xX...Sad Story....Xx

[girlononline]

Its was so sweet

[xXGuitarlover11Xx]

thanks!

[memexican4life]

ya i also think it was a lil dramatic but the story line is great

[xXGuitarlover11Xx]

ThEmOFroG just to let you know I made a new sad story you should check that one out somtime :)

[ThEmOFrogG]

this was pretty good, but you should redo it, i'm sorry it's kind of clumsy and the dialogue is a bit forced and it's over dramatic, but your story line is really original! it's a great story otherwise =) just needs cleaned up a little!