The Outcast - Ciarán Brennan (Original) Ronb15

[KimmoMusic]

Excellent song! Really like this one. What else have I missed?! -Kimmo

[TheLukeSoundsystem]

Wunderful song! Very beauty!

[86Dreamcatcher]

I know right? You should sue!

To bad that doesn't really work though with critics? If so we all be rich!

[86Dreamcatcher]

The one dislike this song is an outcast.

[ronb15]

@86Dreamcatcher Damn them ! haha

[homa624]

Good one, Love the lyrics.

[ronb15]

@homa624 Thank you!

[experimentalrock]

nice 1 mate!

[ronb15]

@experimentalrock Thanks dude !

[onewomanandsomesongs]

Hi, Ciaran, just poppin' in. Love this song! Just fantastic! :) Janet

[ronb15]

@onewomanandsomesongs Thanks so much Janet

[86Dreamcatcher]

I love how you respond back on your fan mail! :) Not many would do that! You are awesome Ciaran! Keep up great work!

[ronb15]

@86Dreamcatcher Ah well i gotta keep myself busy ! lol

[SPACEFACE70]

Excellent song this has loads of potential... Mind you most of your songs do great work.

[ceekyImp616]

that's a soooooo great song!!! ...just....love it!!!

[ronb15]

@ceekyImp616 Thanks a mil !

[PatrickGMoran]

Sweet tune Ciaran....really cool lyrics..I like the change when you sing When the levee breaks will the water wash over me?.....excellent chording and damn fine vocals as well. This is just good music..no other way to put it....

[ronb15]

@PatrickGMoran Thanks so much patrick im glad you enjoyed !

[TheBeestoncowboy]

I love originals and this is 3rd in a row in my in box.....nice one my friend....I like it..."building our heroes just to watch them fall" great line I'v used that theme myself.

Regards Les

[ronb15]

@TheBeestoncowboy Nice one les ! appreaciate it !

[bbsb300]

That's a great song Ciaran, Cheers Billy ;)

[ronb15]

@bbsb300 Thanks Billy!

[agrlfmtx]

Love this one Ciaran! I love the rythme on this!! The words too! Why do you have BANJO in the tags? I will have to see if my dad can play it! Another good one! T:)

[ronb15]

@agrlfmtx haha thanks Theresa, nah i just random tags sometimes!

[skeletone111]

Awesome song my friend!!! *****

[ronb15]

@skeletone111 thanks man

[garrethdavis]

love it man. I'm so sick of youtube it's ridiculous. I mean you have 2,495 but you get this amount of attention. Joke

[ronb15]

@garrethdavis Thanks man ah yeah sure used to that at this stage !! YT is a melt ! ha

[LittleMickyFingers]

I like this.

[ronb15]

@LittleMickyFingers Thanks

[7lizet]

great lyrics

and music

great song

[ronb15]

@7lizet Thanks Lizet Hope your well !

[86Dreamcatcher]

It's awesome! :)

[ronb15]

@86Dreamcatcher Cheers, appreciate that !

[Oswlek]

Nice groove. I think it might sound cool swapping the F for an Em on the measures after each verse stanza. So it goes something like

C-Em-Am-Em

Before landing back on C for the 2nd stanza or Dm on the bridge. Just a little twist to renew interest.

The change to the chorus is sweet and I'd really like to hear it produced to play into how different it feels from the rest of the tune.

[ronb15]

@Oswlek hey Justin great advice thanks, ill try it out and see how it sounds !! how are you my friend?

[sneakyuploader]

nice play

[ronb15]

@sneakyuploader Thanks!

[Sarah26630]

very very good job ((: