Constructive Critisiscm: I must say that it is quite good for animation of that style, but I would think it could be nicer if their eyes moved a little more. Such as when the cheeseburger got stolen, maybe he could have looked down at his hands in confusion.
For a beginning cartoon I don't think all too much character movement is necessary, like other people seem to be suggesting. Later on certainly, but for now there are two things I would focus on: Eye movement (make characters look at who they're talking to, even if their body remains in the same position) and adding a couple frames into certain movements, like the eating. It's just 2 different mouths flicking back and forth. Add an extra 'middle' mouth to make a more natural movement.
I think you did good for a beginner...but like they said as you go along make sure your characters have movement....different scenery...but you will learn this as you go...stay confident in your self and believe in your self and you will accomplish everything....you will have negative and positive, but learn from the negative and feel good about yourself with the positive...you can do it...take care
Characters don't move, just a lip sync does not make a good animation. Give more enphasis to movement, make your characters move to the camera and from the camera, create some interest with different angles and shots. There are a lot of good animation on youtube you can learn with .Study Chuck Jones, Dick Williams, Ken Harris and a lot of great animators.Good Luck!
Well... I will not comment on the humor because to each their own. As for the video itself... just as one of the other viewers commented, it has no life to it. Animate the background, have the characters move more than just their mouths because even when someone is standing still... other than a muffin, they move their head, arms, sway, blink, etc.. change the camera angle up a bit too. Anyways, good luck.
@hvillin As in, this isn't animation. It doesn't demonstrate any of the principles of animation and has zero life to it. It's humorous, and it gets its point across. But when simply said, this isn't animation, it's just stuff moving on a screen and barely moving at that. The most movement you have are motion tweens and some amateur lip syncing. Animation is about the movement and the believability, and this has neither.
@MollytheLookout So you're saying I need to add more gestures to the characters? Sorry this is my first attempt at this and I appreciate all the feedback.
@hvillin Look at cartoons and animation out there right now. Does this move like they do? Would you believe that these characters are real based on their construction and the way they move? Or do they just look like cardboard cut outs with flappy mouths? To be honest, Your drawing skills are seriously lacking and you've got a really long way to go if you want to produce quality animation. It takes years of study and practice to become really, really good in the animation field.
What! If it isn't animation what is it? It's animation. It moves -- not much, but it moves. And as first attempt? Great! Don't listen to the negative. Just improve your art. Keep it up!
@MollytheLookout If you want a quick run down of how you can start to get better, act out the actions you want your character to do. Actually ACT IT OUT YOURSELF and then try to copy how you moved and make your characters move that way. It takes a LOT of drawing and a lot of practice, but it's a start. ACT IT OUT.
This isn't animation, so I can't give you my opinion on it, and the humour isn't really my style. But I can see why some people would find it funny. How old are you?
@hvillin As in, this isn't animation. It doesn't demonstrate any of the principles of animation and has zero life to it. It's humorous, and it gets its point across. But when simply said, this isn't animation, it's just stuff moving on a screen and barely moving at that. The most movement you have are motion tweens and some amateur lip syncing. Animation is about the movement and the believability, and this has neither.
@hvillin it's not animated. that's why it's not animation. it's talking stills basically. animation is movement - bringing characters to life. if you don't feel like selling this as animation, at least work on the appeal of the characters. also, i suggest you look up the 12 principles of animation, and work that into your show.
search for flash cartoons on youtube - the popular ones - and observe what they have done. keep at it man, rome wasn't build in a day. :) you can do it!
haha!!! awesome!!! I wasn't expecting this! amazing! I like the show! gotta love the cheeseburger! :D I like the fat little guy with the burger! he's my fave! then it's the muffin guy! amazing job on this.
I gonna get a cheeseburger
Niehsoul 1 month ago in playlist Rolly Show
After seeing this, I don't even understand it. The whole scene where the cheeseburger appeared and disappeared made this episode pointless.
jhirzel88 2 months ago in playlist Rolly Show
Hilarious!
PacoSmokesComedyShow 2 months ago
LOL
Domingo0022IWAY 4 months ago
rolly kind of sounds like Cartman when he's pissed off
slurpee30 5 months ago in playlist Rolly Show
hahahahaha HE LAR E OUS!!!!!!!!
prettiegurl67 5 months ago
Thats fuckin funny
sweetstuff1112 6 months ago
dude i watched all the vids and.........THEY WERE AWSOME!!!!!!!!
MrHankdogg 6 months ago
hi
MEGATRON1233212 6 months ago
umm.. i'm really speackless but it weird in a good way and little bit funny ^=^
queenu12 6 months ago
Constructive Critisiscm: I must say that it is quite good for animation of that style, but I would think it could be nicer if their eyes moved a little more. Such as when the cheeseburger got stolen, maybe he could have looked down at his hands in confusion.
flamesafety 6 months ago
Hey Man
Themw2Assasin2 6 months ago
Hey mikey! It's your fav drunk driver.
tarlynelo 6 months ago
LMAO, is Lekunga based off from THAT YU-GI-OH card? hahaha
SpiceTacoProductions 6 months ago
ROFL @ the chewing. loll wth dude? lmao
superdevins 10 months ago
Hey, your cartoon it's funny, keep it up. Good job.
munarong 10 months ago
5 people lost their cheezburgah and never found it again
revz999 10 months ago
thats funny ..nice job
mukalula1 10 months ago
I think it was funny check out my video at kc graphics
MsLadychristine1 10 months ago
animated well :)
SamanthaRH1 10 months ago
??? hhhmm idk about this
30ghostly 10 months ago
Love it!!!!!!!!!
MonsterHighSuperFan 10 months ago
This has been flagged as spam show
Ahahahahahahahah! Very nice! Subscribe to my channel please..!!
COSENT1001 10 months ago
okay for educating kids. Keep it up and never use lewd lyrics. I like it
converge180 10 months ago
What animation program did you use to make this?
PouliotteFilms 10 months ago
@PouliotteFilms Sony Vegas Pro.
hvillin 10 months ago
@hvillin Awesome. Thanks
PouliotteFilms 10 months ago
LOL
TheKonohaNinjaz 10 months ago
lol this is funny.
Leatherfaceman905 10 months ago
HAhahaha! nice and yes it could go somewere u got me intrested!
SmOkeOVER9000 10 months ago
I like it dude keep up the good work :)
stewie104thOB 10 months ago
Good Job!! Congratulations! Aunque no entiendo mucho ingles, te felicto por tu trabajo!:)
ANDYTECUADOR 10 months ago
yea i do think it is going to be success
lollypopsexy9 10 months ago
Honestly, you got your characters well-done,
you need more movement like a walking animaiton, moving arm animation instead of just moving the picture,
good voices for funny characters,
It's a 7/10 in my opinion.
SirBlake608 10 months ago
i got me a burger, im about to eat this bad boy. LOL
9046962328 10 months ago
swiper no swiping 0:57
TECHBOY300 11 months ago
haha thats good you could have your self a pretty good series of these vids if you put you mind to it
d4rkdr4gonrid3r 11 months ago
For a beginning cartoon I don't think all too much character movement is necessary, like other people seem to be suggesting. Later on certainly, but for now there are two things I would focus on: Eye movement (make characters look at who they're talking to, even if their body remains in the same position) and adding a couple frames into certain movements, like the eating. It's just 2 different mouths flicking back and forth. Add an extra 'middle' mouth to make a more natural movement.
SliceOfDog 11 months ago
I think you did good for a beginner...but like they said as you go along make sure your characters have movement....different scenery...but you will learn this as you go...stay confident in your self and believe in your self and you will accomplish everything....you will have negative and positive, but learn from the negative and feel good about yourself with the positive...you can do it...take care
MsWolf38 11 months ago
not bad, but the animation doesn't go anywhere. Look forward to seeing next episode.
AnimationForever 11 months ago
Characters don't move, just a lip sync does not make a good animation. Give more enphasis to movement, make your characters move to the camera and from the camera, create some interest with different angles and shots. There are a lot of good animation on youtube you can learn with .Study Chuck Jones, Dick Williams, Ken Harris and a lot of great animators.Good Luck!
danmessias 11 months ago
How?
axlswede 11 months ago
Well... I will not comment on the humor because to each their own. As for the video itself... just as one of the other viewers commented, it has no life to it. Animate the background, have the characters move more than just their mouths because even when someone is standing still... other than a muffin, they move their head, arms, sway, blink, etc.. change the camera angle up a bit too. Anyways, good luck.
winterFTW 11 months ago
lol, i know it's a non-active almost animation but it's really funny! SUB
TheZAPChannel 11 months ago
I would like to meet this all wise and all knowing muffin to retrieve all my lost Burgers! Cool stuff,...
88Ramone 11 months ago
I want the Cheesburger! :D
LOLIP1994 11 months ago
lol
viktor7666 11 months ago
i watched this with a burger......what a coincidence
airtrekz 11 months ago
@airtrekz lol That's funny.
hvillin 11 months ago
Pretty Good Bro, I Enjoyed it :)
xMorgs7777777 11 months ago
i feel like you blended southpark with aquateen hungerforce...
InfinitePineapple 11 months ago
Ha, this reminds me.. I might quit that finger thingy
thedtnewt 11 months ago
lol this was funny xD.
DavinDaGeek 11 months ago
I agree with MollytheLookout ... its really funny though XD (Aqw2can2)
TVLore 11 months ago
Very lively! Good animation.
skeek00 11 months ago
video make me hungry =D Thumb Up
bertjanbjn 11 months ago
@hvillin As in, this isn't animation. It doesn't demonstrate any of the principles of animation and has zero life to it. It's humorous, and it gets its point across. But when simply said, this isn't animation, it's just stuff moving on a screen and barely moving at that. The most movement you have are motion tweens and some amateur lip syncing. Animation is about the movement and the believability, and this has neither.
MollytheLookout 11 months ago
@MollytheLookout So you're saying I need to add more gestures to the characters? Sorry this is my first attempt at this and I appreciate all the feedback.
hvillin 11 months ago
@hvillin Look at cartoons and animation out there right now. Does this move like they do? Would you believe that these characters are real based on their construction and the way they move? Or do they just look like cardboard cut outs with flappy mouths? To be honest, Your drawing skills are seriously lacking and you've got a really long way to go if you want to produce quality animation. It takes years of study and practice to become really, really good in the animation field.
MollytheLookout 11 months ago
@hvillin
What! If it isn't animation what is it? It's animation. It moves -- not much, but it moves. And as first attempt? Great! Don't listen to the negative. Just improve your art. Keep it up!
gimmeabonedog 10 months ago
@MollytheLookout If you want a quick run down of how you can start to get better, act out the actions you want your character to do. Actually ACT IT OUT YOURSELF and then try to copy how you moved and make your characters move that way. It takes a LOT of drawing and a lot of practice, but it's a start. ACT IT OUT.
MollytheLookout 11 months ago
Hey man, normally i hate flash animation, but this was pretty funny. Thanks for putting me up on this, and good job. Keep going.
shonknight3000 11 months ago
Thumbs up if this sucks. jk. it was actually pretty funny
funkyfartmonster6 11 months ago
This isn't animation, so I can't give you my opinion on it, and the humour isn't really my style. But I can see why some people would find it funny. How old are you?
MollytheLookout 11 months ago
@MollytheLookout What do you mean this isn't animation?
hvillin 11 months ago
This has been flagged as spam show
@hvillin As in, this isn't animation. It doesn't demonstrate any of the principles of animation and has zero life to it. It's humorous, and it gets its point across. But when simply said, this isn't animation, it's just stuff moving on a screen and barely moving at that. The most movement you have are motion tweens and some amateur lip syncing. Animation is about the movement and the believability, and this has neither.
MollytheLookout 11 months ago
@hvillin it's not animated. that's why it's not animation. it's talking stills basically. animation is movement - bringing characters to life. if you don't feel like selling this as animation, at least work on the appeal of the characters. also, i suggest you look up the 12 principles of animation, and work that into your show.
search for flash cartoons on youtube - the popular ones - and observe what they have done. keep at it man, rome wasn't build in a day. :) you can do it!
LizaKotze 11 months ago
that rolly is so dumb for real
AIDSCrocodile 11 months ago
Sweet cant wait to see more 8=D
jojockful007 11 months ago
Nice video I will subscribe to you if you do the same.
Just send me a messege in youtube telling me that u subscribed.
if you want an extra subscriber just tell me.
562ADZ 11 months ago
Nice editing man!! :D
2cool4u1000000000000 11 months ago
Hmmm... so that's where th muffin I didn't finish this morning went.
Nice cartoon man, just one question:why does the floating eyeball have an afro?
TheLawliet10 11 months ago
its all about da cheeseburger isn't it?
Spsuperstar 11 months ago
Itz funny i like it...it needs to be on T.V. fo sure...great job
Duecet3up2down 11 months ago
A floating eyeball with an afro...Now I have seen everything. lol
KTChamberlain 11 months ago
Nice
freekymegy 11 months ago
Dude this is going to be big with the Stoners....! ( no im not one )
METALMAN4Wii 11 months ago
nahh i mean its only painted on the roof in the art room at the high school lol
123fingerboards 11 months ago
MUFFIN POWERS!
PickPikmin 11 months ago
nice visuals hvillin, it looks slick, good job! : )
thesunreport 11 months ago
haha!!! awesome!!! I wasn't expecting this! amazing! I like the show! gotta love the cheeseburger! :D I like the fat little guy with the burger! he's my fave! then it's the muffin guy! amazing job on this.
MrTowcho 11 months ago
lolool
Lorddark211 11 months ago
OMGGG!!! the rolly comic is now alive!!!!! :o
123fingerboards 11 months ago
@123fingerboards I didn't even know you knew about Rolly. XD
hvillin 11 months ago
cool animations what program do u use for it
JustWatchItNowYT 11 months ago
@JustWatchItNowYT Photoshop to make all the pictures and Vegas Pro to animate it.
hvillin 11 months ago
Cool
AnimationsTv3 11 months ago
@AnimationsTv3 Thanks.
hvillin 11 months ago