good stuff!
stay focused and motivated
and do your thing!
g0ddessofwings 2 years ago
hey man good work, i like it
heller166 2 years ago
Thxx :0
jimmylee9 2 years ago
my god.. is this really jimmy? lol
good job! :D
chibone1 2 years ago
it's pretty nice overall @@
but i think it can do a better when nelson is really upset (like change the music i guess?) to make it more emotional and a little bit work on with the cuttings
darkangel0502 2 years ago
cool jimmy XD that was gd :D
JackiiieE172 2 years ago
This has been flagged as spam show
Not bad, just the background music makes it hard to hear what the people are saying.
experat 2 years ago
hey jimbo!
its not bad but:
the background music is louder than the dialogue
the story is quite fragmented, and the chase was... short and effortless.
and yeah, the subtitles could be written better.
still, good job ; )
axdcs1 2 years ago
NICE SHIT MAN
radiohead910 2 years ago
i'm impressed!
willymoonie 2 years ago
AHAHAH
ninetwentyone 2 years ago
it`s pretty good.
but some of the subtitles aren`t grammatically correct.
but overall, pretty good. :)
nathansiu109 2 years ago
very nice jimmy
good job
Runer2009 2 years ago
not bad not bad jim xD
MelitoVisakro 2 years ago
What Alex said, I was like ?!?!?! at parts but it's not bad :o
On a side note, kinda minor: I think you should make your subs start with caps -_-' It looks awkward all in lower case
ComplexElements 2 years ago
niiiiiiiiiiice
7330288 2 years ago
it's not bad but parts of it are a little unrealistic
like how nelson stops chasing after such a short time
seems a little incomplete story wise
squidork 2 years ago
Not bad, interesting idea, but I didn't really understand the story
SneezingRabbit 2 years ago
Well done,
the intro was awesome!
Subtitles are a bit off though
AsteriXx1990 2 years ago
GD stuff
narutoXEva 2 years ago
good shit man!!
jackybuzz 2 years ago
good stuff!
stay focused and motivated
and do your thing!
g0ddessofwings 2 years ago
hey man good work, i like it
heller166 2 years ago
Thxx :0
jimmylee9 2 years ago
my god.. is this really jimmy? lol
good job! :D
chibone1 2 years ago
it's pretty nice overall @@
but i think it can do a better when nelson is really upset (like change the music i guess?) to make it more emotional and a little bit work on with the cuttings
darkangel0502 2 years ago
cool jimmy XD that was gd :D
JackiiieE172 2 years ago
This has been flagged as spam show
Not bad, just the background music makes it hard to hear what the people are saying.
experat 2 years ago
hey jimbo!
its not bad but:
the background music is louder than the dialogue
the story is quite fragmented, and the chase was... short and effortless.
and yeah, the subtitles could be written better.
still, good job ; )
axdcs1 2 years ago
NICE SHIT MAN
radiohead910 2 years ago
i'm impressed!
willymoonie 2 years ago
AHAHAH
ninetwentyone 2 years ago
it`s pretty good.
but some of the subtitles aren`t grammatically correct.
but overall, pretty good. :)
nathansiu109 2 years ago
very nice jimmy
good job
Runer2009 2 years ago
not bad not bad jim xD
MelitoVisakro 2 years ago
What Alex said, I was like ?!?!?! at parts but it's not bad :o
On a side note, kinda minor: I think you should make your subs start with caps -_-' It looks awkward all in lower case
ComplexElements 2 years ago
niiiiiiiiiiice
7330288 2 years ago
it's not bad but parts of it are a little unrealistic
like how nelson stops chasing after such a short time
seems a little incomplete story wise
squidork 2 years ago
Not bad, interesting idea, but I didn't really understand the story
SneezingRabbit 2 years ago
Well done,
the intro was awesome!
Subtitles are a bit off though
AsteriXx1990 2 years ago
GD stuff
narutoXEva 2 years ago
good shit man!!
jackybuzz 2 years ago