Acting Monologue by Actor Alejandro J Valentin (SuckerPunch)

[RhythmBulzara]

This was nice. Great job!

[hpcurtis0130]

Would it be better if you don't suddenly zoom in?

[firstdct]

you suck



[AlejandroJValentin]

@firstdct Thanks. What exactly suck about it? I need to know to better improve.

[firstdct]

@AlejandroJValentin Well first off I applaud you for accepting negative feedback. But honestly, I didnt believe it. Your performance was okay, but the whole time watching it I was at borderline laughter unfortunately. Too many "hmmm's," and there was alot of softness in your voice throughout the sceen. The soft voice does not fit your stature. The drink from the cup was morbidly loud and never turn away from the camera during a monologue. I think that if

[firstdct]

@firstdct If you were to just close your eyes, and hold the top of your fist to your mouth and tilt your head down to make it look like your stopping yourself from freaking out would help out alot. Good luck and maybe we can give tips to one another...ill post a monologue soon. Any luck with an agent?

[MapaviaRivera]

I need the script! can you help me?

[TheFern91]

This was really well done. Really well. I'm impressed, your skills have increased from your past monologues. Keep on growing.

[AlejandroJValentin]

@TheFern91