please.
KarKarwhs 2 years ago
that was INTENSE!!!!!!!
i wonder whats gonna happen next between Joe and Renee!!!
plz post more soon!
oxTheJonasBrothersxo 2 years ago
DUDE! Dont just end the chapter liek that
DONT STAB JOE!
so intense
i need the next chapter soon PLEEAAASSSEEE
Yankeesgirl252 2 years ago
Ahhh!!!! Not Joe too now!!!
I loved it! Post again soon!!
theCatisindaHat 2 years ago
i am amazed! i love this already!
and i'm eggs full of candy in my yard for my niece and nephews to find. :)
what are YOU doing?? lol
coeyjbfan93 2 years ago
odnvsbvwevbkjdfbaidsfbasd. holy crap. fjeribgksdfnv....all i have to say is...please post more soon.
swimmer22293 2 years ago
OMG OMG OMG OMG!!!!!
this is amazing ( not the fact that you may kill one of them XD)
i hope you get 30 comments!
iforgotmyusernamex 2 years ago
WOW, damm that was epic , i wonder what will happen.. its intense i likeeeeee,
cant wait till next oneee :)
poppipop3popcorn 2 years ago
whoa!! now joe!!! just whoa!!!
loved it!! =]
KJonasfan595 2 years ago
Woahh! Haha cant wait to see what happens next!!
parkety777 2 years ago
wOW!! I jst couldn't resist it!! My frnd told me tht the 2nd chp was out n i had to log on through my cel!! Thnk god for wireless connections!! Honestly dis was Way way more interesting than economics!!post soon pls n ppl comment!!anyhoo am signin off back to studies :[
RQOCJD 2 years ago
MAN THIS IS WIKID SICK :)
and for easter I have to work.
Stupid red rooster :/
AMAZING
shellsta101 2 years ago
DUDEEEEEEE
DUDE
DUDE
DUEDEEEREE
what the hell?!
you cant just freaking leave it there
you could *ahem* send me the next chap *ahem*
:D
nickJlover43va 2 years ago
what the fudging fudge?(;First Nick..Now Joe..I swear.....well really I don't I have nothing else to sat..except more soon(:
khoskins12 2 years ago
intenseee,and i love it.
stsay617 2 years ago
(Crying and sobbs the words)
Nick and now Joe.What is wrong with you?
(Hugs Kevin and says)
What are we going to do?
JBAndTwilightLover55 2 years ago
Sorry.I had to do it again.Lol.
Love it!!!!!!
JBAndTwilightLover55 2 years ago
no, it's okay! I LOVEEE your comments. they are so funny! :):)
JonasFanFic16 2 years ago
Thax
JBAndTwilightLover55 2 years ago
OMG!!! this IS intense, like, REALLY intense, ITS AWEOSME!!! please post again soon!!
NicholeJonas123 2 years ago
OMG!!!
WOOOOOOOOO!
YEAH!
okay. i'm done.
haha, maybe
CHYEHA, so this is probablyone of the
BEST
SToRIES
EVER.
and it's only the second chapter.
ohmyjonas5000 2 years ago
OMG!!!! AWESOMNESS! POST SOON! AHHH!
Klutz409 2 years ago
eeeekks don't kill him! i don't if Renee doesn't like his music she just can't kill him. srry moment
JonasBroluver156 2 years ago
This is awesome! Post more please!
dallas1kid 2 years ago
Amazing Post more Pls!!!!
tw4music 2 years ago
whoa, dude. first comment and first view. now thats dedication! :]
JonasFanFic16 2 years ago
This has been flagged as spam show
Thanks, loved it i thought she liked him for a second but then she put the knife up to him..intense!
tw4music 2 years ago 2