Look, I really hate giving negative feedback, but this...sucks.
If you want to improve though, you should probably get a capture card and a microphone (you just seemed to be talking while the camera was rolling). Also, spend some time writing a more original and interesting story that shows it wasn't made within 5 minutes of brainstorming.
it was ok. could be a little better
mastermaster10123 3 years ago
you know you can go into theater on halo 3 instead of doing it on forge
8lu3d3ath 3 years ago
Yea guys we need to by a card and take more time wit ta story
randomVIDSweekly 3 years ago
same what lager said :P
HaloVidz1 3 years ago
Look, I really hate giving negative feedback, but this...sucks.
If you want to improve though, you should probably get a capture card and a microphone (you just seemed to be talking while the camera was rolling). Also, spend some time writing a more original and interesting story that shows it wasn't made within 5 minutes of brainstorming.
Wishing you best of luck to your future videos,
Lager
Lager1ta 3 years ago