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You are one of those rare people who has actually told a story through a video. Magdalene Smith is right in that the viewer wants to see more. One reason is that the players are engaging and the audience wants to see what happens to them. The second is that the script doesn't fully resolve itself. This makes it more a pitch for a longer piece; a movie or a tv series idea rather than a stand-alone short film. Nice job. John Klawitter gnarkgnark1
GnarkGnark1 1 year ago
Wow Victoria! Great job! I would like to see the story continue...
magdalenesmirth 2 years ago