OMG OMG Y DID STOP THERE!! I WOULD HAVE STILL FALL FOR MARTH CUZ HE IS HOT! BUT ZELDA AND LINK ARE DESTINED FOR EACH OTHER BUT STILL Y GIVE UP MARTH!!???! U KNOW SHE HAS POWERS Y COULDNT SHE JST KICKED HIS ASS FOR SAYING THAT? IF I WERE THERE I WOULD HAV BEATEN UP MALON THE SLOPPY B**CH
omfg!! i want to punch link in the face right now!!!! i know exactly how zelda feels right now cz a similar thing recently happened to me :( but mine story got better hope her's does too love the story <333333333333333333333333333333
The whole time I wanted to beat Link to death for being such a douche. ZELDA HAS UR BABY STUPID! grrrrrr >< Amazing story btw, can't wait for the next part to come out! :D ^^
OMG ! HOW COULD HE DO THAT TO HER ! I HATE PRINCESS MALON TOO ! B**CH !!
Other then that, I love this part and if I were Zelda, I would have yelled "your baby is still alive !" That prob. would have possibly changed everything !
I love it. It just keeps getting better and better. I can't wait for the next part. You are a amazing writer and I hope this storyline never ends. *-*
Link you basturd malon go fuck yourself Zelda JUST FUCKING TELL HIM
rainmaker271 3 months ago
i lov this show its so addicting how did you learn to make them
martywc1975 6 months ago
LINK YOU F***ING IDIOT! F*** MALON! MALON, GO DIE IN A HOLE!
penguinMycoco 6 months ago
Oh, man. This thing is so addicting. I spent the last few days watching this.
glamourshei 9 months ago
What is the song where it announces the story name and comments?
KingdomheartsLink 10 months ago
What is the song at the beginning of each part? The one announcing the story name and comments about it? Please tell me immediately!
KingdomheartsLink 10 months ago
And Even I Didn't Like Malon When She Was At OOT or WW idk which malon
teeheeFML 10 months ago
THAT DICK!!!! I HATE LINK NOW!!!GRRRRRRR
officalkorra 10 months ago
What the heck, what's wrong wif him?! SCREW HIM(sorry, no offense to anyone! :P)
hahahaha, I love the way you write this, it sounds so poetic xD :)
iluvzelda123 10 months ago
Link.... You douche!
606Dodger 10 months ago
OMG OMG OMG OMG OMFG
HOW COULD YOU LINK?????????
YOU IDIOT!!!!!!!!!!!!!
sorry i'm freaking up
the story ins´t awesome
it is fantastic
can´t wait for the next part
ZeldaFan20101 10 months ago
OMIGOD! I wanna cry because it's such a cliffhanger!!!!!!!! GRAHHH!!! WHY >.>
Btw, I like the Princess Malon idea. She'd be kinda fun to write about, wouldn't she XD
Dwnhottie 10 months ago
BTW U WRITE GREAT STORIES Y DONT U WRITE ABOUT OTHER CHARACTERS! CANT WAIT FOR THE NEXT PART
susie03021 10 months ago
OMG OMG Y DID STOP THERE!! I WOULD HAVE STILL FALL FOR MARTH CUZ HE IS HOT! BUT ZELDA AND LINK ARE DESTINED FOR EACH OTHER BUT STILL Y GIVE UP MARTH!!???! U KNOW SHE HAS POWERS Y COULDNT SHE JST KICKED HIS ASS FOR SAYING THAT? IF I WERE THERE I WOULD HAV BEATEN UP MALON THE SLOPPY B**CH
susie03021 10 months ago
WTF?!!! LINK HOW COULD YOU?!!!!!!!!
zelda should toatally forget about him...
i loved it. ur totally awesome
twilightrealm49 10 months ago
OMG LINK WHAT THE FUJAWUJAPLUBAREUTKNGJJRTG!?!!?!?!?!?!
Sorry, had to get that out.
I feel TERRIBLE FOR ZELDAA. :(
It's amazing how much your writing has improved since you've started this story. Amzing job on part 20! Can't wait for part 21! :P
Oh and, by the way. What was the name of the song that was played at 4:38 ? the second song?
Hope4Kea 11 months ago
What was that?! Link you idiot!
Nice job sorry I have to vent
TheNightskyprincess 11 months ago
@TheNightskyprincess XD hehe your aloud to vent ^_^
xwhyxisxthatxtruex 11 months ago
@xwhyxisxthatxtruex I think i vented on every single one of these lol
TheNightskyprincess 11 months ago
love it keep up the awsome work.
zelink100 11 months ago
:'( link saved her how many times?
Alecsmith52 11 months ago
WOW LINK!! SOMEONE'S A FUCKING DOUCHE BAG! I SWEAR, I WILL KICK YOUR ASS! Nice job, I loved it! I hope someone dies.....(*coughLINKcough*)
gerbilsrock55 11 months ago
@gerbilsrock55 - so do i
TEE HEE
twilightrealm49 10 months ago
omfg!! i want to punch link in the face right now!!!! i know exactly how zelda feels right now cz a similar thing recently happened to me :( but mine story got better hope her's does too love the story <333333333333333333333333333333
lissamariexoxo 11 months ago
@lissamariexoxo I'm glad your story got better <33 :)
xwhyxisxthatxtruex 11 months ago
@xwhyxisxthatxtruex thanx :)
lissamariexoxo 11 months ago
The whole time I wanted to beat Link to death for being such a douche. ZELDA HAS UR BABY STUPID! grrrrrr >< Amazing story btw, can't wait for the next part to come out! :D ^^
DruidsGoPewPew 11 months ago
OMG OMG OMG !!!!!!!!!
LINK IS LIKE TURNING INTO MARTH !!!
OMG ! HOW COULD HE DO THAT TO HER ! I HATE PRINCESS MALON TOO ! B**CH !!
Other then that, I love this part and if I were Zelda, I would have yelled "your baby is still alive !" That prob. would have possibly changed everything !
hyrulefield1 11 months ago 2
@hyrulefield1 Hehee yeah it would have done ;) XD Thank you for watching ! :)
xwhyxisxthatxtruex 11 months ago
@hyrulefield1 That would have changed him Competly and Immedietly!
But what would Malon say? Hmmm...
pokie4life 6 months ago
@pokie4life probably that he will die for something, just cause she's like that :P
hyrulefield1 6 months ago
that was GREAT ! i loved it ^ ^ you right great storys
princessofhearts141 11 months ago
im sure he has good reason... or its not the real link........
wurple14 11 months ago
ps i would have yelled i have your baby !! and let tear spill
linkalover1 11 months ago
o my god its out
linkalover1 11 months ago
@linkalover1 Yupp sorry it took so long XD
xwhyxisxthatxtruex 11 months ago
@xwhyxisxthatxtruex np :D
linkalover1 11 months ago
I love it. It just keeps getting better and better. I can't wait for the next part. You are a amazing writer and I hope this storyline never ends. *-*
-A new fan, LinkLover913
LinkLover913 11 months ago
@LinkLover913 Hehee why thank you im always glad to have a new fan tehee ! XD <3
xwhyxisxthatxtruex 11 months ago
Awesome!!!! I love it!!!! :D
zelda1fiction1child 11 months ago
WHY IS LINK SUCH A ASS HOLE!?!?!?
I'm so mad at him right now! Awesome story btw!!
colorme321 11 months ago
:D Sooooo AWESOME!!!!!
colorme321 11 months ago