Tenor needs to slide down more at the word "time." Dunno if you've got a copy of all the tags from the net? Google "mens classic tags" and download the PDF file ;)
you bet i do now :). this was the first one i did and i used big O's learning video to try it. its neat to hear where you start and where you are now ya know? thanks for the comment and constructive criticism. look for new tags here shortly :).
Thanks for the comment! You can bet I will be doing some more tags here shortly. I'm still kind of new to barbershop. Only been doing it since November last year, but I have some really great guys coaching/helping me at my meetings. Thanks for the advice. I really appreciate constructive criticism. I feel that really is the only way I will bet better; and a main reason I posted it to begin with. Thanks for listening.
The note the tenor slides down to on "Time" sounds a bit off. And make sure to switch the lead vowel sound to "ow" at the end, to ring it. Nice work though hope to see more from you.
In fact I think it's more then a bit sharp - it's one complete semi-step too high. That's too bad, because the tenor is what makes this tag so cool, IMHO.
Tenor needs to slide down more at the word "time." Dunno if you've got a copy of all the tags from the net? Google "mens classic tags" and download the PDF file ;)
DanishCartoonist 3 years ago
you bet i do now :). this was the first one i did and i used big O's learning video to try it. its neat to hear where you start and where you are now ya know? thanks for the comment and constructive criticism. look for new tags here shortly :).
super00fly 3 years ago
Yea - this needs tightened up.
palmerjoss11 3 years ago
Thanks for the comment! You can bet I will be doing some more tags here shortly. I'm still kind of new to barbershop. Only been doing it since November last year, but I have some really great guys coaching/helping me at my meetings. Thanks for the advice. I really appreciate constructive criticism. I feel that really is the only way I will bet better; and a main reason I posted it to begin with. Thanks for listening.
super00fly 4 years ago
The note the tenor slides down to on "Time" sounds a bit off. And make sure to switch the lead vowel sound to "ow" at the end, to ring it. Nice work though hope to see more from you.
LeWoVoc 4 years ago
Yeah i think its a bit sharp
BrotherBlood101 4 years ago
In fact I think it's more then a bit sharp - it's one complete semi-step too high. That's too bad, because the tenor is what makes this tag so cool, IMHO.
Well, apart from this issue it's nice.
Partyburner 2 years ago
Yeah I used to have a real problem with sharpening everything...
super00fly 2 years ago