At first I thought it was the voice was Johnny Cash on Rap, Nice and manly. The message is plain and true. Great lyrics. If only the would be thugs would listen. Peace.
Great lyrics man. The reverb on the vocals are a bit thick for the music track. The music track ain't bad, but has too much of that casio portable keyboard sound, and it makes it hard to take the message, and song as serious as ideal. Your rap style is mostly in the pocket, it's corney, But there's a charm to it! you're doin what you can, my friend, and I respect your effort!
At first I thought it was the voice was Johnny Cash on Rap, Nice and manly. The message is plain and true. Great lyrics. If only the would be thugs would listen. Peace.
tmotofga 3 years ago
Great lyrics man. The reverb on the vocals are a bit thick for the music track. The music track ain't bad, but has too much of that casio portable keyboard sound, and it makes it hard to take the message, and song as serious as ideal. Your rap style is mostly in the pocket, it's corney, But there's a charm to it! you're doin what you can, my friend, and I respect your effort!
Love the message. Hope that was constructive.
God bless ya!
machosauceproduction 3 years ago