@voicesoflostpoets not at all b yung has more energy with his words and he does alot of play on words n alot of emphasis in his speech very strong but this guy was amazing very detailed with his poem n softer(than b yung) gives u time 2 think between lines but luv this 1
who cares about written form...its a slam piece...and even if it wasnt who cares about the written form. lol...why should a poet have to be boxed in to what society would consider a "proper" form of poetry? who cares about society or rules EF IT! Ef all that trys to hold back creativity because it is written that poetry should be written perfectly...=)
This is nice as performance poetry - if it were on paper it would be lacking form, function, enjambed lines would lack the power it contains as a slam piece. Wish I could read these poems in ink to see if one could even call it poetry...
this man is my inspiration in poetry. i was just in the colonie barns and nobles poetry slam in colonie, and i went their with this kind of performance and passion in my head, i didnt win but i had fun
THAT'S THAT HEAT!!!!!!!!! My dude Jorge when IN on this!!!! DAY-um! Shapes and violence!? What!? I'm proud to say I know this young man....that's wussup!
Lovvveeeee ittt
brandyakabmillz 9 months ago
i love guys that do poetry!
jus4theluvofmusic 9 months ago 3
@voicesoflostpoets not at all b yung has more energy with his words and he does alot of play on words n alot of emphasis in his speech very strong but this guy was amazing very detailed with his poem n softer(than b yung) gives u time 2 think between lines but luv this 1
mzcokebottle9823 10 months ago
count ya blessings
rn0988tc 1 year ago
sounds just like b yung
voicesoflostpoets 1 year ago
Fire boy
WORLDCHANGA 1 year ago
why too much like b yung
video tittled ( Knicks Poetry Slam 2009 - B. Yung - 3rd Place)
thislifeofmine 1 year ago
He's dating Alexis Marie. Check out her poetry too. Together untouchable!
jojozzy 1 year ago
who cares about written form...its a slam piece...and even if it wasnt who cares about the written form. lol...why should a poet have to be boxed in to what society would consider a "proper" form of poetry? who cares about society or rules EF IT! Ef all that trys to hold back creativity because it is written that poetry should be written perfectly...=)
this was dope! and i loved it!
krazimami09 1 year ago 3
@krazimami09 Don't knock form. There is just as much freedom in form as in Slam.
SymonJory 1 year ago
omq..tht was sick..
lilmiszaaliyah 1 year ago
weird ending but that shit seemed sick lol
MesiahPoet 1 year ago
@MesiahPoet what is weird about his ending he falls to his knees like he is in a wheelchair like his friend currently is.....
shanita 1 year ago
i just cried a lil
PoeticIntity 1 year ago
that waz the deepest thing i have ever heard in my life. beautiful and touching end of story.
MrAfroninja15 1 year ago
@MrAfroninja15 go listen to B. yung.
HighSchoolSensations 1 year ago
i already have
MrAfroninja15 1 year ago
thats was great good job
des225 2 years ago
yea that was killer amazing
Carlpittbull 2 years ago
awesome!!!!
ladymuziklover 2 years ago
that was soooo great! he got skills freal
sp0ng3b0bg03s 2 years ago
almost dropped a tear...inspirational poet
lookwotisaid 2 years ago
I really liked that
simplylovely17 2 years ago
dude iz dope...he gto knowledge ta rite diz type a poem u can tell he smart
simpleeapoet 2 years ago
Hella Creative......looks like theres a hater down there
ShaDr0pBombs 2 years ago 9
lets hope that was an accident
barnabasshakur 2 years ago
i agree. he is a very talented you man! not because he's my cousin...... he's doin his thang!!!! proccanova, u are a hater!!!
isaisava 2 years ago 3
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This is nice as performance poetry - if it were on paper it would be lacking form, function, enjambed lines would lack the power it contains as a slam piece. Wish I could read these poems in ink to see if one could even call it poetry...
proccanova 2 years ago
its spoken word.
jj11895 2 years ago
this man is my inspiration in poetry. i was just in the colonie barns and nobles poetry slam in colonie, and i went their with this kind of performance and passion in my head, i didnt win but i had fun
Jcam1sfly 2 years ago 4
I'm a current student at the high school that Jorge went to, and his teachers have been raving about him all day! :) Way to go, Jorge!
NSGlanzman 2 years ago 3
that was very interesting...im so proud of him...hope to meet him soon -LC
LostChild2u 2 years ago 2
damn...
CallMeiRo 2 years ago 9
THAT'S THAT HEAT!!!!!!!!! My dude Jorge when IN on this!!!! DAY-um! Shapes and violence!? What!? I'm proud to say I know this young man....that's wussup!
Jawayne
artkid08 2 years ago