I recommended a mic to William Phelps that I think is a great mic for young filmmakers, I can give you the link if you wish. Also I think cop/Killer should have disguised himself better. The car driving off at the end looked fake. That is easy to fix! Either get permission to drive the car and have your parents or whoever drive in front of you and film you driving. You can also shoot it in your garage with the lights out and have people (wearing black) move lights back and forth.
Very good job sir(s). I loved the action! But your movie needs alot of work. It was really hard to see what was going on in the beginning because it was so dark. This is easy to fix. You can buy cheap lights at Hardware stores. You will want to get a light that is tall or on a tripod. then get something to soften the light like a coffee filter. Also there were some shots that were not really needed in the beginning too. The audio until the middle was really hard to hear.
Very nice!
nipanstudio 3 years ago
aww!! sam looks so young!! the guns almost as big as him XD aww!! lol x
nuttynickynoodle1234 3 years ago
So the guy died?
Piercebronsan12 3 years ago
is this filmed by sam jenkins from mosslands
isthisajokeornot1 4 years ago
Yes, do you know him?
Rivingtonfilm 4 years ago
yea im dean saunders longish hair some times speack 2 him do u no me
isthisajokeornot1 4 years ago
I recommended a mic to William Phelps that I think is a great mic for young filmmakers, I can give you the link if you wish. Also I think cop/Killer should have disguised himself better. The car driving off at the end looked fake. That is easy to fix! Either get permission to drive the car and have your parents or whoever drive in front of you and film you driving. You can also shoot it in your garage with the lights out and have people (wearing black) move lights back and forth.
Andrewz05 4 years ago
Very good job sir(s). I loved the action! But your movie needs alot of work. It was really hard to see what was going on in the beginning because it was so dark. This is easy to fix. You can buy cheap lights at Hardware stores. You will want to get a light that is tall or on a tripod. then get something to soften the light like a coffee filter. Also there were some shots that were not really needed in the beginning too. The audio until the middle was really hard to hear.
Andrewz05 4 years ago
Sam's quite a little actor there!!:P
anonymooseAKAdanny 4 years ago
jenkins is the best cinimertographer in the universe
rivingtonfilmSAM 4 years ago
Great comment thanks mate!
RFRADIO 4 years ago
Thanks alot shepperdbook, I'll let the cast and crew know!
Rivingtonfilm 4 years ago
it was so fun making this joe is pathetic at falling over seats
rivingtonfilmSAM 4 years ago
yea a great film one of the best films i have ever seen great camera work great acting great fx great editing
shepperdbook144 4 years ago
i think its my computer but i couldnt hear it. but great job.
trettfilms 5 years ago
Yeah, I couldn't hear some lines but its a great film.
PhelpDogg 5 years ago
Sorry about that, I couldnt make it much louder without it messing up. Im glad that you all like it!
Rivingtonfilm 4 years ago
Great movie man, excellent! And also thanks for using my music.
PhelpDogg 5 years ago
No problem mate!
Rivingtonfilm 5 years ago
Do you, by chance, compose music? I've been in need of a music composer for my films for quite some time now.
Send me a message if you're interested in working on any projects.
mikerstudios 4 years ago
Yeah, I compose music but I have a few projects on my hands right now.
PhelpDogg 4 years ago