Also- I love how you splice together songs, from the epic trailer music the u2s (?) song during the credits. All the parts just work together, and I don't know how you do it. I was going to do something like that with fallen. I just have yet to work up the courage.
I just hope you know that every time you put out a vid it makes my week. XD
- and Lex's 'keep a close eye on her' and his eyes focusing forward with a screeching sound.
I am looking forward to this so so much. guh! I want this so baaaddd. It's so much awesome I can't even! and perfectly titled too- both Lex and Davis dealing with quite different beasts, Lex the beast in his heart/soul and Davis the beast in his body, and Chloe able to bring out parts of them that they might not have found before. This is some truly epic-conflict! right there. *faints*
I like to think the part of her that cares still feels a little sorry for Lex in addition to not wanting to marry him.
He falls, and Davis is shocked and tearful that he attacked another person as himself... and then they grab each other and run. I love that handhold cut! Can I ask what's it from?
Chloe and Davis, on their own, happy to be together and relieved, and then flash to Chloe being tested in the lab....
Oh really? Okey, I was gonna watch it if it was a movie, but for my health- I better not eatch it the whole way through. I think you know how I feel about them. But the sleeves work. The guys sleeve looks like Davis's beast jacket. And Chloe's coat is her coat. hee! XD Thanks for letting me know!
A past chlexy relationship, with kissing and some sexiness, and Chloe in her wedding dress, kind of numb /every horrible thing I did was because I truly love you/- oh lex, I don't know whether to run screaming or pat you on the head.
I love this wedding scene lots. Maybe Lex coerced Chloe into marrying him- we don't know- but either way, he does the woobie eyes and puts a ring on her finger and then Chloe yells /no/ just as Davis hits him/ puts him out of action for a little while.
flash forward, Chloe restrained in a chair- then a flash forward to scene of them where she turns over Davis lying bloodied and half dead...
Chloe's/I love you too much/ and the tear falling with the main credits. omfg. The way you focused on the tear- I just noticed the reflection of Chloe's face in the tear- don't know if that was in the original, very pretty. A scene with the three of them is my DREAM.
Also the lyrics /there must be some way back/- Chloe healing Davis. and then...Lex?
/What about Lex, I mean, if we just told him what was going on?/ Wow. Chloe was friends with Lex, and trying to help Davis, lead him right into Lex's grip? It explains why she so distraught and angry at Lex now. She trusted him.
/Why have you been avoiding me Chloe?/ She's freaked out and backing away because he showed up in her room... and Lex's look there -just a slow pan down of the eyes, a little bit lecherous and a little bit clinical. Matching backgrounds!
Then Lex's dream, it appears he got caught by Davis instead. Davis being scary and bamf because he's all tied up to a pole! That works so well, laid out like the original beast scene, only far more awesome character-wise. Davis holding a hostage that was also his and Chloe's tormentor must be far harder for the protective human side, not to mention the easily erratic Doomsday. Then Lex wakes up from his nightmare... and Davis is facing his, in the form of one hulking doomsday.
Seems as if- I'm gonna speculate here, she got out but Davis didn't and she's trying to find the facility again and him,.
I like Lex going back to playing pool too, a symbolic contrast with how he's playing with a frightened Chloe and Davis going to leave everything behind, Lex's eyes zooming in and his /I want her back/- attempting to lure her back with hot Davis clones, is he? and then hiding the real one?
/I don't know what my life is without her/ You caught the perfect moment, Chloe's slightly unnerved look and Lex's stare.
"Lex, I know ... If you hurt my friend there will be a consequence and you're looking at her." Oh Chloe, maybe not the best thing to say to a semi-obsessed Lex. hehe.
And then the way he just goes, Chloe will you marry me? Half joking, half serious with the body language and sound you put in) and she storms off? GAH!
The both of them passionately kissing and Lex throwing his glass of something into the fire. /becomes his obsession/ ( love the separate text effects you did for that word.
HEE! All that I love is canon here. A formidable foe fixating on Chloe and then she has Davis? Check. Lex falling for her makes so much more sense, because she's on the same quest for truth that he is in many ways- she's a strong woman who loves someone who considers himself a monster as well, though that's biological.
The manip was flawless. Lex outside the cage, Davis in,getting more distraught and doomed out. He isn't buying it, cause he charges at Lex, breaks the glass, sends him skittering over the floor so she can get out. Run Chloe run! And Lex chases her!
I love how you get all trailery with the text /the subject of his research/ the flashes forward and back- Lex trying to get information out of Chloe, tailing Chloe and Davis at the fortress and their shock /Lex, are you trying to scare me?/
/I am the villain of the story./ Lex watches Chloe when she's sleeping and says this? I think in many ways, he makes a much better villain than Tess because you get emotionally invested in him, he has some real moments of horror in about what he's becoming. The contrast is stark.
That really is brought out as Chloe is trying to get out of there, and Lex grabs her by the shoulders- telling Davis he knows how much he cares about her and he'll take care of her.... WOW.
Chloe wants to get out though, and not alone. My favorite audio visual cut is Chloe putting her hand up to Davis in the cage and telling him that they have to get out of there.
That clip of Lex watching Chloe strung up in the cot and experimented on is chilling. I love your pan to the thousands of clones- which we later find out the details about. HOT DAVIS IN INCUBATION TANKS! WAI! YOU USED STARKILLER FOOTAGE! XD XD
It's intimate in a way, Chloe and Davis locked in the same facility, going through similar horrors and they're eventually going to have to meet.
Then there's the 'keep them isolated', Davis getting tortured in the cage, Chloe strapped to a hospital bed being scanned with the Kryptonite. The way you pair that with 'Lex's 'I have always loved you? Majorly creepy! XD Although, I guess to him it makes sense- he's trying to cure her of her infection and potential madness.
Reporter Chloe starting to dig herself in deep with finding out about meteor experimentation and then Lex, half in love with her already, wondering how soon she will know everything.
Just perfectly matched with Lex walking down the hall a la Dark Prince. Then both Chloe and Davis getting experimented on- the close-up on Chloe's scared, widened eyes on the experiment table and what she sees and a body that could be Davis immersed in green Kryptonite with Lex looking on, half-horrified.
I have to say, this is like an inner fangirl collision.
As if one of my favorite Chlex fics ever had Davis (instead of Clark) and a chance for both Davis and Lex to have moments that show off their dramatic chops.
Voiceovers. I adore the voiceovers. "The only clue I have is a little lab called 33.1" and Lex's "Is this the day when she sees who I really am?"Chloe's' the type of girl who could manage to get herself in on purpose.
@Operaghost74 33.1 ist bzw war eine Ebene in Luthorcorp in der Experimente an den Meteroitenfreaks später auch an Clark durchgeführt wurden. Wie Bielefeld gabs die angeblich nie, zumindest offiziell ;-) Ich denke da ist durchzublicken :-D
Jetzt muss ich nur noch rausfinden ob ich wie beim letzten Mal Musikvideos mache oder ähnlich wie beim Trailer mit textloser Musik arbeite..
@Annybodys Danke für die Info. Ich werde immer nachfragen, wenn ich was nicht verstehe ;-)
Musikvideos oder textlose Musik? Hmm .. Vielleicht eine Mischung aus beidem? Wenn du *sehr* viele Voiceovers hast, finde ich textlos ja fast besser, das lenkt dann nicht so davon ab.
Thisisthebestthingever. I need to wordpad my comment so much. This is by far one of the most intricate things you've ever done. so good.
Lex/Chloe/Davis? wowo. This is far more interesting, what with Lex and his obsession and cloned davis's.... I AM JUST NOT COHERANT NOW OMG. This is my ot3.
and that shot in the credits where chloe's tear lands on Davis's forehead. guuhh!
Omg, that WAS BeaUtiFul ;D!!! that's such a better story than what sv originally made ;) & so better 4 chlavis! johnny saw it & just proclaimed your story is far better than his cause u +ed more emotion & drama here 8-)!!! O u did FanTasTic!!!
WOW! WoW! And double wow. That is absolutouly amazing! This is such a great idea and that trailer was just plain awesome! I just love a Lex/Chloe/Davis love triangle and having Chlavis meet in a 33.1 facility where Lex falls in love with her too, just OMG! I can't wait to see this!
really great job...congrats!!!
chloemack 11 months ago
Also- I love how you splice together songs, from the epic trailer music the u2s (?) song during the credits. All the parts just work together, and I don't know how you do it. I was going to do something like that with fallen. I just have yet to work up the courage.
I just hope you know that every time you put out a vid it makes my week. XD
vagrantdream13 1 year ago
- and Lex's 'keep a close eye on her' and his eyes focusing forward with a screeching sound.
I am looking forward to this so so much. guh! I want this so baaaddd. It's so much awesome I can't even! and perfectly titled too- both Lex and Davis dealing with quite different beasts, Lex the beast in his heart/soul and Davis the beast in his body, and Chloe able to bring out parts of them that they might not have found before. This is some truly epic-conflict! right there. *faints*
vagrantdream13 1 year ago
I like to think the part of her that cares still feels a little sorry for Lex in addition to not wanting to marry him.
He falls, and Davis is shocked and tearful that he attacked another person as himself... and then they grab each other and run. I love that handhold cut! Can I ask what's it from?
Chloe and Davis, on their own, happy to be together and relieved, and then flash to Chloe being tested in the lab....
vagrantdream13 1 year ago
@vagrantdream13 It's from season 9, a Chlollie scene in Checkmate around minute 39
Annybodys 1 year ago
@Annybodys
Oh really? Okey, I was gonna watch it if it was a movie, but for my health- I better not eatch it the whole way through. I think you know how I feel about them. But the sleeves work. The guys sleeve looks like Davis's beast jacket. And Chloe's coat is her coat. hee! XD Thanks for letting me know!
vagrantdream13 1 year ago
A past chlexy relationship, with kissing and some sexiness, and Chloe in her wedding dress, kind of numb /every horrible thing I did was because I truly love you/- oh lex, I don't know whether to run screaming or pat you on the head.
I love this wedding scene lots. Maybe Lex coerced Chloe into marrying him- we don't know- but either way, he does the woobie eyes and puts a ring on her finger and then Chloe yells /no/ just as Davis hits him/ puts him out of action for a little while.
vagrantdream13 1 year ago
She's saving him, even after all that has happened, or maybe that was when his obsession started.
/Only love/ Chlavis! alley kissage. HEE! Lex being confronted and very scared of someone, maybe Davis?
Davis holding vigil outside of Chloe's place as she calls Lex and tells him she's some kind of meteor freak. Davis gets knocked out by a thug.
vagrantdream13 1 year ago
flash forward, Chloe restrained in a chair- then a flash forward to scene of them where she turns over Davis lying bloodied and half dead...
Chloe's/I love you too much/ and the tear falling with the main credits. omfg. The way you focused on the tear- I just noticed the reflection of Chloe's face in the tear- don't know if that was in the original, very pretty. A scene with the three of them is my DREAM.
Also the lyrics /there must be some way back/- Chloe healing Davis. and then...Lex?
vagrantdream13 1 year ago
/What about Lex, I mean, if we just told him what was going on?/ Wow. Chloe was friends with Lex, and trying to help Davis, lead him right into Lex's grip? It explains why she so distraught and angry at Lex now. She trusted him.
/Why have you been avoiding me Chloe?/ She's freaked out and backing away because he showed up in her room... and Lex's look there -just a slow pan down of the eyes, a little bit lecherous and a little bit clinical. Matching backgrounds!
vagrantdream13 1 year ago
Then Lex's dream, it appears he got caught by Davis instead. Davis being scary and bamf because he's all tied up to a pole! That works so well, laid out like the original beast scene, only far more awesome character-wise. Davis holding a hostage that was also his and Chloe's tormentor must be far harder for the protective human side, not to mention the easily erratic Doomsday. Then Lex wakes up from his nightmare... and Davis is facing his, in the form of one hulking doomsday.
vagrantdream13 1 year ago
Seems as if- I'm gonna speculate here, she got out but Davis didn't and she's trying to find the facility again and him,.
I like Lex going back to playing pool too, a symbolic contrast with how he's playing with a frightened Chloe and Davis going to leave everything behind, Lex's eyes zooming in and his /I want her back/- attempting to lure her back with hot Davis clones, is he? and then hiding the real one?
vagrantdream13 1 year ago
/I don't know what my life is without her/ You caught the perfect moment, Chloe's slightly unnerved look and Lex's stare.
"Lex, I know ... If you hurt my friend there will be a consequence and you're looking at her." Oh Chloe, maybe not the best thing to say to a semi-obsessed Lex. hehe.
And then the way he just goes, Chloe will you marry me? Half joking, half serious with the body language and sound you put in) and she storms off? GAH!
vagrantdream13 1 year ago
The both of them passionately kissing and Lex throwing his glass of something into the fire. /becomes his obsession/ ( love the separate text effects you did for that word.
HEE! All that I love is canon here. A formidable foe fixating on Chloe and then she has Davis? Check. Lex falling for her makes so much more sense, because she's on the same quest for truth that he is in many ways- she's a strong woman who loves someone who considers himself a monster as well, though that's biological.
vagrantdream13 1 year ago
The manip was flawless. Lex outside the cage, Davis in,getting more distraught and doomed out. He isn't buying it, cause he charges at Lex, breaks the glass, sends him skittering over the floor so she can get out. Run Chloe run! And Lex chases her!
I love how you get all trailery with the text /the subject of his research/ the flashes forward and back- Lex trying to get information out of Chloe, tailing Chloe and Davis at the fortress and their shock /Lex, are you trying to scare me?/
vagrantdream13 1 year ago
/I am the villain of the story./ Lex watches Chloe when she's sleeping and says this? I think in many ways, he makes a much better villain than Tess because you get emotionally invested in him, he has some real moments of horror in about what he's becoming. The contrast is stark.
That really is brought out as Chloe is trying to get out of there, and Lex grabs her by the shoulders- telling Davis he knows how much he cares about her and he'll take care of her.... WOW.
vagrantdream13 1 year ago
Chloe wants to get out though, and not alone. My favorite audio visual cut is Chloe putting her hand up to Davis in the cage and telling him that they have to get out of there.
That clip of Lex watching Chloe strung up in the cot and experimented on is chilling. I love your pan to the thousands of clones- which we later find out the details about. HOT DAVIS IN INCUBATION TANKS! WAI! YOU USED STARKILLER FOOTAGE! XD XD
vagrantdream13 1 year ago
It's intimate in a way, Chloe and Davis locked in the same facility, going through similar horrors and they're eventually going to have to meet.
Then there's the 'keep them isolated', Davis getting tortured in the cage, Chloe strapped to a hospital bed being scanned with the Kryptonite. The way you pair that with 'Lex's 'I have always loved you? Majorly creepy! XD Although, I guess to him it makes sense- he's trying to cure her of her infection and potential madness.
vagrantdream13 1 year ago
Reporter Chloe starting to dig herself in deep with finding out about meteor experimentation and then Lex, half in love with her already, wondering how soon she will know everything.
Just perfectly matched with Lex walking down the hall a la Dark Prince. Then both Chloe and Davis getting experimented on- the close-up on Chloe's scared, widened eyes on the experiment table and what she sees and a body that could be Davis immersed in green Kryptonite with Lex looking on, half-horrified.
vagrantdream13 1 year ago
I have to say, this is like an inner fangirl collision.
As if one of my favorite Chlex fics ever had Davis (instead of Clark) and a chance for both Davis and Lex to have moments that show off their dramatic chops.
Voiceovers. I adore the voiceovers. "The only clue I have is a little lab called 33.1" and Lex's "Is this the day when she sees who I really am?"Chloe's' the type of girl who could manage to get herself in on purpose.
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vagrantdream13 1 year ago
Eine Dreiecksgeschichte, klingt ja schon mal gut. Und mit Lex *gnihihi*.
Mal sehen, ob ich da werde folgen können ohne Hintergrundwissen. Was "33" ist weiß ich z. B. schon mal nicht.
Super geschnitten. Und U2 ist ja sowieso immer ein Plus ;-)
Operaghost74 1 year ago
@Operaghost74 33.1 ist bzw war eine Ebene in Luthorcorp in der Experimente an den Meteroitenfreaks später auch an Clark durchgeführt wurden. Wie Bielefeld gabs die angeblich nie, zumindest offiziell ;-) Ich denke da ist durchzublicken :-D
Jetzt muss ich nur noch rausfinden ob ich wie beim letzten Mal Musikvideos mache oder ähnlich wie beim Trailer mit textloser Musik arbeite..
Annybodys 1 year ago
@Annybodys Danke für die Info. Ich werde immer nachfragen, wenn ich was nicht verstehe ;-)
Musikvideos oder textlose Musik? Hmm .. Vielleicht eine Mischung aus beidem? Wenn du *sehr* viele Voiceovers hast, finde ich textlos ja fast besser, das lenkt dann nicht so davon ab.
Operaghost74 1 year ago
Love it :)
winchestersgal 1 year ago
Thisisthebestthingever. I need to wordpad my comment so much. This is by far one of the most intricate things you've ever done. so good.
Lex/Chloe/Davis? wowo. This is far more interesting, what with Lex and his obsession and cloned davis's.... I AM JUST NOT COHERANT NOW OMG. This is my ot3.
and that shot in the credits where chloe's tear lands on Davis's forehead. guuhh!
vagrantdream13 1 year ago
@vagrantdream13 It was your idea with Chloe's tear and Davis on Prey that I used for this ;-)
Thank you so much, I hope I will not dissappoint you.
Now I have to find out if I'm going to vid to music with lyrics or pure instrumentals.
Annybodys 1 year ago
Woua Wonderful Vid
Love This Video Best Couple
Awesome 10/10 Fav:-)
davisbloom41 1 year ago
i love 1:08 to 1:16 the best. it just felt epic! but honestly, i love the whole freakin thing.
GTWarriors 1 year ago
ahh chloe = kick ass
clavis= only the fckin best couple in history.
GTWarriors 1 year ago
AMAZING!!
TheiTaz 1 year ago
Omg, that WAS BeaUtiFul ;D!!! that's such a better story than what sv originally made ;) & so better 4 chlavis! johnny saw it & just proclaimed your story is far better than his cause u +ed more emotion & drama here 8-)!!! O u did FanTasTic!!!
ilovejohnhuntly 1 year ago
This? This moved me to tears. Chlex. Chlavis are so freaking awesome.
MrsWitwer 1 year ago
WOW! WoW! And double wow. That is absolutouly amazing! This is such a great idea and that trailer was just plain awesome! I just love a Lex/Chloe/Davis love triangle and having Chlavis meet in a 33.1 facility where Lex falls in love with her too, just OMG! I can't wait to see this!
rosel3 1 year ago
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rosel3 1 year ago
Oh. My God. That was amazing. A Davis/Chloe/Lex triangle... if only the writers had thought of that!!!
xOjacobblackOx4545 1 year ago
holy shyt!!! that was freaking amazing!!! bestest trailer ever!!!!! daammnnn i love it!!!
GTWarriors 1 year ago