wow i relate a dream a memory forever a loosing battle however winning gaining what we doing loosing the feeling obviously its GONE like a darling Klemintine
smoking...best thing in the world for you. Freshens breath, improves health, and when you're parents find out they say "oh darling, we're so proud of you".
you've got some intresting portrayals here, but i think you are definatly capable of doing better. your not feeling the words your saying because your to aware of the camera and what the end product will look like. you have to feel it and let the beat take you. beat. jazz. beat. soul. beat. passion. beat rythmn. beat.
@TheWildStar11 - You are exactly right WildStar. She is good but could be better. Also, ArtChickTV -- a real beatnik would never look into a camera. They knew that would detract from their feeling what they were reading or conveying. Do it again...don't look into the lens. Your poem isn't long either...so memorize it. You will hear the difference. You are pretty good. I like your effort. Listen to WildStar's advice it's very good.
@lexcorona85 true is about real and original as opposed to fake, unlived, imitating, surface, no feeling no expression. beat is expression fo inner intensities and we all know it. not just beat, but art, and goodness. she made okay words but didnt do anything else with it and i wish she had. is denial interesting and heroic to you or something?
it's funny seeing the comments and comparing them to beat junkies and freestylists it stems from the same place. Bless ya for the bill hicks shout out
none of u fuckers are beatnicks lol. If homegirl likes the beatnick shit let her show her respects. The truth is none of u can say if anyone is a beat or not. one thing is obvious, she respects the culture, and shes a talented poet
Quit beatin round the bush, and own up to true Beatnikicity. You have failed us in many ways. we have looked to your wisdom and its not In the ball park.
I love the way you shrug your shoulders (unconsciously and without pretense) while speaking the line "I am alone /and I am not wishing for you" It's the most endearing part of your performance. And it's kinda sexy. :)
(Lolling at the finger snapping) Hehe, very good. I have to say though, that wry little grin at the end gives you away. You have to be deadly serious doncha know. Well done. You're turning out to be quite the Renaissance woman.
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PoetryETrain 2 months ago
I clicked this because you're hot, but I muted it before the video even started playing. No one wants to hear bullshit poetry.
redmarch 3 months ago
wow i relate a dream a memory forever a loosing battle however winning gaining what we doing loosing the feeling obviously its GONE like a darling Klemintine
oakfunkable 4 months ago
Daaaaaahhhhh ¡¡¡
chilokspius 8 months ago
pretty... yet pretentious!!
senseithepornking 9 months ago
Grovie momma
rikkiwon 10 months ago
my beautiful flower, marry me, and together we can be the helix-spiral disintegrating toward that bold horizon..
BlainePistolle 1 year ago
I like you and I would like to see more videos with you in. You could take your clothes off in one if you like...I jest of course.
matrags 1 year ago
smoking...best thing in the world for you. Freshens breath, improves health, and when you're parents find out they say "oh darling, we're so proud of you".
diddymuck 1 year ago
Agreed. *Snap snap snap* Love you, so quit smoking.
KamuiMosir 1 year ago
Hey where did you get the hat? I want one, have a brand name?
Love the clip BTW you ever get into Tom Waits?
regalzack 1 year ago
you've got some intresting portrayals here, but i think you are definatly capable of doing better. your not feeling the words your saying because your to aware of the camera and what the end product will look like. you have to feel it and let the beat take you. beat. jazz. beat. soul. beat. passion. beat rythmn. beat.
beat
TheWildStar11 1 year ago 2
@TheWildStar11 - You are exactly right WildStar. She is good but could be better. Also, ArtChickTV -- a real beatnik would never look into a camera. They knew that would detract from their feeling what they were reading or conveying. Do it again...don't look into the lens. Your poem isn't long either...so memorize it. You will hear the difference. You are pretty good. I like your effort. Listen to WildStar's advice it's very good.
lastrada52 2 months ago
@lexcorona85 true is about real and original as opposed to fake, unlived, imitating, surface, no feeling no expression. beat is expression fo inner intensities and we all know it. not just beat, but art, and goodness. she made okay words but didnt do anything else with it and i wish she had. is denial interesting and heroic to you or something?
tyrannicoystercult 1 year ago
it's funny seeing the comments and comparing them to beat junkies and freestylists it stems from the same place. Bless ya for the bill hicks shout out
samwhooper1 1 year ago
uh, I think you need to immediately watch the Bill Hicks clip on PUT SOME FUCKIN HEART INTO IT!!!!!!!
DocVuDu 1 year ago
no, it play-beatnik, because it has ZERO angst.
it's a cute little Gen-Y (or, like, whatever) interpretation, though
zippy, souless/electronic/definitely-nonbeatnik music at the end, btw *lol*
DocVuDu 1 year ago
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no, it play-beatnik, because it has ZERO angst.
it's a cute little Gen-Y (or, like, whatever) interpretation, though
zippy, souless/electronic/definitely-nonbeatnik music at the end, btw *lol*
DocVuDu 1 year ago
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no, it play-beatnik, because it has ZERO angst.
it's a cute little Gen-Y (or, like, whatever) interpretation, though
zippy, souless/electronic/definitely-nonbeatnik music at the end, btw *lol*
DocVuDu 1 year ago
no, it play-beatnik, because it has ZERO angst.
it's a cute little Gen-Y 9or, like, whatever) interpretation, though
zippy, souless/electronic/definitely-nonbeatnik music at the end, btw *lol*
DocVuDu 1 year ago
I wannalick her
jkhgsdhgdhgjklsdhfgj 1 year ago
You are all scrub brushes! It's Beatniks! Spell it proper, or sip the blue syrup from the toilet bowl you had been born from!
avocadopunk 2 years ago
Hey, Artchick, it's Beat not Beatnick. Only the squares and clueless gossip columnists called 'em beatnicks. They called themselves the Beats!
Idjitz 2 years ago
none of u fuckers are beatnicks lol. If homegirl likes the beatnick shit let her show her respects. The truth is none of u can say if anyone is a beat or not. one thing is obvious, she respects the culture, and shes a talented poet
adonovan702 2 years ago
the beat is the beat. it comes the way it comes. so would the whiners please lighten up on the chick.
acerb45666555 2 years ago
It's "My memory kingdom of you and ME" not "You and I."
kvn8r3k 2 years ago
smoking is cool ;)
windmills20 2 years ago
Quit beatin round the bush, and own up to true Beatnikicity. You have failed us in many ways. we have looked to your wisdom and its not In the ball park.
acdeucee 2 years ago
dig it!
acerb45666555 3 years ago 3
what a fake.
the smoking was over the top btw.
cheapcraze 3 years ago
If you were a true beat you would be a better reader.
problem49 3 years ago
I love the way you shrug your shoulders (unconsciously and without pretense) while speaking the line "I am alone /and I am not wishing for you" It's the most endearing part of your performance. And it's kinda sexy. :)
everywordmeans 3 years ago
Very Nice
EngLitGirl 4 years ago
sweet 5 stars!
rpVerlaine 4 years ago
oh word?
leisuremuffin 4 years ago
I love your hat!
artettina 4 years ago
Yeah, this was howling good! Keep poeting, Poetress. Nice smile at the end. ^_^
StevenErnest 4 years ago
im following you. lol.
jaredknightcom 4 years ago
it was you. heeeeeeeeeeeee............
ArtChickTV 4 years ago
(Lolling at the finger snapping) Hehe, very good. I have to say though, that wry little grin at the end gives you away. You have to be deadly serious doncha know. Well done. You're turning out to be quite the Renaissance woman.
rhythm7a 4 years ago
You can paint and write poetry that's not fare
clubsoda921 4 years ago
lol
ArtChickTV 4 years ago
I forgot your a photographer ha ha ha ha ha!!!! ;)
clubsoda921 4 years ago
Woah, that was like psychedelic. You are one swingin' cat. :-P (Oh, and nice applause, Scott. haha.)
MelioraProductions 4 years ago
*snap* *snap* *snap*
mrpitifulband 4 years ago 2
lol
ArtChickTV 4 years ago