Ok, good job, but a bit too slow-paced for my liking; it was funny in some parts, but again, you spent too much time on some things, and included certain things which didn't need to be in there. Also you could work on audio - voiceovers couldn't hurt in certain parts where the conversations were weak. Overall it was ok.
Very Creative
Sellons 4 years ago
Ok, good job, but a bit too slow-paced for my liking; it was funny in some parts, but again, you spent too much time on some things, and included certain things which didn't need to be in there. Also you could work on audio - voiceovers couldn't hurt in certain parts where the conversations were weak. Overall it was ok.
jperl99 5 years ago
thank you for your comment
OpenHeadProductions 5 years ago