No Right to Complain

[michaelispan]

How much money?

For a valid claim ..?

Legal rights make?

To Ascertain thus...

A right as Just ?.....

[Brazdolph]

loved the heart drawing too..

[AntaresInScorpius]

Nice, randy.  Playlisted.

[MrDaMan]

Thump, Thump, Thump... this march to a different drum... a drum that beats my heart in a cadence of exploratory wonder.

Thank you all for the encouragement. :-)

[tinySpectacle]

This is so cool. I love the poem, and the visuals just blew me away.

[dashpoet]

Strangely satisfying to watch the green heart fill, disturbing how simply destroyed. Good mix with your poetry, as ever. 5*

[Premedia]

It's always about the money! That guy holding his guts was a nice touch.

[UntamedBlueLight]

"Of the numbed living and the breathing dead"

I love that line.

[DavidRandallCurtis]

Bloody good. Five shooting stars and faved.

[jevoshawke13]

How masochistic! Powerful words and very interesting choice of images.