Stupid in Love: A Patrick Story (Chapter 1)

[JacqueenaLaLaLa]

Yes, I'm commenting again. I just love this story. Daniel got his nerve...smh.

[neshababi96]

im late but good story my computer was broke down

[cRaZiGiRl2012]

If she don't...and girl you used my fav songs...that's my jamm..anyway.

What he talkin' bout cheating for..HE IS..Shoot!!! I can't stand him already..and yupp..I'm late..I'm sorry.

[DirtySouthGurl982]

thats a freakin shame first your knocking the lights out of her then you cheat

man patrick nd marella would be a sexcii couple

[lilvicm]

LOVED IT

5*

[jacqueena317]

this was good i liked it :)

[Ulukau808]

wtf?!!! ok so Daniel can cheat on Marella but she can't even help Patrick?? wtf? is up his small a** dick! sorry for my language im just irritated! loved it 5*

[DirtySouthGurl982]

lol

[eppafolk18]

that was great and marella know she need to drop daniel and get wit pat lol

[LorindaJackson]

oooo YAY!!!!

Me and Dustin are getting married ! :)

Marella needs to get with Patrick.

He's better for her

lovedddd it!

[suprgal078]

Marcella needs to dump Daniel for Patrick. She will only end up hurt by Daniel once Pat gets close to her

[shatinalaresha]

oh wow this was a great chapter...OMG i can't believe daniel, he abuses marella and now he's cheating on her smh...can't wait for the next one :o) 5*

[haitiancassie1307]

wow really good

keep it up!!!

5*

[prettypink2011]

thanx