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  • I gonna get a cheeseburger

  • After seeing this, I don't even understand it. The whole scene where the cheeseburger appeared and disappeared made this episode pointless.

  • Hilarious!

  • LOL

  • rolly kind of sounds like Cartman when he's pissed off

  • hahahahaha HE LAR E OUS!!!!!!!!

  • Thats fuckin funny

  • dude i watched all the vids and.........THEY WERE AWSOME!!!!!!!!

  • hi

    

  • umm.. i'm really speackless but it weird in a good way and little bit funny ^=^

  • Constructive Critisiscm: I must say that it is quite good for animation of that style, but I would think it could be nicer if their eyes moved a little more. Such as when the cheeseburger got stolen, maybe he could have looked down at his hands in confusion.

  • Hey Man

  • Hey mikey! It's your fav drunk driver.

  • LMAO, is Lekunga based off from THAT YU-GI-OH card? hahaha

  • ROFL @ the chewing. loll wth dude? lmao

  • Hey, your cartoon it's funny, keep it up. Good job.

  • 5 people lost their cheezburgah and never found it again

  • thats funny ..nice job

  • I think it was funny check out my video at kc graphics

  • animated well :)

  • ??? hhhmm idk about this

  • Love it!!!!!!!!!

  • okay for educating kids. Keep it up and never use lewd lyrics. I like it

  • What animation program did you use to make this?

  • @PouliotteFilms Sony Vegas Pro.

  • @hvillin Awesome. Thanks

  • LOL

  • lol this is funny.

  • HAhahaha! nice and yes it could go somewere u got me intrested!

  • I like it dude keep up the good work :)

  • Good Job!! Congratulations! Aunque no entiendo mucho ingles, te felicto por tu trabajo!:)

  • yea i do think it is going to be success

  • Honestly, you got your characters well-done,

    you need more movement like a walking animaiton, moving arm animation instead of just moving the picture,

    good voices for funny characters,

    It's a 7/10 in my opinion.

  • i got me a burger, im about to eat this bad boy. LOL

  • swiper no swiping 0:57

  • haha thats good you could have your self a pretty good series of these vids if you put you mind to it

  • For a beginning cartoon I don't think all too much character movement is necessary, like other people seem to be suggesting. Later on certainly, but for now there are two things I would focus on: Eye movement (make characters look at who they're talking to, even if their body remains in the same position) and adding a couple frames into certain movements, like the eating. It's just 2 different mouths flicking back and forth. Add an extra 'middle' mouth to make a more natural movement.

  • I think you did good for a beginner...but like they said as you go along make sure your characters have movement....different scenery...but you will learn this as you go...stay confident in your self and believe in your self and you will accomplish everything....you will have negative and positive, but learn from the negative and feel good about yourself with the positive...you can do it...take care

  • not bad, but the animation doesn't go anywhere. Look forward to seeing next episode.

  • Characters don't move, just a lip sync does not make a good animation. Give more enphasis to movement, make your characters move to the camera and from the camera, create some interest with different angles and shots. There are a lot of good animation on youtube you can learn with .Study Chuck Jones, Dick Williams, Ken Harris and a lot of great animators.Good Luck!

  • How?

  • Well... I will not comment on the humor because to each their own. As for the video itself... just as one of the other viewers commented, it has no life to it. Animate the background, have the characters move more than just their mouths because even when someone is standing still... other than a muffin, they move their head, arms, sway, blink, etc.. change the camera angle up a bit too. Anyways, good luck.

  • lol, i know it's a non-active almost animation but it's really funny! SUB

  • I would like to meet this all wise and all knowing muffin to retrieve all my lost Burgers! Cool stuff,...

  • I want the Cheesburger! :D

  • lol

    

  • i watched this with a burger......what a coincidence

  • @airtrekz lol That's funny.

  • Pretty Good Bro, I Enjoyed it :)

  • i feel like you blended southpark with aquateen hungerforce...

  • Ha, this reminds me.. I might quit that finger thingy

  • lol this was funny xD.

  • I agree with MollytheLookout ... its really funny though XD (Aqw2can2)

  • Very lively! Good animation.

  • video make me hungry =D Thumb Up

    

  • @hvillin As in, this isn't animation. It doesn't demonstrate any of the principles of animation and has zero life to it. It's humorous, and it gets its point across. But when simply said, this isn't animation, it's just stuff moving on a screen and barely moving at that. The most movement you have are motion tweens and some amateur lip syncing. Animation is about the movement and the believability, and this has neither.

  • @MollytheLookout So you're saying I need to add more gestures to the characters? Sorry this is my first attempt at this and I appreciate all the feedback.

  • @hvillin Look at cartoons and animation out there right now. Does this move like they do? Would you believe that these characters are real based on their construction and the way they move? Or do they just look like cardboard cut outs with flappy mouths? To be honest, Your drawing skills are seriously lacking and you've got a really long way to go if you want to produce quality animation. It takes years of study and practice to become really, really good in the animation field.

  • @hvillin

    What! If it isn't animation what is it? It's animation. It moves -- not much, but it moves. And as first attempt? Great! Don't listen to the negative. Just improve your art. Keep it up!

  • @MollytheLookout If you want a quick run down of how you can start to get better, act out the actions you want your character to do. Actually ACT IT OUT YOURSELF and then try to copy how you moved and make your characters move that way. It takes a LOT of drawing and a lot of practice, but it's a start. ACT IT OUT.

  • Hey man, normally i hate flash animation, but this was pretty funny. Thanks for putting me up on this, and good job. Keep going.

  • Thumbs up if this sucks. jk. it was actually pretty funny

  • This isn't animation, so I can't give you my opinion on it, and the humour isn't really my style. But I can see why some people would find it funny. How old are you?

  • @MollytheLookout What do you mean this isn't animation?

  • @hvillin it's not animated. that's why it's not animation. it's talking stills basically. animation is movement - bringing characters to life. if you don't feel like selling this as animation, at least work on the appeal of the characters. also, i suggest you look up the 12 principles of animation, and work that into your show.

    search for flash cartoons on youtube - the popular ones - and observe what they have done. keep at it man, rome wasn't build in a day. :) you can do it!

  • that rolly is so dumb for real

  • Sweet cant wait to see more 8=D

  • Nice video I will subscribe to you if you do the same.

    Just send me a messege in youtube telling me that u subscribed.

    if you want an extra subscriber just tell me.

  • Nice editing man!! :D

  • Hmmm... so that's where th muffin I didn't finish this morning went.

    Nice cartoon man, just one question:why does the floating eyeball have an afro?

  • its all about da cheeseburger isn't it?

  • Itz funny i like it...it needs to be on T.V. fo sure...great job

  • A floating eyeball with an afro...Now I have seen everything. lol

  • Nice

  • Dude this is going to be big with the Stoners....! ( no im not one )

  • nahh i mean its only painted on the roof in the art room at the high school lol

    

  • MUFFIN POWERS!

    

  • nice visuals hvillin, it looks slick, good job! : )

  • haha!!! awesome!!! I wasn't expecting this! amazing! I like the show! gotta love the cheeseburger! :D I like the fat little guy with the burger! he's my fave! then it's the muffin guy! amazing job on this.

  • lolool

  • OMGGG!!! the rolly comic is now alive!!!!! :o

  • @123fingerboards I didn't even know you knew about Rolly. XD

  • cool animations what program do u use for it

  • @JustWatchItNowYT Photoshop to make all the pictures and Vegas Pro to animate it.

  • Cool

  • @AnimationsTv3 Thanks.

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