If We Kiss... A Jonas Brothers Story. Chapter 1

[hunnybunny8008]

... These must be white girls... ^_~

[domokunluver59669]

AH! This is like my tenth time to read this story! I LOVE IT

[xXxSJBlackDimondzxXx]

I luv the reaction from the girls!!! Hilarious XD

[hershbergerolive]

Im a Joe fan, so starting this serise im really looking forward to Joe being the main (or a main) love interest! Fingers crossed!

[fgrgsgcg1997]

wat is this song i love it and yes i have no life well i kinda doo maby idk

[JonasLuver369]

dude i would like stab sum1 if they were in the car next to us! id be friggin out man

[XxxGoneLeftFreexxX]

Dude,if I heard that The Jonas Brothers' car was right next to me,I would probably freak out and kill someone with my car! LOL!

[CelineJonas1]

I already like this story

[XxMusicChic4everxX]

Haha.....

The charecters are already funny!!!

Loved the whole giddy/screaching thing

I'd probably do the same NO MATTER how much I say i wouldn't..... =)

[TheJonasSister1001]

Ha-ha,awesome! I'd totally faint.

[TStuart2012]

the ending to this chapter really made me laugh!

[NjJa4evers]

i got really creeped out cause im wearing a black wifebeater ... but oh well

awesome [: <3

[Jobrosarehott21]

I think I've read this before, but I don't care. I'm going to read it again. :] This is a really good start by the way

[TheBeccabubble]

i THINK i've read this story before, i can't remember.. but i love it <3

[mljoleywriters]

what font is that? i saw it on twilight and new moon and i loved it.

[Shay081793]

Um... I'm not sure. When I downloaded it, I downloaded it as the "twilight" font haha

[shaunamarie07]

i read this story to like chapter 40 or 50 before when you first start posting it but my laptop broke and i couldn't read it and there was so much to catch up on when i got it fixed but finally months later I'm going to read it all and im going to try be caught up by Sunday. and i cant wait to read nick obsession over the blue clues teddy again I loved that bit! - see i did read months ago haha idk but i like telling people i have to catch up on there stories XD

[misshoneyem]

absaloultely BRILLTASTIC..!!

lol..!ILYNJ

[yaytotallyfunkykiwiG]

i love the series but wouldent JB be in a tour bus? and already at the venue?

[mklalx2009]

nice [[=

[EliANDLilmel]

ok i'm starting your serie, and i apologize because i know i wont comment every episode (don't hate me please!) in the urge to see what'll happen next.. it is now 14h18, and i probably be late to work cuaz i'll be to much into the story to get up and take a shower XD

[Shay081793]

That's cool :) I wouldn't expect you to every chapter. I don't do that when I'm catching up either ;)

[mszkevinjonas]

wow i just started reading this just cause i saw you had 55 comments :P thats amazzzzing for the first chapter ! ahh its so good

[JonasLuver44]

Yeah so, I went to their concert a week ago :) We got stuck in traffic and I was like "WHAT IF THEY'RE STUCK IN HERE TOO!?" My mom was like, they came from Georgia...so they are coming from the other side. I was sad. lol. Great :)

[RailiJaklitch6]

holy shit i would fricken faint to!!!!

[iLynnerd16]

first episode first time reading it...............and I love it already!

Hahah See you soon!

[hshorsegirl1]

4th time to reread this story! for all of you starting its awsome! i laugh all the time and cry some 2! but its soooooooo awesome!!!! emily you need to come back like NOW! i need your storys!! i need to know what happens!!!! please come back! you left me hanging there at the end!!! i sooooooo sad!! =(((((

[gaudetst]

I knooow! I need to know what happened tooo. Its driving me CRAZY that I don't know whats happening !!! At least she left it with such a cliffhanger though right? (:

[hshorsegirl1]

yeah! like great cliffy! bur still! i might die!! jeesh!! lol

[gaudetst]

i knoow! and it could take awhile for her to start part 2 its driving me crazzyyy!! :(

[InTheLandofLove44]

wow i'm commenting SO late of when u posted it but i heard about ur series and i decided to read it...u made me laugh in the like first 10 lines of reading!! lol

[jonasbaby20]

Soo, i am just starting this story today, and it already sounds amazing!!! (:

I will try to comment as much as possible and tell you what i think :))

Great So far.

Off to the next onee for meeeee.

[CarysLOVESjonas]

Haha Joe ' SEE YOU SOON! '

[ThisistheJonasnation]

that's really good so far

[TrinaLynn13]

Lol. The spraypaint thing s great., I would probably faint if they were driving next to me... then I would obviously crash! lol. How embarassing.

[AllyandFroggy]

HAHA ALREADY IM LOVING THIS STORIES GONNA READ IT ALL NIGHT!! :p

[iRawrSnuggle]

Oh. My. God. is right!

[Bookworm4Lyfe]

ohkayy. i'm starting to read this story today. right now. lol. just warning... if i don't comment on every story it's because i'll be intrigued in the story to say anything. but anyway... it sounds .. crazy. lol. they were in the car right next to them . teeheee. (:

[iRawrSnuggle]

haha! yay!

[jonaslover211916]

whos singing in the video

[Shay081793]

the Jonas Brothers :)

[jonaslover211916]

That who i thought it was they just sound so young!

[bookofathousandwords]

HAHA. love the whole spraypaint thing! :)

[unspeakable09]

Amazing :)

[McDreammmy]

Im going to see them on november 13!!! xD so exited!!

[Shay081793]

At Ahoy? Omg! I'll see you there :D

[McDreammmy]

jij bent Nederlands toch?? :P njah idd ahoy :D ik heb een rolstoel plaats aangezien ik niet lang kan staan door m'n heup afwijking, dus ik hoop echt super erg dat rolstoelen vooraan komen xD mrjah duurt nog een half jaar!! zoooo lang.. :( btw. heb je de naam summer van The O.C ?? xD

[Shay081793]

Yup Yup, Nederlands ;) But talking Dutch on YT freaks me out, so I try to avoid it ;)

I'm sorry about your hip? I don't really know what to say to be honest... And yeah, I hope so too, for you :) And yeah, half a year is WAAAAY too long! And no, Not from the OC. I don't watch that show ;) I just really really really love the name :)

[McDreammmy]

I kinda have to agree on the not talking dutch xP i don't like it either xD and bout the hip thing, you don't have to say anything x) im used to it now, been having it since i was like.. 5 yrs old.. And if it (hopefully) gets me front row on the JB concert, I'm completely fine with it! xD so until november.. I'll just read your story cuz it's awesome.. don't you ever stop! :P

[MissJassieJonas]

bilingual? intensee(: hahaha! i wanna learn dutch, seems hard.

[bratierocker71]

ahhh omg i remember thius first chapter now ur like on chp 140 alrteasdy in like 3 months!lol love ur story btw;)

[TheTwilightTwins232]

:O Im hypervenilating at the thought of going to their concert and finding them in the car NEXT to me. OMJ. Deep breaths Yajaira, deep breaths. Ok that was a close one. I almost fainted. You sure know how to catch peoples attention!!! :D Im so suscribing!!!

[xJONASNESSx]

OMG! Suscribing? I think so :D

[jessicannamaria]

yeahy! just found your strorie and itäs really Good. I love that close up og Kevin btw. he reminds me of Elvis in it :D

[fleabittin]

my name is brooke

[redonculouisnjlvr96]

well then was the first thing i said.

i love it.

this is going to be a great series.

did i say that i love it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!<3

[JBLuvStorys]

Great start :)

Seriously, id die if they were in the car next to me.

I can imagine Joe shouting that and then shouting ''Honk that horn baby, honk it!'' haha, im weird :// oh well. i got your storys from cutierose1234, & like she said 'you wont regret it!' im actually so glad that i have started to read it!.

[menudolover7]

aww i love this song =) its good to hear the old JB songs =)

[jonas4life1018]

two words for this story: I LOVE.

:)

[Jobrosarehott21]

Oh my gosh! This is really good! I'd like pee my pants if that happened to me. Haha.

[LittleAnnStar]

lol i would faint too !!

[RHCPlover2]

BAHAHA!

So, I was being lazy and kinda ignoring Cutierose1234 (hehe, I have a lot of fanfics to read as it is so I was worried about another) but I just decided, you know what? Just read the freaking thing! And I'm so glad I did. This is a great story and I've only read one chapter! Bahaha!

[nickJluvstry]

Haha, omigosh that's really good :)

I like it already!

[KellyM143]

who sings this song?

[NorylettJonas]

nick !....he's cute voice!:-)

[jadealexmorgan]

so cute!

[xoxogg77]

omg. i think i'd s#!t my pants!! lol. she ha a lexas!?! that lucky poop face. thank u cutierose1234!!

[cutierose1234]

no probs :D

[xoBxJoBroLovrxo]

loveee it!! moree soon plzz!! (:

[princessroxalot]

AWESOME!

;D

[doctorproctor123]

i loved this(:

post again soon!

and if u ever need help im here!

x

[jayleyproductions]

love ittt! =]

[xJonasEqualsLovex]

aww i LOVED IT!!!! haha :)))

[jblovers65]

omg love it

sounds like its gonna be a really good story =)

post soon

[cutierose1234]

absolutely loved it! I knew I would because your an amazing writer! I'd absolutely die if that happened to me!

I think in one of their videos they actually waved out of the window as they went along and some girls from another car started to scream lol

Anyways I'm so gonna get people to read this, look out for your name on one of my videos haha

[Shay081793]

Thank you sooooo much :D

I saw that video, and that's why I did it... lol...

[cutierose1234]

oh right lol :D