I agree with the piano issue. It does sound cold and Glass-like. It restrains what would be an otherwise solid piece. The 2:3 polyrhythm @ 1:16 between the oboe and piano gave a nice textural color. I found 0:00 - 0:28 to be the more inspired bit. Everything else wasn't bad. I admire your effort and creativity. Push forward.
Hi! I saw your comment on the Fun Theory (the piano stairs vs. escalator video). I'd be willing to show you some of my work. I'm very into "modern-classical" music. All I can send you is sheet music right now, as I'm trying to get my digital keyboard hooked up to my computer (so I can record my pieces). What exactly are you doing?
Amazing, the music was moving and exciting to listen to, I really hope you get a lot of attention for this keep it up, it's the one kind of music that will never die or go out of style
Nice video and interesting music. Thanks for using my photo. In my writing much music piano
regards
ZalbaMartin 4 weeks ago
Is that really an oboe? It doesn't sound like one to me. Synth?
Pattyoboe 9 months ago
Thanks. Has a contemporaneous air. Some pauses are burrows. It is beautiful but you can still do better.
martz1945 1 year ago
Very limited harmonically. Same 3-4 ideas repeated over and over.
jaymusic143 1 year ago
is that your house? its epic if it is
MagicksMage 1 year ago
Best piece yet. awsome job. love the escalation in this. not cluttered with too many instruments.
ScarredFatality 1 year ago
great job
bebe4235 1 year ago
you should sell your sheet music!!!
Alan10050 1 year ago
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Alan10050 1 year ago
Whow amazing... I love it ^^ One word, you have a GIFT lol ^-^ (actually those were 5 words hehe :P) It's beautiful :3
Ellisz7 1 year ago
OMG you are gifted... pls make something with violin so i can play =P
Luigirodri87 1 year ago
@Luigirodri87
Thanks.
I will make!
bertalangergely1987 1 year ago
@bertalangergely1987 i will be waiting send me when you can ^^
Luigirodri87 1 year ago
GORGEOUS !! soothing music...
kaishieng123 1 year ago
Charming.
daganion 1 year ago
awesome. you are the best :)
L00pGarou 1 year ago
i like (:
zadak111 1 year ago
I advise you to study the great masters´s music
TrippeR90091 1 year ago
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TrippeR90091 1 year ago
I love the clarinet part at 1:16 and 1:42 and whereever it repeats or plays slightly altered forms of it, I love it, very nice composing
ChangeWontWait 1 year ago
I actually loved it!! Keep it up
Take0n 1 year ago
Ty 4 sharing, well done
behumble4God 1 year ago
At the risk of critiquing a very nice song, it sounds like it could use another voice in there. Might I suggest violin?
Volunteers4awesome 1 year ago
@Volunteers4awesome maybe a basoon
ScienceManComics 1 year ago
@ScienceManComics
yes, that is a bassoon.
bertalangergely1987 1 year ago
good job
FennecFoxxx 1 year ago
Very talanted, already in my Favourites
katjali86 1 year ago
well done,
r u still at skool.
try adding a bit more dissinence and a change in tempo to increase the complexity.
AM10989 1 year ago
I think it's perfect... the oboe makes it sound haunting .. I would listen to this often.
It's also catchy.. it stuck in my head the first time I heard it. I would bu this if I heard it in stores. Great job, keep composing.
Lustrum0005 1 year ago
Very nice.
I love it.
some rough parts but otherwise great
keep it up!!
BravoCharlieNiner 1 year ago
great music! although, i dont think oboe is fitting with piano, may try clarinet or something softer. hope it does no offense you. Keep it up :)
PS: its hard to compose something with oboe, oboe has a distinct sound...but i still like it :)
carmxd 1 year ago
I like this very much. Beautiful
swtcrlb 1 year ago
Wow thats really beautiful. I love the oboe and piano mix. Keep it up!!!!
softballplayercutie 1 year ago
Great piece! The oboe really isn't my favorite instrument or even close. But the piano work is great. Keep it up!
x420xColtonx420x 1 year ago
Heh! I tought too it is MIDI composition when it started :)
Nice work... continue please!
DrRodent 1 year ago
I agree with the piano issue. It does sound cold and Glass-like. It restrains what would be an otherwise solid piece. The 2:3 polyrhythm @ 1:16 between the oboe and piano gave a nice textural color. I found 0:00 - 0:28 to be the more inspired bit. Everything else wasn't bad. I admire your effort and creativity. Push forward.
xxAsteriskxx 1 year ago
Very nice composition. I am working on some pieces myself, but it seems I need to take to a whole new level. :)
MajorKermit 1 year ago
it is cool,
just this piano sounds like a MIDI. it would be nice to play it on some better istrument,
that's why it is a bit cold, like Philip Glass music.
lazarrancic 1 year ago
beautiful!
AnkeZohm 1 year ago
Hi! I saw your comment on the Fun Theory (the piano stairs vs. escalator video). I'd be willing to show you some of my work. I'm very into "modern-classical" music. All I can send you is sheet music right now, as I'm trying to get my digital keyboard hooked up to my computer (so I can record my pieces). What exactly are you doing?
God Bless!
-Kristee
kristeemc2russia 1 year ago
Beautiful!
Cloudeater90 1 year ago
Very good. Great piano playing too.
jonnykkkkkkkkk 1 year ago
Amazing, the music was moving and exciting to listen to, I really hope you get a lot of attention for this keep it up, it's the one kind of music that will never die or go out of style
GerardWay4President 1 year ago
Brillient and passionate playing!!! Outstanding! 10**********
Peace, Jerry
TheGuitarjerry1126 1 year ago
Gorgeous composition! Just Gorgeous!
JoZpiano 1 year ago
exquisite! 10*
rosesredvioletsblue 1 year ago
I love it!
ysweetluany 1 year ago
How nice it is!
ysweetluany 1 year ago