ok...nothing great but ok. the voice acting was just plain terrible. The combat was not realistically portrayed. since youtube did away with the rating system by stars(which was way better) I cant give you the 3/5 you deserve.
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dude you could have done alot better the elite voices wee terrible, there could have been more talking between the spartans the camera would go from one scene to another slowly rather than quick enough and you should give tham covenent weapons rather than human ones
this really sucks but, making a video is hard. Still there were a LOT of plot gaps like why did the elites use human weapons and equipment? To make matters worse you used a Brute Chopper (Elites hate Brutes!). The spartans all had retarded armor colors and selections for the plot but nice try :P
im not bashing it im criticizing it dumbass. im just sying they could have paid a lot more attention to detail, i recomend reading the halo books it helps a lot
chrisnisk i gave you a thumbs up and jgrubb a thumbs down, you were only criticizing and he just doesn't have the intellegence to comprehend that, plus you pointed out that makeing a video is hard.
2 the elite voices are gay just make them normal and if you can add an effect to warp them a little
3 be more subtle with title for instance the "sand trap desert" change that I know i havent made a real vid yet but thats ok because you do have a good comment from me the editing was very good
well only thing i noticed while watching the vid was that the elite should use elite wepons not human but after reading the comments i agree with the music and voice suggestions
wasn't the name of this movie already taken by edgeworks entertainmetn? when they first started making The Codex? They had this all scripted out but then microsoft came and said you couldn't then said that you could but couldn't make money
only 3 things wrong---1> I agree with Handlez, the voices totally outdid the sound effects. 2> The Elites, why are they using human weapons? give them carbines or somsthing. 3> Elites sound a bit retarded -_-" ........okay, thats it. oh, and you need some music.... damn I sound like a critique. whatever.. otherwise, this machinima has good potential.
lmao dude the acting sounds funny LMAO!!! =)its missing like music? LMAO!! "im hit im going down!" sound so gay!! LMAO! XDDDDD dude its missing something like music or something else it feels wrong the acting >_>
worst video EVER
haloreach32 1 year ago
god fucking damn, color correct your footage. everything is so washed out i cant even watch it
UEMstudios 1 year ago
Nice music at the beginning.
Bloodspreader100 1 year ago
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Nice music at the beginning
Bloodspreader100 1 year ago
Nice music at the beginning
Bloodspreader100 1 year ago
ok...nothing great but ok. the voice acting was just plain terrible. The combat was not realistically portrayed. since youtube did away with the rating system by stars(which was way better) I cant give you the 3/5 you deserve.
Nejihygo 1 year ago
Just a waste of my time. that video sucks balls and the elites sound like the cookie monster.
marinerman24 1 year ago
i go with the crowed |:)
OMGsayswhat 1 year ago
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ParlousKnave 1 year ago
Elites holding human weapons? I'm sorry this is just god awful, infact it's absolute Dog Vomit
Darthvezon681 1 year ago
fucking gay
AJLRecon 2 years ago
um OOOOOOOOKay, the only funny thing was "The Spartans are here!" Even though it was kinda gay.
JayWing10101 2 years ago
lol
MultiDark14 2 years ago
WTF THE SPARTANS ARE HERE wTF THATS SO FUKKIN GAY
Killerfreak117 2 years ago
G@Y
ElimteSniper 2 years ago
dude thats just fucking stupid I'm sorry but totally fucking lame
state135 2 years ago
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usernamewhy01 2 years ago
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nooblaster 2 years ago
not brilliant...
TPSGeeek 2 years ago
Missle pod these arseholes WTF
WOW is this drama/ funny or stuip !
Bluestudiosuk 2 years ago
is it supposed to be funny or what? anyway you should try again
mikeinike8747 2 years ago
I dont know what you guys are talking about!
This was THEEE funniest thing ive EVER watched!
beastyhadafeasty 3 years ago
OMG THIS IS EPIC
FAIL
Bluestudiosuk 3 years ago
why did the elits have human guns and how did they fly from a countryside to a desert!
pivotmakerDZ 3 years ago
because this films bad?
Bluestudiosuk 2 years ago
Follow by Breaking Benjamin is a good song though
Vanguard242 2 years ago
that sucked
wipeout409 3 years ago
FAIL!!!! nough said
elsimulacra 3 years ago
Rip off of the Codex series
Darthvezon681 3 years ago
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What was the intro song?
CorsairAscariStudios 3 years ago
dude you could have done alot better the elite voices wee terrible, there could have been more talking between the spartans the camera would go from one scene to another slowly rather than quick enough and you should give tham covenent weapons rather than human ones
hbk9911 3 years ago 5
i think you seriously could have done a better job.
SteelSabbath 3 years ago
this seriously sucked ass.
armatik 3 years ago
boring
smartkidabc2 3 years ago
you dumbass elites use covenant weaps. not gay ass AR's
hochimon88 3 years ago
In the words of Digital Ph33r himself...
FUCKING RETARTED
WolfTwister 3 years ago
that was the shittest machinima ever. Even descendant is better. The codex and red vs blue or dues ex machinima will kick it's ass
spartan306 3 years ago
lol, 'the spartans are here, what shall we do' 'rawr!'
Alphazombie 3 years ago 2
Those are sspartan 3s and were those elites using assultrifles in the show
primal114 3 years ago
it was alright but you really need better voices, the elites were not convincing at all. 3/5
carlosdavalillo 3 years ago 4
3/5
cp11cr7 3 years ago
okay
cp11cr7 3 years ago
gay
irish2owner 3 years ago 2
fuck this shit...all thats happening is just two guys in hornets flying around. and 2 elites screaming.
viewy84 3 years ago 2
Biggest heap of shit ever. Crap voices, stupid storyline, and awful camera skills. This is surely a joke?
Vasey9 3 years ago 2
wrset in pieise alien scum is that the best u can come up with worst vocies ever!
joejoemoejoe00 3 years ago
Good music, but do better voices.
Espo1021 3 years ago
the song is breaking benjamin follow is you want it i dont know if u know it tho :)
nortsoldier 3 years ago
Why the elites are always the bad guys in machinima series?
xLs58x 3 years ago
1000% stuped
pvtspartan 3 years ago
that was interesting.
Athos523 4 years ago
why don't they actually use their own type of weapons?
Led371 4 years ago
the covenant sound like they are throwing up lol
Imananimegod 4 years ago 2
is this the sequel of the codex?
akhglagdasf 4 years ago
I think this should be labeled under comedy because of the Elite's voices.
Led371 4 years ago
not that funny =/
CurrentGame 4 years ago
yaa they do sound kinda funny cuz when i first saw it i thought it was on purpose
halokingspartan55 4 years ago
this really sucks but, making a video is hard. Still there were a LOT of plot gaps like why did the elites use human weapons and equipment? To make matters worse you used a Brute Chopper (Elites hate Brutes!). The spartans all had retarded armor colors and selections for the plot but nice try :P
chrisnisk 4 years ago
That was probably the worst attempt to bash a video ive ever read, try pointing out things that matter and that people would give a damn about.
JGrubb94 4 years ago
im not bashing it im criticizing it dumbass. im just sying they could have paid a lot more attention to detail, i recomend reading the halo books it helps a lot
chrisnisk 4 years ago
yup hes right
akhglagdasf 4 years ago
yup hes right
akhglagdasf 4 years ago
chrisnisk i gave you a thumbs up and jgrubb a thumbs down, you were only criticizing and he just doesn't have the intellegence to comprehend that, plus you pointed out that makeing a video is hard.
jwjrangers 4 years ago
lol so bad, nice try though
Zepplinne 4 years ago
OK 4/5
1 you to fix the lag
2 the elite voices are gay just make them normal and if you can add an effect to warp them a little
3 be more subtle with title for instance the "sand trap desert" change that I know i havent made a real vid yet but thats ok because you do have a good comment from me the editing was very good
TheHaloholic 4 years ago
it was ok i mean makeing a vid is hard work il have to give it a 2/5 but i like your atempt 4/5
clokedbigman 4 years ago
u need the improve the following:
script
vioces
acting
everything really >_>
TheKariboDude 4 years ago
what is the name of that song?
3MPTYM3LODI3S 4 years ago
follow
Vxy55 4 years ago
this sucks
ShAdOw199117 4 years ago
that was okay :) keep working on it though ^^ maybe less dorky elite voices :O
DarthCousin56 4 years ago 2
Delayed reactions FTL...
If he was hit, he should've acted like it the exact second he was hit: not a whole 4 seconds late.
ScorchedSpartan 4 years ago
well only thing i noticed while watching the vid was that the elite should use elite wepons not human but after reading the comments i agree with the music and voice suggestions
superchris247 4 years ago
The spartans are here..WARRRRRRHHRRRRG
Argosthor013 4 years ago 3
acting sucked 3/5
darkelitecommander 4 years ago
wasn't the name of this movie already taken by edgeworks entertainmetn? when they first started making The Codex? They had this all scripted out but then microsoft came and said you couldn't then said that you could but couldn't make money
ShoganConvoy 4 years ago
yo the hell is SC DAN!
SafeLight4 4 years ago
more like flamers in the sky.
Fittykent 4 years ago
only 3 things wrong---1> I agree with Handlez, the voices totally outdid the sound effects. 2> The Elites, why are they using human weapons? give them carbines or somsthing. 3> Elites sound a bit retarded -_-" ........okay, thats it. oh, and you need some music.... damn I sound like a critique. whatever.. otherwise, this machinima has good potential.
OWNS45 4 years ago
I think its hilarious when at 3:05-3:06 they say "Missle pod these assholes auhhhhh" omg classic!
gunut07 4 years ago
It was good except the voices completely outdid the sound effects like crashes and gun fire.
Handlez362 4 years ago 3
wut lmao
that was funny/intrestingggg
xfarewellovex3 4 years ago
lmao dude the acting sounds funny LMAO!!! =)its missing like music? LMAO!! "im hit im going down!" sound so gay!! LMAO! XDDDDD dude its missing something like music or something else it feels wrong the acting >_>
XZekeX 4 years ago