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  • I'm DEAD serious ( Haha, "dead serious". I didn't even mean to do that! :p). I almost went into shock when I read the... stabbity-stab-stab part.  o.o .... I'd like to keep a safe distance from Reneé... Or Renée... However it's spelled.... *crawls under a rock* This is like Underworld!!!! :D AND I LOVE UNDERWORLD! TEEHEE! Seriously, you're an amazing writer. And I'm really stupid because I just noticed this story isn't written with POVs! ROFL XD I'm gonna keep reading now, woman. :P

  • YOU HAVE 30 COMMENTSz!

    POST!!!!

  • Aaaahhhhhh i'm comment 29 one more to go......i will be eating as much as possible while watching tv on easter

  • FIRST YOUR GONNA KILL NICK

    NOW YOU'RE GONNA KILL JOE!!

    have you lost your mind woman???

    got i'm so addicted!

  • im not even reading this story cause im 2 bust readin the others.

    but ill jst comment so you people will get more chapters!!love the song!!!!!!!!

  • OH.EM.GEE.

    LOVE IT!!! post soon PLEASE <33 :D

  • omg. next one please.

  • that was INTENSE!!!!!!!

    i wonder whats gonna happen next between Joe and Renee!!!

    plz post more soon!

  • DUDE! Dont just end the chapter liek that

    DONT STAB JOE!

    so intense

    i need the next chapter soon PLEEAAASSSEEE

  • Ahhh!!!! Not Joe too now!!!

    I loved it! Post again soon!!

  • i am amazed! i love this already!

    and i'm eggs full of candy in my yard for my niece and nephews to find. :)

    what are YOU doing?? lol

  • odnvsbvwevbkjdfbaidsfbasd. holy crap. fjeribgksdfnv....all i have to say is...please post more soon.

  • OMG OMG OMG OMG!!!!!

    this is amazing ( not the fact that you may kill one of them XD)

    i hope you get 30 comments!

  • WOW, damm that was epic , i wonder what will happen.. its intense i likeeeeee,

    cant wait till next oneee :)

  • whoa!! now joe!!! just whoa!!!

    loved it!! =]

  • Woahh! Haha cant wait to see what happens next!!

  • wOW!! I jst couldn't resist it!! My frnd told me tht the 2nd chp was out n i had to log on through my cel!! Thnk god for wireless connections!! Honestly dis was Way way more interesting than economics!!post soon pls n ppl comment!!anyhoo am signin off back to studies :[

  • MAN THIS IS WIKID SICK :)

    and for easter I have to work.

    Stupid red rooster :/

    AMAZING

  • DUDEEEEEEE

    DUDE

    DUDE

    DUEDEEEREE

    what the hell?!

    you cant just freaking leave it there

    you could *ahem* send me the next chap *ahem*

    :D

  • what the fudging fudge?(;First Nick..Now Joe..I swear.....well really I don't I have nothing else to sat..except more soon(:

  • intenseee,and i love it.

  • (Crying and sobbs the words)

    Nick and now Joe.What is wrong with you?

    (Hugs Kevin and says)

    What are we going to do?

  • Sorry.I had to do it again.Lol.

    Love it!!!!!!

  • no, it's okay! I LOVEEE your comments. they are so funny! :):)

  • Thax

  • OMG!!! this IS intense, like, REALLY intense, ITS AWEOSME!!! please post again soon!!

  • OMG!!!

    WOOOOOOOOO!

    YEAH!

    okay. i'm done.

    haha, maybe

    CHYEHA, so this is probablyone of the

    BEST

    SToRIES

    EVER.

    and it's only the second chapter.

  • OMG!!!! AWESOMNESS! POST SOON! AHHH!

  • eeeekks don't kill him! i don't if Renee doesn't like his music she just can't kill him. srry moment

  • This is awesome! Post more please!

  • Amazing Post more Pls!!!!

  • whoa, dude. first comment and first view. now thats dedication! :]

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