Wow, her favorite song is Lovebug, by the Joe, Nick, and Kevin Jonas, aka the Jonas brothers who have a mom named Denise and a little brother named Frankie, and she didn't realize she was talking to them. Crazyness. Makes for an interesting story though, I gotta admit.
CRAP! i wasnt done comenting and i pressed enter but i realized my mouse was in the box so it posted and im like SHIT!lol!! anywasy i meant to say, RACHEL IS A RETARD! and i loved it! good job!
oohh haah i didnt read the intro! ooops! and not u, the character! if her favorite song was lovebug, how did she not notice she was in the house of the jonas brothers? lol
no she knew who they were but she didnt want to scare them off by screaming...not the greatest first impression lol she was screaming on the inside... in chapter 2 you'll see that she knows its them..i just have to write and post it :)
i think im gonna post tomorrow cause i havent written chapter 2 even tho its in my head but im sick and my head feels like its gonna explode and im about to fall asleep cause i only got like 3 hours of sleep lol but i will post 1 or 2 chapters by tomorrow night for sure!!!
I dont think Im going to write and post Chapter 2 tonight because my head feels like its going to explode and I dont think I can do the Chapter when I can't even think lol so maybe tonight or tomorrow so keep an eye out, Thanx!
Thanks so much for commenting I haven't written chapter 2 yet i probably will after school tomorrow but I know what is going to happen, the story is all planned out. It just depends, with how lazy and busy I am, how often I post.
Wow, her favorite song is Lovebug, by the Joe, Nick, and Kevin Jonas, aka the Jonas brothers who have a mom named Denise and a little brother named Frankie, and she didn't realize she was talking to them. Crazyness. Makes for an interesting story though, I gotta admit.
hoopsgirl09 1 year ago
my fave songb is SOS
ea79844 1 year ago
wasn't boring at all, more of a refresher. :]]
iROCKkj 2 years ago
thanks :p
depplove23 2 years ago
OMG YOUR A PERSON!!!
jakejoshandbecca 3 years ago
what?
depplove23 3 years ago
its really good , i will read more !
LittleAnnStar 3 years ago
I can't pick a favorite!! They are all good but if i had too like my life depened on it...A little bit longer definitely!
Good story WAY better than mine lol
Cutepiemegan101 3 years ago
=D Thanks.
Have you read the other chapters?
depplove23 3 years ago
I'm workimng on it almost up to your most recent. I'm at the truth or dare chapter lol interesting...very interesting.
Cutepiemegan101 3 years ago
Oh you have a ways to go...I have up to Chapter 29 posted and some chapters are really long, 1 or 2 of them have 5 parts.
And I'll post at least Chapter 30 by Monday.
I hope you like it and make sure to comment on whatever chapters you like, or all of them. I like to see what people think & it makes me happy. =D
depplove23 3 years ago
The beginning is the most important part of work...hell yea!! especially if its Rachel's STORY!!:)))
iLOVEtheROMANTiCjB 3 years ago
im glad youre back i missed your sense of humor...you make me laugh XD
depplove23 3 years ago
CRAP! i wasnt done comenting and i pressed enter but i realized my mouse was in the box so it posted and im like SHIT!lol!! anywasy i meant to say, RACHEL IS A RETARD! and i loved it! good job!
-lindsay
iluvnickjonas210 3 years ago
yes in the intro it says the boys are the same as in real life but they moved to michigan....and why am I a retard?
depplove23 3 years ago
oohh haah i didnt read the intro! ooops! and not u, the character! if her favorite song was lovebug, how did she not notice she was in the house of the jonas brothers? lol
-lindsay
iluvnickjonas210 3 years ago
no she knew who they were but she didnt want to scare them off by screaming...not the greatest first impression lol she was screaming on the inside... in chapter 2 you'll see that she knows its them..i just have to write and post it :)
depplove23 3 years ago
OOOOOOOOOOHHHHHHHHH! well how was i spposed to know that! haha!! i hope u post soon!
-lindsay
iluvnickjonas210 3 years ago
i think im gonna post tomorrow cause i havent written chapter 2 even tho its in my head but im sick and my head feels like its gonna explode and im about to fall asleep cause i only got like 3 hours of sleep lol but i will post 1 or 2 chapters by tomorrow night for sure!!!
depplove23 3 years ago
YAY! *does little happy dance*! hehe! cant wait!!
ugghh why is evry one getting sick????? like 10 people in my class were sick this week including my bff!!!!! stupid sickness :P
-lindsay
iluvnickjonas210 3 years ago
oh i know my entire family and everyone at school is sick too it sucks monkey butt
depplove23 3 years ago
haha it does!!\you soo got monkey butt from hannah montana!! LOL!! haha that episode was funny!
-lindsay
iluvnickjonas210 3 years ago
really i didnt know they said that i just say it all the time and my sister tells me im an idiot lol she mean :(
depplove23 3 years ago
oohh ok! my brother tells me im an idiot too!!!! hes mean too!! probly like 10000000 times meaner then ur sis! lol
-lindsay
iluvnickjonas210 3 years ago
that was not broing!! lol! aaww frankie is soo cute!!
wait,,if she is listening to lovebug then the jonas brothers are famous and RACHEL I RETARD!!
iluvnickjonas210 3 years ago
I dont think Im going to write and post Chapter 2 tonight because my head feels like its going to explode and I dont think I can do the Chapter when I can't even think lol so maybe tonight or tomorrow so keep an eye out, Thanx!
depplove23 3 years ago
Thanks so much for commenting I haven't written chapter 2 yet i probably will after school tomorrow but I know what is going to happen, the story is all planned out. It just depends, with how lazy and busy I am, how often I post.
depplove23 3 years ago
this story is the BOMB AND IT ROCKS MY SOCKS!!! And my favorite song off A Little Bit Longer is prolly Sorry!!
faithgirl62 3 years ago
that was good. Post more soon :)
hmm...my favorite song from the new JB album is pushin' me away
iluvjb4everandever 3 years ago