Tomik - Hypnotic (2011 Original) [FL Studio]

[AlexxInc92]

Really great!!:)

[leptoon]

@hellstonrampersad I guess an intelligent response is beyond your abilities... *rolls eyes*

[thegonemaster]

hey man cool!!!!!

[DJArkticBlue]

@leptoon Whats your deal man? The fact that people are trying to make music and get a name for themselves is hard enough. Supportive critisism is awesome, take your negativity somewhere else. Good song.

[leptoon]

@DJArkticBlue Ok, I understand. I was probably in a bad mood. Here you go...

First off, the introduction is plain and repetitive. I feel like there should be a larger drop at 1:14 and the synth is rather weak for being the only sound you can hear other than the equally weak kick drum. In dance music like this, you need to have a kick that really drives a stake into the stomach of the listener. Even if a song is really good, without a good kick you can't dance to it.

[leptoon]

The clap sounds hollow and artificial. The entire melody is very cheesy, tbh. It never really picks up to where it should be. The mixing is good though.

[anthrax3578]

my fav song :)

[nsxdriven011]

What happend to fl-undergrounf it doesnt work anymore

[RuskiPotsan]

@nsxdriven011 it's down for upgrade.

[117DJAckson]

soooo reptitive :|

[Haggersword]

do you have a downlkoad link for thisd beauty

[lucasbrpe]

needs more "power" i mean, more sound :) like a good bassline, i think its good at 3:17 :)

[TheRealTimious]

I actually like it, yet my only issue is the tempo :) It's going a bit too fast for it to actually fit together, however it's nice :P thumbs up

[leptoon]

I don't know why you haven't uninstalled FL Studio yet... Your music makes my ears bleed.

[RuskiPotsan]

@leptoon Go suck a dick!

[leptoon]

@RuskiPotsan Oh shit thanks for reminding me. My BF is gonna be mad if I forget another date... lol

[leptoon]

@RuskiPotsan Btw, great vocal clip though. I bet that's the only part of the song you didn't make.

[VITALIJ0607]

@RuskiPotsan

I think he should better go sniffing a goats balls

[KyleMarnoProducer]

@leptoon if you dont like it then fuck off, go melt someone elses heads

[leptoon]

@KyleMarnoProducer Here in America, we have a higher standard for music than in Pakistan where Ruski is obviously from, so know bullshit from real music. This, my friends, is bullshit. I could make this song (and do BETTER than Ruski) in under two hours. This is beginner shit. That bass line reminds me of when I was first starting to produce; when I didn't know how to make anything else.

[KyleMarnoProducer]

@leptoon yea for things like commercial pop music & main stream RnB, americans are only good at killing each other mate, europe has the lead when it comes to music

[leptoon]

@KyleMarnoProducer Ok, I'll give you that. But Ruski's stuff still sucks, doesn't matter where he's from.

[RuskiPotsan]

@leptoon I'm not from pakistan but from russia.

And I don't see you making shit. So fuck off!

[KyleMarnoProducer]

@leptoon hes called tomic not ruski lol, and you probly think he sucks because it doesnt sounds world class and as good as producers who are in the top 100 and have been in the industry for 20+ years

[leptoon]

@KyleMarnoProducer His name is Ruski Potsan. I'm not comparing his music to mainstream, I know that is unreasonable. I'm comparing his music to all the amateur tracks I've heard on IDM. Almost every single song posted in the Listening Booth is better than any of his.

[KyleMarnoProducer]

@leptoon his first name is tomik thoo, forget about it if i was slabbering before haha that was months ago, i use idm aswell whats your username mate ?

[fuckhaters171]

hey how do u record urself making a video? can u hel please.

[RuskiPotsan]

@fuckhaters171 Camtasia bro.

[fuckhaters171]

@RuskiPotsan thanks bro!

[brothaRUSSIA]

this is nice 

[aquality12]

cool

[Dtroy93]

This IS TO PRO!!

this sounds like a legit track!!

I would club to this beat anyday!!

[LostInParadiseee]

Great job.

Greetings, Sky. :)

[DjCynaX]

It sounds very nice.

It could use some more percussions

[IBBATHEMAFIA]

I Love It & I Actually Listen To It 10 Times . So Cool . Really Nice

[cbancman]

not bad 

[IBBATHEMAFIA]

nice & cool & real song . getting pro ahh . that's it . & nice FL Underground skin . keep up good work . & remember that FL-Underground is the best boy . great . thanks

[TheQuickBones]

AWESOME MAN :)

[masterpuma]

hej I have a question : from where did you get the voc ? :)

and yes I really love this dope TUNE !!! ":)

[RuskiPotsan]

@masterpuma I don't know what the pack is called, but you can find it on my forum with a bunch of other vocal packs.

[masterpuma]

@RuskiPotsan

witch forum ? :)

[RuskiPotsan]

@masterpuma

just go on google... type in in "FL Underground"

[HardKoreks]

Really nice work just 1 thing hit my ears when in 3:17 "hardcore" i just suggest to add some hard bass which destroying the speakers then slowly go to ur song should be cool

[ginfuu]

Does your FL studio skip and make clickin sounds when you play sometimes? If so how do you stop it??

[Dakreynold]

Constructive Criticism: After that first verse of the guy singing hypno...put in a bass line over the beat so it hits hard. Besides for that this track is awesome, I don't even listen to this stuff and I would buy and spin it. Quality track.

[RuskiPotsan]

@Dakreynold Wow thanks man, really appreciate your comment.

And you know, you learn something new from every track you make.

So whatever tips I get I just try using them on a future track.

[smokeology]

Great jam pimpin, keep up the good work.

[ifishbetterthanyou]

Nice shit nigga..haha really nice, you could be really famous dude !!!!!!!!!!!!! this shit should be play at dance club !!!!

[RuskiPotsan]

@ifishbetterthanyou Well I was making this trying to focus like on a "club sound"

[RuskiPotsan]

Make sure to listen to whole song. It gets good around 3 Mins

[ComputerElite]

Hey man this is really a great track. I'm a producer that works in FL Studio also and one constructive tip that would make this song even better would be a low deep catchy bass line. It really can make a song great. Great work!

-DJ Compel

[SmikeyJones]

Nice!

[crazyvaruna]

good work bro :) thumbs up !!! first view from me :D