You've got a really good thing going, just tighten up your delivery bro. There were points where you couldnt incorporate your breathing so you cut words short, and that makes you sound unsure of your own lyrics. That takes away from the overall quality.
Other than that, I thought this was really good man.
Nice entry, thank you bro!
vudukatacomb 1 year ago
You've got a really good thing going, just tighten up your delivery bro. There were points where you couldnt incorporate your breathing so you cut words short, and that makes you sound unsure of your own lyrics. That takes away from the overall quality.
Other than that, I thought this was really good man.
CRUSH3Rdlux 1 year ago
nice lyrics, thaat helen keller line was dope! thumbs up=)
EmceePluto24 1 year ago
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stevenreagan 1 year ago
lyrics on pt and flow was very nice! peep my entry
-Dee Vo
deevomusic1 1 year ago