A Beautiful Situation - Chris Dorgan (Acou. 1st take. Demo)

[ThomasDiFabiano]

great man

[ChrisDorgan]

haha listening back today, i coulda done a better job of making the vocals sound happier haha, i think the songs needs to be sped up a fraction and i need to sound like i'm actually happy lol!

[antoholland]

Still watching mate. Good stuff ;)

[onemanshovv]

It's a bit long for 3 chords all the time but probably a studio version (or just an arrangement with other instruments, additional guitar melodies, etc.) would make it more "interesting". Don't get me wrong... your song is very good! Liked it from the beginning, the melody is extremely catchy and your husky voice makes it even better. :D

[ChrisDorgan]

@onemanshovv thanks man, yea the idea is to bring in the bass after the first verse and then some keyboards and a lead guitar melody/riff and have it all building to a crescendo at the end, maybe some female vocals one the "chori" haha. thanks for taking the time to have a listen, i really appreciate constructive critiscm :)